Pokémon Live on Earth

I don't know how to explain it. I'm seeing sixty now, but I feel that Wang Lei looks so weird. He is impulsive and looks a bit like Xiaozhi, but he is not as good as Xiaozhi when it comes to elves. He looks like a Shi Lezhi person.

I'm preparing a new book, and I have two ideas and I don't know which one to write about, so I'm asking for advice. If you want to read it, you can leave me a message.

I have been reading the subscription chapters, and I can only say that the protagonist described by the author has a very Ash-like style! The whole story is full of various plots, but the training of the elves is simply explained, which makes people feel inexplicable. It always feels like there is nothing, and it becomes stronger inexplicably. Except for Charizard, Xiaozhi's pet, which is trained and recuperated in Charizard Valley, and its strength has soared, the other elves are just average (except Skin God) (the only training with memory is a voice) The author's plot is quite compact, but it doesn't have the flavor of the elf. Although it is a live broadcast, the center is also centered around the elf. In fact, the layout problem can be solved. When reading novels at the starting point, I think the paragraphs must be clear, and there should not be a special paragraph, which will make the reading difficult.

Come on, there aren't many people writing about artifact treasures anymore.

Okay! I found that my expectations were too high. Although Pokémon World is very middle-grade, this book is even more middle-grade. I don't want to read it.

Author, please note I had this idea last night to write a novel about live streaming in another world. The protagonist travels to another world but is live broadcast on a specific live streaming website. The protagonist needs more real rewards from the audience, without any fake ones. Then the country noticed it. According to the regulations of the relevant departments, it must be controlled, so the protagonist negotiated with the relevant departments, and finally everyone got what they needed. The author gets more rewards in other worlds, and the country gets more benefits, and then surpasses other countries. As for what kind of other world I travel to, I don't know...,, Technology? Gao Wu? Cultivation? Also, the negotiation between the protagonist and the country may be related to how open the live broadcast software Goldfinger is. The character of the protagonist is the soul of a novel, I hope everyone will pay attention to it. Uh-huh, I'm just a wage earner and I don't have any writing skills. If the author is interested, I can write it. I hope the author will reply greatly.

I've only read Chapter 15 now, and it's pretty good so far, but the first elf makes me want to raise my eyebrows. I hope that the elf after the protagonist may be more mainstream. In addition, the elf of the sun and moon, to be honest, I'm afraid that many people won't play it. Maybe the awareness is relatively low. This may be something the author needs to pay attention to. Many people still only go to xyz, right?

This background setting is too troublesome. If there are wild Pokémon, then the survival of animals on the earth will be a big problem. I don't know how the author set it up.

Is there any PM you would like to see? If you have any, please give me your opinion. I think those who are popular can join the protagonist team.

We have created a book club group. Welcome to join. The group leader will send out red envelopes regularly!

Rhine, there is a lot of drama! Six bond elves!

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You talk too much nonsense, and so does my elf-catching partner, who keeps putting it off

The title of the author's book reminds me of Fish Sky! Have you seen Chong Mei, author!

Jirachi, Celebi! ! !

Maybe we should let go and let them go for it!

I always feel that Xiaotian and Brother Lei are superfluous! I didn't really write about them, but it made me feel how much better it would be without them!

Say something to prove that I am still here!

Pickpocket cats are so annoying! There are still appearances now, do you plan to conquer it?

I had a great time talking, give me a monthly pass

Evolution is so slow, I don't have 6 pets yet. . .

The plot of choosing elves and bracelets at the beginning is not pleasant, and there are many long sentences, which affects reading.

This novel actually uses the official translation, and I'm still used to the original name.

The author's characterization is a bit, how should I put it, a bit weird. I wish he could write better.

This is too messy, the chapters are more messy than garbled characters, and chapters are often broken. I gave up decisively after reading half of it.

Author, can you change it from the first chapter and add more punctuation? It's very painful to watch.

I found that there are a lot of people watching pirated copies here.

There are now more than 400 chapters, but there are no six pets. I have less than 100 chapters and feel that the pace is too slow.

Two novice anchors pecking each other! What on earth can rise up!

After bonding with the elf, everything about you is connected with everything about the elf. Just like the wise frog, I feel the same way! Will trainers share the lives and talents of the elves as the number and time of bonds increase? Perhaps it can be said that some of the special abilities in the elven world are passed down in this way! Super evolution shouldn't be possible, this is just caused by the key stone and mg stone! Speaking of the existence of super evolutionary stones, perhaps it was initially a warm-up for the evolution of bonds, but as people pursued the power of super evolution, the bonds came to an end!