Bactrian Period

Just look at it casually for a noob, an old bookworm should be able to carry dozens of them, I saw 384 poisoned and died, sorry 😰,

The author probably put all his writing power into the introduction. I really have nothing to say about the other two chapters about how to persuade people to quit the poison. And if it's not good, don't write it hard. Or is it because the three views are very inconsistent?

I can't stand it anymore. I feel like my average IQ is not 70... I'm really sorry. I have already graduated from the second grade of secondary school.

Too much water, no plot, a waste of time, too much sincerity, and the writing is really bad. I can't believe it was written by someone who has written two books worth nearly 10 million, haha

The protagonist is a good person, but he insists on writing it as a bear. The bear is so awesome, and he has practiced martial arts like your mother. Is it writing about cultivation or the apocalypse? I don't understand.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, there are more and more flaws and poisonous points, which is simply unbearable... The background setting of the story is okay, but I can't stand it anymore! 😅😅😅It's so eye-catching

A passage about the Indian Nasha Princess and the Sun Princess... , . ! ! 49 years later... The Sun Princess and her looked at the little clouds rising into the sky. Her: Do you know that I just got pregnant with his child... Princess of the Sun, looking embarrassed... Her: Do you know that Fang Lang has four children in their forties... Princess of the Sun, looking embarrassed... Her: And you have nothing... Princess of the Sun, looking embarrassed... : You are going too far. If I can't sleep with him, I will sleep with all his sons and let his sons kill each other for me. Let's see what he does...

I endured reading 100 chapters, but I couldn't stand it anymore. **Article

I've only read a few chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. The author writes the book without thinking?

I was in a book drought again. I was looking through various types of books last night and suddenly came across the book "Da Xia Ji". I started reading this book with the idea of ​​giving it a try. Chapter 43 that I have read so far, the previous part is still acceptable, the subject matter is very good, maybe because I have read too many novels, and I have developed a bad appetite. Personally, I feel that the author has repeatedly stated too much, and there are too many bad guys in this book. In the peaceful era, although there are many evil people, there are too many bad guys appearing next to the protagonist, and many characters seem to have too small brain capacity. To put it bluntly, they are a bit mentally retarded. . . . . . . . . . . . . After seeing the descriptions in the prison in Chapter 43, I... Was a little speechless. . However, come on, author, hone your writing skills and strive to become a god in the next book! ! ! ! ! Sorry, I withdrew.

There was enmity in the past life. If I didn't target you in this life, why would you target others? In this life, others don't even know who you are.

☠ Farewell🙏

I admire the fact that there are fewer chapters in the original version.

I watched Jiu Lian first and felt that the content and plot were very good. I used to see Da Xia come out because she had few words and was afraid of being disappointed. Now in a trap

How miserable I was in my previous life, so I can still live like a small farmer today. This is the protagonist 😐

If the author's writing was simpler, I should have been able to read it. I barely read three chapters, but I really couldn't stand it anymore. It felt too contrived.

This book is a relatively popular revival style of heaven and earth vitality, and it is also a story about rebirth. Perhaps in the eyes of many readers, a story about rebirth must be achieved through the fists of the Eight Desolations, stepping on the Liuhe, punching the Eight Desolations, intimidating the vast world, and dominating the nine heavens and ten places without any rivals! I am the only one who dominates!? Showing off all the way, right? Fang Yun Duotou is a kind of endless sadness, a memory that hurts to the bone, but you have been constantly scrutinizing it. I really think you are boring! The author begins with Fang Yun's dream. In fact, isn't this a kind of subconscious pain? The entanglement of three lives and three lives flows in the blood. After being reborn, he was panicking and naturally wanted to work hard to improve, not only to make up for the regrets of his previous life, but also to protect the people around him. At a young age, he had secrets about the end of the world that he couldn't express, as if he was choked in his throat... So he tried every means to improve himself, joined the army and took a potion like crazy? Is he sure? Is the mark on the arm a bug? Not at all. He was actually wandering between life and death. Moreover, he had not learned the Youlong Jin or the Pure Yang Qi of Zi Shu. At that time, he was actually putting all his money into it. Because I know the future, I am afraid, so I work hard to improve. I don't have time to show off or slap you in the face... The plot of the flying general, that is, the plot after the 80th chapter that many book friends have complained about, I think it does feel a bit weak. It is not the poisonous points I told you. I personally feel that the rhythm is a bit slow and feels a bit flat. However, the novel originally has a climax and foreshadowing. It is not surprising. This is not an infinite novel, not an urban cool novel, this is a fairy tale... The divine fire general in the back, furiously killing the Qingfeng Gang, also made me excited to watch it, and it was extremely exciting! Here comes a bunch of people again, saying that society is dark... You simply cannot imagine the chaos in the apocalyptic era. If you have the right, you will be a mother if you have milk, and you will be a king if you have a gun. In an era of chaos, order collapses, and evil is most likely to breed. If I were to write it, I would definitely focus on the Qingfeng Gang, and also include various small gangs who burned, killed and looted. If possible, I would also write about the story of a man protecting his wife and children and a bloody fight to the end... All in all, too few people died... The picture is not strong enough, it should be more sadistic! ! ! You just know spray, spray, spray, are you a fire extinguisher? Or a machine gun? Are you reading a book?

