The Strongest Cross-Border Businessman

The first chapter needs to be revised. The ridicule of passers-by about high school graduation has lowered the quality of the book and turned it into a novel written ten years ago... The protagonist is full of complaints, which further reflects the protagonist's incompetence and bad character. It would be better to just use the protagonist to move bricks and get smashed than this...

A recommendation ticket in the early morning hahaha, you actually updated it twice

This chapter says that you only focus on the high school education of pig's feet and whether water droplets can kill people. Is this really good? How much do you care about your academic qualifications, and... One of them is a scholar-level figure. I must have read too many scholar-level articles recently... Sweat

I would like to ask all the masters, does this book contain stallions and harems? I'm an old bookworm. Stallions and harems really make me vomit...

I would like to give a suggestion: if the author wants to write a book with a protagonist like a shopkeeper, he should focus all his energy on the plot, grasp the overall plot with a gripping trend, characterization, and character awareness. These spiritual grasps are the most important (of course, the logic and consistency with the original work are hard, and the author has a slight loophole in this). If the author wants to write a novel with the protagonist of the book as the center and open up a more original type of plot, he must analyze the copy from a modern perspective. This is a bit poor in the book. After various infinite stream bombings, many things do not need to be written in the book. First of all, no matter how the protagonist behaves, his state of mind must highlight the strong point. Whether it is the heroic character of Huangtian Emperor, the inhumane tenacity of Master Gu, or Wang Lin's character of having his own bottom line of principles, but being tough but not the Virgin, all of them must be strong. If necessary, the author can give the protagonist talents with high understanding or good physique, but the plot of direct initiation (except when there is no basic martial arts skills during land reclamation) is still a little less. The path of a strong man can be explored in difficulties, but he must not always take shortcuts. Because the way of a strong man definitely involves overcoming obstacles, only then can he have a strong heart. This state of mind cannot be cultivated by relying on too many external things. Just like I can't stand the shopkeeper at all because the protagonist is a loser. No matter how good he describes the protagonist of the original work, I might as well read the original work again.

The new book is great! Good luck! !

I've opened a new book, come on O(∩_∩)O

When I saw the review from Wolf Picture Master, I knew there was an extra book on my reading list

When I saw this book had a one-star review, I guessed that it must be my favorite genre. After reading nine chapters, it seemed pretty good, hahahaha!

After reading more than ten chapters, the Earth Federation has occupied the Milky Way. Will there be a shortage of gold and silver?

I copied a paragraph from this novel, and copied a paragraph from that novel. I wonder why they look so familiar.

I saw recommendations for novels of the same type on Zhutian Projection. Come and take a look. I recommend two to you. Although they are not many, they are my sincere thoughts.

Didn't you introduce the world view at the beginning?

There have been fewer people hanging out at Qidian lately, so I'll automatically subscribe and go. Come on!

"I firmly believe! He must have preserved my intact body! My father's love for me... I understand it!" To be honest, these three sentences mean that there is nothing wrong with separating the poison. So you know the author, I have made a lot of assumptions. In the end, I just want to say that there is such a beastly father in the world, and my daughter still understands it. This world is simply declining morally.

The protagonist in the last plane-traveling novel I read raped Tianshan's child grandmother, and even said something about "loli saiga"

Seeing that extraordinary powers also exist in the real world, I haven't even finished the first chapter! Come on, author, goodbye author!

It's just like that when you create a previous life at the beginning! Literary youth is the cure for a disease

I decided to read and comment first, otherwise it would be too confusing (harmony) to count.

Chapter ninety-eight is about Tianlong, and chapter thirteen is about Avatar? Five chapters are about the three-body problem. . . Then I went back to writing about Tianlong.

Merchant? Where is the businessman? Where is the purchase from Tianlong?

Don't you have space? If you don't know how, use the space as your divine power

Are you the one who wants to write chapters 70 and 80 about you? I will give up decisively.

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Well, it would be nice if I could be like the shopkeeper

Fan name 666🤓

The writing is broken. I am writing nonsense. I think I want to be a eunuch.

It takes so much effort to submit a recommendation. The new version is really a little sad.

Isn't it because his grades failed and he immediately became a eunuch?

Strong support, strong support, such a beautiful book, even if I am the king of diving for ten thousand years, I will come out to support you no matter what.