Hexagram Tribulation

The writing is very good. I rarely read books on female channels. Judging from the story in the front of the book, it would be a pity to put this book on a female channel. It might be better to put it on a male channel after revision. The story is exciting, and the beginning is captivating, but the progress of the plot is a bit slow. The protagonist causes a huge disaster as soon as he appears and is wanted by the country. He is exhausted and immediately goes to kill people. Personally, I think the protagonist should be given a break here. The same goes for the subsequent plot. The story is always in a tense state. The protagonist will be tired and the readers will be tired too. A plot with ups and downs, slow and urgent, can give people a sense of expectation. The author also did a good job in shaping the characters in the book. There are many plots for the protagonist and the male protagonist, and the image and personality of the characters are written through the details of words and deeds and the storyline. The creation of the supporting role of Li Ying, who does not have many roles at the moment (only the author knows how many will be later), can be regarded as a stroke of genius. A woman wielding a butcher's knife vividly appears on the page. Speaking of "butcher's knife" will make people think of Li Ying, just like "In the Snow..." When it says "missing front teeth", it is known that it is Jian Jiuhuang. It's really good, the author keeps up the good work! The author's writing is good, please keep updating! Due to the short length of the book, I can only make this review temporarily. This is the opinion of Lao San and his family. Please forgive me if there is any inconvenience or offense.

Su Yin I have a sincere heart, For a long time, I have been locked in sorrow; When will the spring breeze arrive? Colored with thousands of red flowers!

The writing is great and the plot is beautiful. Don't thank me. It was Shen Shen who recommended your book to me. I'm just one of Shen Shen's fans.

It's beautiful 🤭🤭🤭 It feels like the previous chapters are all about the story since Su Yin stabbed the dagger.