I Counterattacked in Chinese Textbooks

Don't use so many routines, such as family marriages and bets with Bai Fumei. It's too unrealistic. Write a true story around you, small, plain and yet tender.

I'm thinking, one day you travel through time and become Yu, and what will you say when you meet Runtu?

Your writing of the urban part is really bad, with more real feelings and less routines. It doesn't matter if you say that your routines are good, but the routines are still so bad. Just write about the people around you, classmates and friends. They are white, rich and beautiful, but they don't like you. They make trouble for you when they are full and have nothing to do. You will know at a glance that they are not the masters of life. Don't pretend to be a slap in the face, that will only look very low.

It's very beautiful. Come on, please update more.

Remember not to be ridiculous, especially when it comes to robbing a bride or something like that.