Pretty Girl of Konoha

And Naruto's transformation technique is also a trap! It's an exaggeration to think that being able to transform into a shuriken kunai and be thrown out like a real person is too exaggerated! It is recommended that the author change the transformation technique to a disguise ninjutsu that simply changes light and shadow. Ninja School Three Ninjutsu The clone technique, which creates confusing light and shadow clones, is the easiest to master and the easiest to be seen through. The transformation technique allows one to transform into various things to achieve a disguise effect, but cannot actually change oneself. Substitution, see another comment.

There is also the Substitution Technique in Naruto. It would be best for the author to fill in this pitfall. The logic in the original work is so contradictory! I have two good ideas here for the author to take a look at and use them directly if he feels they are suitable. 1. Ordinary version of the avatar technique (Professor of the Ninja School): Inject chakra into specific materials, form a seal to activate the ninjutsu, let the material become oneself, and then control the avatar to attract the enemy's attention, similar to the shadow clone effect. The disadvantage is that you need to hide yourself first, prepare materials, and the duration is short, so the timing of sending is difficult to grasp. The advantage is that it consumes less chakra and is suitable for genin. 2. The advanced version of the Substitution Technique, which injects chakra into specific materials to create a mental connection with oneself in a short period of time, and then creates a short-distance reverse psychic effect through sealing (similar to the castrated version of Flying Thunder God), allowing oneself to instantly exchange positions with the material over a short distance, resulting in a teleportation effect. The disadvantage is. 1. It consumes a lot of chakra (usually C-level ninjutsu consumes) 2. Extremely close distance (three to five meters, the distance between mental and material sensing is limited, those with mental talent can go farther) 3. It is difficult to perform (B-level ninjutsu is difficult, usually only a jounin can master it) 4. The stiffness lasts for a long time (there will be constant stiffness after the onset, and using it in front of an expert is equal to courting death)

For a new writer, the beginning of a book is the most hesitant time. People are always greedy, and so are authors, but for new writers, greed is just a few more clicks and a few more collections. The most beautiful thing about writing online articles is that the author uses the keyboard to type out touching, colorful and fantasy stories, so that readers can feel happy and gain certain economic benefits at the same time. However, the author's writing power is not to that extent, nor is his greed to that extent. All I can do at this time is show sincerity, revise my novel idea and then publish it. What we can hope for is that some readers will accidentally turn to the author's novels. No matter whether the novel is to their taste or not, they can pour water on this green seedling. A message, a collection, and a click are all great encouragements to the author. The author is very grateful.

It's time for Jiraiya to teach the protagonist about the changes in chakra properties! Didn't the author forget that there is also a change in the nature of chakra? The protagonist only has the fire attribute, which just means that the protagonist is innately affinity with the fire attribute. Other attributes can also be mastered through the change of chakra properties. As long as you work hard, you can even surpass the fire attribute. The protagonist should be the first one to change the nature of the wind attribute chakra. The wind assists the fire and increases the speed and power of the fire attack. In the original work, we hardly see anyone hit by the fire escape! It's basically a waste of chakra!

The title of the play always reminds me of Legally Blonde. That heroine is so adorable

The best thing about this book is the emotional drama. If you have a harem and don't want to see it, just disappear silently! Don't deliberately set the pace! It's just a niche fan work. What's worth criticizing about it?

The author pays attention to the style and wording! Boys should use less small words and try not to include vocabulary elements that Naruto does not have in their words. Naruto must have the style of Naruto!

I suggest you let Minato Namikaze play a supporting role if you have the chance! My wife and master were all robbed, and after dozens of chapters, I didn't even get a chance to show my face! Too bad!

Watergate is green, but this book is good to read

When I saw the title of the book, I thought the protagonist was a girl.

What the hell is Chapter 40? I hope the plot won't happen again, otherwise I'll have to...!

Does the author have a book club, and can't I see the news there...

Sorry, fellow author. I didn't have internet at home during the winter vacation, so I didn't see it. Collected. As for advertising, there will be no advertising. Ahem... My ID is my pen name.

Your name is too... It's like a transformation tattoo, hhhh

If the name is better. I feel my grades will be better

Hi~! Regarding this situation, I can only express my feelings by sighing! After reading the author's book-cutting speech, it was very sincere and sincere, and I couldn't get angry at all! As for the book friends who were tricked by me, you can scold me if you are unhappy! Don't talk back.

In fact, this book is called the protagonist's journey to seek death, right? He watched his parents being killed because of his blood, and then continued to expose his blood outside. Is this an adult? White-collar elite? When you meet ninjas from other countries and learn about world wars, your first thought is to make friends? Make friends but keep showing off your strength? Not only did his parents deserve to die, he also deserved to die. It was natural that his wife would die because of him one day, and his master would be implicated in front of his eyes. Does this kind of protagonist have meaning in life? Isn't it just to harm people?