Start with Tongfu

Sure enough, my previous evaluation was good. Every author who deliberately slows down the pace will be an appendix eunuch. Too much delay will make readers give up. The author just wants to gain money by using more words, but it will be unfinished if there are too few people.

In fact, the author's writing is quite good, but he was misled by the comments. He wanted to write better, but the result was not good enough. If he had written according to the original writing, although it would not be very good, it would not lead to such a result...

Why is Linghu Chong not dead yet? This piece of trash betrayed his master and his wife. Ren Yingying was so cruel when he killed people but he said he was innocent. His master killed one or two people and then he betrayed his master.

A rare good book, full of memories, perfectly presented by Tong Xiangyu and Bai Zhantang, with built-in sound effects. It's completely different from a routine article. It can be seen that the author is very careful when writing it. Come on, this is rare, don't stop updating!

I have been looking for Tongfu's novel 🤭 and finally found a good one today. Good luck to the author.

Pig's trotters have no conscience and are a white-eyed wolf. The uncles and aunts in the town raised him for seven or eight years. After he learned martial arts, he ran away without saying hello to anyone. The uncles and aunties were looking for him for half a month. He came back ten years later. Not even visiting the uncles and aunties, he jumped into a restaurant and worked as a waiter. Is it so interesting to get involved in the plot? The plot wouldn't develop without you?

This book is just for dawdling. The pig's feet follow the TV series completely. What's the point of writing a novel like yours?

I feel poisonous when I see Sunflower's acupuncture skills. After 10 years in the world, I may not be able to learn the superb acupoint skills, but I can't learn some simple acupoint skills? ? In the world of martial arts, who can't master acupuncture skills as long as they have internal strength? Besides, most of the exquisite swordsmanship involves stabbing the enemy's acupuncture points. How could it be possible that they can't simply tap acupoints?

From the third-rate, second-rate, first-rate, super first-rate, top, innate master, grand master, this kind of novice setting is disgusting. First of all, this stream itself depends on the world itself. A first-rate with low martial arts, how big is the gap between a first-rate with high martial arts? Then, what the hell is that ultimate master? ? ? Let me set it up First of all, the world itself is divided into third-rate, second-rate, and first-rate. You don't want to add any peak in the middle. At most, it can be divided into ordinary and expert. For example, this person is an expert in the first-rate, and then add a top expert. Of course, there are hidden peerless masters in the world who are not in the world. Then, martial arts is divided into innate skills, which are acquired, and small achievements, great achievements, and perfections are added the day after tomorrow, which correspond to entering the palace, perfecting one's skills, and being a master. Finally, it corresponds to Zhang Sanfeng. After that, just go directly to Wu, like Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty, Fengyun, Grandmaster, Shattering the Void, and finally directly to Chaowu, yes, Chaowu, because I don't think it can be Gaowu that can reset the world chaos at every turn.

When watching all the fanfic protagonists in Wulin Gaiden, I always feel that I can't fit in and don't interact much with other people. I always feel that the protagonist is always in a detached world. So I suggest you not to travel with memories, your martial arts skills should not be too high, the protagonist should have shortcomings, and interact with other people frequently. Only this kind of novel can be interesting. Don't be like other novels where the protagonist knows what is going on and always watches the fun and waits until the incident is over to show up.

I have been reading novels for ten years. I rarely review novels. I have to say, this book is great. I thought I was immune to all poisons. As a result, all his ten-year skills were destroyed in one move. Or maybe its poison is just right for me. Others may not be poisonous, or it may be quite interesting to watch. Anyway, I was addicted to drugs. Let's go read horror novels first to refresh ourselves.

The protagonist always gives dozens of taels of silver to shopkeeper Tong. Haha, you are a little handyman, okay?

When I saw the introduction, I didn't want to read it. When there was no system, I begged my grandfather to sue my grandma. When the system came, I scolded my ancestors. I don't even know what I am. Life is a waste.

Seeing that Uncle Jiu said that he is a junior in his twenties, I would like to ask the author whether the protagonist has lived in so many worlds in vain? Especially in the world of Linghu Chong

After reading some, I personally feel that the main character cannot be established. The plot of Tongfu Inn is better. When I get to the dungeon plot, I just follow the plot. Why not read the original work? It is both serious and immediate. It is obvious that it is easy to do nothing, but I see all kinds of tragic deaths of innocent people in the dungeon. After the people are dead, I come out to show off and slap in the face. It is fine if I have an agenda, but I don't have any intention. It hurts others and does not benefit myself.

After reading the first one, I didn't say it was poisonous, but that modern people's thoughts are so dangerous. You should be prepared to kill people whenever you travel through time. Forcibly forcing oneself to kill someone is a waste of education for a benevolent person. Small evildoers were put into labor reform. The death penalty is the only punishment for serious evil.

I jumped to read the previous copy of Tongfu and Longmen Inn. The whole story is copied from the plot, and the original plot and lines from the TV and movie are copied completely. Such works really cannot be regarded as qualified novels. Do I need to read your novel for the original plot? I don't have anything of my own at all, but I'm really convinced that I can publish such a book with confidence...

There hasn't been an update for so many days, eunuch? ? ?

The world of Wulin Gaiden is actually quite dangerous. In the later period, the Space and Time Management Bureau appeared.

After reading more than 40 chapters, I don't know what the author wants to express. The protagonist has no purpose and is just a plot. He has no distinct personality and the text is mixed.

To be honest, after watching Wulin Gaiden so many times, I still don't understand why Big Mouth is illiterate. His mother is Xuanyuan, who has been wandering around in the world for so many years. He must have some experience. Even if he can't train Big Mouth into a Jinshi scholar, he can at least be able to read. As a result, he learned cooking in Yellow Crane Tower and was still illiterate in the end. Could an illiterate person be a head catcher at that time? Please popularize science

It's well written, but the system is causing trouble again. Don't you want to read it?

Is this book blocked on the web?

The author likes to use playful words to describe smiles. Pig's feet will look at people laughing playfully when nothing happens.

The most important thing to avoid when reading this type of sitcom-type fan fiction is knowing the plot. No matter how well written it is, you will always feel like a god. You know everything and what will happen next. Even if you force the child to have sex, it will feel very embarrassing. The second protagonist should not have many skills and it is best to have a very fatal flaw. For example, the old white man is timid, big-mouthed, illiterate, and the scholar often lives, etc. This way, the woman will not feel embarrassed. Of course, it also depends on the author's writing style.

The old man who drew martial arts in Wulin Gaiden was a chance

Can't even finish one chapter🥵🥵🥵

I want to discuss with you how deep the water in Wulin Gaiden is! First: Judging from the episode of the Space-Time Bus, does the Space-Time Administration exist? If the Space-Time Administration really exists, will the protagonist be discovered? Second: Why did Mo Xiaobei become the Red Flame Mad Demon? I think if shopkeeper Tong and Lao Bai were here, they would not let Xiaobei become a murderer.

I just want to know if the author of this book is a eunuch

I have a bold idea, the author is no longer here