Whisk Ashes

Fantasy is my favorite genre, and the author's writing is so wonderful.

I like the tone of the cover. Good luck to the author! ! ! ! ! 🌹

The plot is compact, the writing is vivid, and the depictions are natural, especially "Pig Life". Open your mind enough

I am coming! ! 🌹

The story of each map is very exciting, and it feels like it's getting better and better. It's just that when you change the place on the map, it's easy to let go and give up the book. Just stick to it and it'll be fine.

Already collected! Come on! Mutual encouragement!

Pa Yue, it's almost a million words. Come on, keep updating.

With a heart filled with sadness and pretending to be happy, I stepped on it 😭 I am about to take the exam, hurry up and wish me everything right!

It's very novel, I can't speak a lot, but it's very beautiful anyway.

Let's order one more time, come on Payue 🌹

I heard that whether I subscribe or reward, it will take three months 😅

Your writing is very good. It is a relatively standard female novel. In terms of style and style, it has a certain foundation. The dialogue (i. E., Language description) between the characters and the pigs is humorous and well-conceived. The full text is written concisely and clearly, which is in line with the fast-food nature of online novels. The action and some psychological descriptions are also very good. There are just a few issues about details. I hope there can be more detailed descriptions, not a thick pile of paragraphs, but some simple descriptions that highlight the characteristics of the characters. If this is added, the characters in the book can appear clearly and lifelike even though there are not many nagging gorgeous words. Also, when concluding each chapter, don't be too casual or impatient. It doesn't matter if the number of words per paragraph is small, but the content must be substantial!

Come on, come on, come on! Support Dazhong...

Faster, faster, faster! I like Wei Xin very much! !

Where have everyone's recommendation votes gone (*ﾟ◇ﾟ) I'm so cute and asking for recommendations! (～￣▽￣)→))*￣▽￣*)O