Heavenly Witch God

Three cards are discarded. . . Another pig's foot whose life experience remains a mystery. . .

[Long-term post] "Tiandao Wushen" needs the Celestial Master to correct typos. This book was written strictly according to the outline during the creation process. Due to my limited energy, there will inevitably be errors in writing. You are welcome to leave a comment here or remind me in the form of this chapter in the chapter where typos appear, and correct the writing and typos so that I can make revisions. Xiaoyou is extremely grateful for this.

When I read the introduction, I thought it was a bit cumbersome, but when I read this novel, I unexpectedly found it to be very well written!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. Enter the pit.

Recommended by a colleague. On first reading, the writing was quite good, but I fell apart in the first chapter. Being too impatient and trying to instill the background into the readers has caused a huge sense of dissonance. Just imagine how in reality the host could seriously introduce absurd words such as "The Age of Dharma", "Wizards Abandoned the World to Search for Heaven", and "Wizards Return" on a TV show? Even if this is said by an organization and the host is just paraphrasing it, when have we ever seen the news mention "rumors" spread by an organization? It would be much more natural if it were changed to some imaginary post that we saw while surfing the Internet on our mobile phone. The old scholar's words about "reiki" and "heaven" are also too fake and can be deleted completely. The knowledge of the witch god can be changed to be obtained by searching after the protagonist sees the post, without affecting the writing. I read the next few chapters one after another, and I felt that there was a lack of coherent clues between chapters. The transitions were abrupt and the rhythm was not very tight. After reading it for a long time, I didn't know what the protagonist wanted to do. Do you want to find out your life experience? Or looking for the secret of the two copper doors? Or maybe it has something to do with the return of the Universe Shrinking Wizard? The protagonist climbed Mount Tai, the protagonist picked up beads, the protagonist met the Lin family and his son, the protagonist knew that Lin Rong was dead, the protagonist was targeted by the Chu family... There were too many clues, too confusing, not fresh, and it failed to attract my interest. It may be a bit of a blow to the author, but I see that other readers have responded well and they don't seem to care about it. Maybe my taste is too biased? The author doesn't need to worry too much. If you think these opinions have some reference value, that would be great.

It has been updated continuously for 50 days, and it has already passed 100 chapters.

The novel is very interesting, but it's not very long~ Please update it as soon as possible, it's a bit unsatisfying~.

Phew, reading 15 chapters in one go is not enough.

To be honest, the writing is really not bad. It has the author's own thoughts, not deliberately, not a novice. I quite like it🤭

When you are struggling, you don't want to struggle with the plot. Come on, author, I will persevere and at the same time hope that your plot will become more and more exciting. I don't want to be weird, just beautiful.

I have been following the article silently for several days, but as I don't like to leave comments, I mustered up the courage to leave a comment to show that I have been here.

I have read countless supernatural novels, and this one is quite interesting. The plot and characters are quite innovative, please encourage the author. I will keep following up and hope he can continue to maintain this high level.

I've read ten chapters and it's quite to my liking. I've ordered them all.