
This System Is a Bit Cool
这个系统有点爽
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.7M Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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781Chapters
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Author, the heroine aspect is indeed normal and realistic, but writing this in a YY novel will dissuade many people.
With a dead girl, amnesia, and an abusive master, do you dare to be more poisonous?
It was okay in the early stage, but after more than a hundred chapters, I got scared and started chasing you over and over again. Damn it, I was still letting off steam. I didn't think about the consequences of being caught. I didn't know what to do? If the enemy catches the protagonist, he wakes up early, touches the enemy's penis, and apologizes, and the enemy will blow up your little dragon girl as soon as he comes, forget it, look upset, abandon the book 😆
The plot is getting more and more attractive, please update (⊙o⊙)!
👍 Such a good story, why hasn't it been spread to VIP yet?
The system mentioned in the title of the book is a bit cool, but all I see are dogs hiding around and being bullied by anyone.
It has been updated as usual, but it cannot be displayed. I don't know if it is due to website rectification. If it still happens tomorrow, I will update it after the 28th.
Death by poisoning is definitely what Italian gun friends call him
·······You can watch it but it's a bit uncomfortable
You can raise a young dragon girl, or Huang Rong who hasn't met Guo Jing as an adult. . . . The outlook on things is a bit broken. The system is also a bit disgusting. You can set up a temporary mission to save the protagonist and ask the protagonist to repay you later. The direct threat exchange seems a bit frustrating...!
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Is it wrong to put this book in the urban category? Very serious digression
Brother really takes good care of readers, and he actually made it available for free? What a great book!
It is indeed a work that you will become addicted to at the first glance. Come on ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ノ゙update! 👍
Chapter 4: Persuading you to quit. My skills have declined.
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🤭The subject matter is very good, it looks relaxed and attractive.ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ノ゙Come on and update!
Great piece! Great support!
Brother, come on ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ノ゙ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ノ゙ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ノ゙👍👍👍
Sorry, I can't stand it when I see the names of real celebrities. Been here
Iphonex
The relationship between China and the United States is so tense now, but they still show iPhonex in the book
Bring Xiao Longnu into the harem? Are you the first one? I haven't seen the original TV series yet? I really want to kill this cowardly protagonist.
There is only one word "lie" throughout this book.
From the beginning to the end, the protagonist is "liar" and never tells the truth.
Are you going to write about it?
The urban scene is written as fantasy
Haiyun's friend's writing is as good as hers!
It's science fiction. I like it. It's a rare masterpiece! Support support!
Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.
Will the author not sign the contract? This makes me so panicked. Will he suddenly become a eunuch?
Write well. Come on, author, sign the contract and subscribe to you.
It looked good from the beginning, but from the beginning of teaching the green tea bitch to Chapter 14, it felt poisonous. First of all, although the green tea bitch is very hateful, the protagonist can only teach her a little lesson. After all, she is "inexperienced in the world", so why did she cheat her out of 300,000 yuan, and even said that she would pay her back when she gets better in the future. First, what reason or position does the protagonist have to defraud money? Second, she can only borrow money for a few hours, right? How can an online loan company that can provide 300,000 yuan be a serious company so quickly? The author herself said that she is not deeply involved in the world and just wants to get rich. Does that mean that she is not completely bad? Has the author thought about the consequences after she borrowed the 300,000 yuan? (Why, the novel doesn't consider rationality?) Next is the plot where the little dragon girl appears. According to the style of this book, even if the summoned character is not the protagonist's harem, is it still closely related (at least a relatively close friend)? Why does it have to be written that Xiao Longnu was "kissed and touched" by someone, and that Xiao Longnu was left "disheveled" and felt that the person who kissed him had "smooth cheeks" (the quotes are the author's original words, and the writing is really detailed). Do you have to write a cuckold plot? There are 365 days in a year and 24 hours in a day. Do you have to wait for her to be taken advantage of before summoning her? Or does the author think that as long as she is not taken advantage of, she is pure? Or maybe the author thinks that the act of cheating before being raped is the same as the relationship between his girlfriend and several ex-boyfriends, and is forgivable? I really don't understand these thoughts.
It's a bit fun to watch. I recommend it.
The protagonist written by the author has no ability but still pretends to be cool. He pretended to be dead to his two wives. Can he add some extravagance to the story?
Comments from the number one fan list
This book is really a hit. I only ordered it in full and it ranked first in the fan list. This book is very creative and has a good start in the early stage. I don't know whether it's because the author didn't have an outline and thought about where to write or because of his expressive ability. In the middle stage, the writing was very confusing, with a confusing main line, a confusing timeline, and a confusing plot. In fact, it can be clearly seen that the theme of the world description that the author wants to show is quite good and novel, but it is inexplicably confusing, and it is really unreadable in the middle and later stages. In my opinion, although this is a complete book, it is not a complete book. There are many details that can be added, many sequences that can be sorted out, and some inexplicable decisions that feel like they were forced in. It is recommended that those who are picky like me don't read it. If you are not a very picky reader, you can still read it.
Not even in the first chapter. . . . . .
Don't stop updating, it's so scary! Daily recommendation votes are given to you!
It's too much to always let Long Er stay at home alone.
I have read the latest chapter. It seems that the bad points mentioned in the book review section have been corrected. I feel that the author has wasted some time to revise it... I hope the author will have clear ideas in the future and stop being stuck. By the way... Don't be a dog with broken chapters.