Yan Yun

It's so beautiful. I was so absorbed in watching it that I forgot about Chinese food, hehe.

Isn't it a bit hard for the author? Come on. Looking forward to the update.

Thanks to two book friends, Shuanghao Sunshine and Seeing People in the Light, for their suggestions on this book. I feel a little guilty when I say it... Because I didn't know this chapter existed before. I looked through the function today and saw it... I'm very sorry for this. From today on, I will read the content of each chapter and I will reply as soon as possible! Regarding the questions raised by Book Friends in the Sunshine Book in Chapter 14, it is true that I did not review them carefully. I would like to express my apologies to the book friends who have caused trouble in reading! Three updates tomorrow! I would like to thank all the book friends who have always supported me! Please continue to support! Please recommend and collect!

Good article, wonderful ideas, unique ideas, good writing style, please support me

It's beautiful, it's big and great, faster and faster

Must give a thumbs up. The novel is awesome, I support it.

Good! I hope to continue writing and get better and better! ! [Fn=5_1][fn=5_1]

Those who have votes have voted. Most of them are powerful.

In fact, there are inevitably some emotional scenes in every novel. This is a powerful tool to make the male protagonist become tender!

Why haven't you signed a contract yet?

ㄟ( ▔, ▔ )ㄏThe rhythm is very good. Keep up the good work. It can be seen that this is a book that has been carefully written. It was not written in a hurry.

I just finished reading it, and I hope the author will make this book a hit.

I've posted a lot, why don't they show up? ? ? ?

This is my second book, and I've signed a contract. I'll come over to cheer you up. I started reading the title and thought it was "The Biography of Big Mango"

The author asked me to give it a try. Let me tell you my feelings. First of all, there is nothing wrong with the writing. The author also put his heart into it. You can tell by looking at the chapter names. It is very traditional. This completely fictional historical novel feels like a traditional time-travel novel. The advantage of a completely fictional historical article is that the author can compile it at will without consulting a large amount of historical materials, which can quickly increase the writing speed and leave readers with nothing to complain about. The disadvantage is that readers have no sense of identification or involvement, because it is a history that we are not familiar with. Therefore, there is only one way out for such a completely fictional historical novel to achieve success, and that is to be funny and pretentious. Internet literature books are just fast-food articles. The first three chapters cannot catch people's appetite, so this book is basically useless. I read this book before because it is completely fictional. I read it again today and only saw the word "time travel" in a chapter of the first chapter. If you don't pay attention, it will be ignored. In the first chapter, you must emphasize that the protagonist is a time traveler, so that all readers can see it to increase the sense of immersion. For a completely fictional historical text, if the first three chapters are not funny or eye-catching and cannot catch the readers, then it is almost impossible for you to achieve results. Author, your book obviously failed to do this. If the first three chapters do not catch the readers, it will be difficult for people to read the rest. Author, you may be wondering why so many great masters start like me and can they succeed? That's because they are already great writers and have a fixed readership. Masters such as Ziyu 2 and Chen Dong can write like this, but Mengxin writes like this, which is not only a slap in the face, but also a slap in the face. To put it bluntly, online literature is a kind of text product that needs to be packaged. The first three chapters are its wrapping paper. How to catch people's attention, I suggest the author first read the first three chapters of a hundred fine novels, I believe there will be gains. If you want a novel to be successful, you can't write what others have already written. The work you write must be innovative and not similar to other people's works, otherwise your book will have no meaning. Well, having said all this, I don't know if it will make people hate me.

It is written with great care, but the title and introduction are not attractive enough.

Unknowingly, it has been a month since I wrote this book, which has nearly 110,000 words, and currently has 807 collections. On this day, January 26th, I uploaded this book. That was the first time I started writing a novel. When I first started, I didn't think about signing the contract. In fact, I delayed changing my status until I had nearly 100,000 words. Many people at the same time signed a contract to change their status with ten thousand words or even a few thousand words. At that time, I was really envious. Then I kept writing until it reached 100,000 words without any recommendations, so I gritted my teeth and persevered. In the beginning, there were only one or two clicks a day, and I even tried ten clicks a week. There are only a few collections, and one of them is my own collection. Because the results were so dismal, I once thought about giving up. But at that time, I thought of the forty-seven brothers who had read this book. They like my books, so as long as they like them, that's fine. This is also the reason why I wanted to write a novel in the first place. I hope my world can be shared with you. Then I thanked the editor-in-chief of Huya for signing me. Now I have crossed the threshold. Then today, one month later, you continue to read my book. I'm really happy. Thank you for giving me the first reward today. This is the first reward that little K has received. Many people like the books I wrote. Starting from tomorrow, there will be two updates every day. ​As for the plot, because Xiao K is a newcomer, there are still many deficiencies in the processing, but I will work hard to improve it. The foreshadowing is enough, and the plot will be accelerated in the future. I hope you will continue to support me, and I also very much hope you can give me more suggestions. I have always believed that every reader's opinion is valuable, so I will read every comment and learn from it to continuously improve my writing skills. I will persist until the end.