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Every day I think about how martial arts were in my previous life, and you have made a breakthrough! Daydream all day long.

Showing off all day long, his strength is rubbish. Being plotted at every turn.

Can the profile be changed? I recommended it to others before, but the profile persuaded me to quit. The paragraph about Dugu Nine Swords at the end of the introduction can be deleted. .

Just practice swordsmanship🗡. I look down on it and want to practice swordsmanship again. I daydream about it every day. Wu? Peel and remove bones. No wonder the grades are so poor.

Wardtian, different rules, you have to practice the previous martial arts, just like swimming in water is faster, you have to prove that walking is better than swimming

I have read more than twenty chapters. The biggest problem is that the paragraphs are too long. My eyes hurt now. The smaller problem is that I talk too much to myself. I hope that the background and thinking mode can be integrated into the story. If it must be explained in this way, I hope it can be simplified.

The writing is okay, both in terms of plot and creativity, but I feel that the protagonist talks to himself too much. It would be better to use another way of describing it!

I opened this book that day and found that it was still being written. The author is truly determined.

After reading dozens of chapters, I really don't understand what's written.

To sum up, this is a journey of Kontake's complaints about the swordsmanship of another world. The protagonist's soliloquy is mixed with a lot of parallel imports. On the one hand, the author is very aware of the conventions of many novels and wants to avoid them. At the same time, he behaves very deliberately. On the other hand, he inevitably uses these conventions, but only slightly detours. You can take a look at it but it's hard to see.

The front of the book is good (I only read this much)

Nearly 1.5 Million words and 51 comments. I don't know why the author deleted it. No matter what the situation is, you are really awesome 👍

Well! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I have seen miserable things, but I have never seen anything so miserable. More than 1 million words and 44 comments

I only found out after I upgraded the app that there are other Taoist friends chasing books together.

First become a helmsman 😄, and then gradually become a senior member

I think this setting is very interesting. I watched it in the early stage, and then jumped directly to the part between the protagonist and the fifth son. From that part on, I felt it was very exciting. The collision between the martial arts of the author's previous life and the martial arts of his reincarnation is very interesting. It feels like one is to improve the essence of life first, and then gradually become stronger, and the other is to become stronger first, and then improve the essence of life. I hope this book will not be a scam 🙂

After reading the first few dozen chapters, I felt it was a bit scattered, and there are still large sections of narration that should be improved. Martial arts is not easy, keep at it, come on

I feel like my combat power has dropped a bit since I returned to Yan Kingdom and started competing 😄

I have just entered the realm of martial arts, and I can estimate that one punch can have tons of power. Ton? ? ? I have never heard of tons weighing thousands or tens of thousands of kilograms. It's so awkward to say 😓

Appearance is of no use in the era of the strong. All strength is respected. In real life, having money is the boss. Appearance is also important in reality when you grow old. Being rich is the key to life.

What kind of martial arts does the earth have? Food remains unchanged! No matter how advanced you are in earthly martial arts, you can defeat him with one shot!