The plot has ups and downs and is thrilling. I love it very much 😁

Good guy, in the previous life, my childhood sweetheart was killed by frying. The girl's father was a policeman, but no one paid attention to it and the murderer could not be found. In this life, two gangsters were killed in a fight. The provincial department directly directed the serious crime team. Doesn't frying and killing deserve to be investigated?

I kindly ask that the comments in this chapter do not disturb the author's writing of the book! I kindly ask that the comments in this chapter do not disturb the author's writing of the book! I kindly ask that the comments in this chapter do not disturb the author's writing of the book!

Let me say it without any malicious intent. If this book is really a good book, I suggest the author strengthen the writing and logic of the first few chapters. How should I put it? It's very discouraging. Maybe my poison resistance is too low, but there is really no need for this kind of poison to exist! Is it a rebirth stream? Why have you seen so many rebirths, so you don't need to worry about it so much. The author can bury it if he wants to, or you can read it even if you don't. The subject matter of the author is very good, but the character creation is really low. What do you want to describe? Reborn to kill people at the beginning? In this way, the first impression given by the protagonist is that of a fool and a reckless man! Of course, the author quickly gave an explanation that he survived the jungle law in the future. Okay, according to this logic, the protagonist must have ruthlessness, but the protagonist himself has no strength, at least he can't practice. So why did the leader of China's three Taoist priests fall in love with him? Okay, just think of it as the protagonist's halo. But you should have some IQ after all, right? Rebirth is indeed incredible, but being able to survive cannot be said to have no IQ at all. I am basically sure that I have been reborn, and there is nothing wrong with saving the people important to me (of course, after decades, how can I write down the specific time and location without practicing is a bit poisonous in itself). Forcibly killing people to save others feels a bit forced, it means killing people for the sake of killing people. After all, the end has not yet come, and even if you have some brains, you cannot kill for the time being. When the end comes, you may not be able to kill until then. Maybe he will not be able to survive that time. Now that he kills, the reason is here again. Who will care about this when the end comes? Well, society is in a mess, and there is still the law of the jungle. The country may not be able to control it. So why did you describe Shou Guomen so impassionedly in the first place? When the apocalypse comes, everyone will live for themselves, and no one will care about killing. Are you telling me this here? Okay, don't care about all this. As long as there are really these passionate people, and the protagonist doesn't know how he got in, then after all this time, people are defending the country and the people, throwing their heads and blood, and you just kill people casually? Is there a traitor among us? For the so-called beauty, I didn't see how beautiful it was anyway. At least this girl has a very high psychological quality, and she can treat murder as nothing. After all, the end has not come yet, and these are two lives! It's a bit speechless that a high school student can be so ordinary and so ordinary. =_=. As for the protagonist, how could he be reborn without cheating? It's expected, and I don't have a problem with it, but if the protagonist has strength, it's probably a trap. At least for now, he has no brains. Nowadays, fast-food reading is all about reading. Many people don't have much time to read novels, so you have to spend more time at the beginning. The three golden chapters are at least very important. The beginning is so vicious. Who can read it if they are not your fans? Just like Global Gaowu, I saw the theory that the protagonist looked at everyone as if he was going to harm him, and then apologized to any good guy. I was really speechless. I didn't know that its results could be so good. At least I had such a bad impression of it that I didn't want to watch it. It can obviously be avoided. As long as you pay a little more attention, the good impression can be added to the poison resistance. At least it can make people continue to watch it. Come on, the subject matter is really good, but I hope you can continue your efforts and strengthen the writing and logic at the beginning. Friends who like this book can just attack it personally.

After reading Chapter 20, I don't want to read anymore. The author's writing is okay, but the intelligence is too powerful. On one hand, the heroine was killed before time travel. Because she was outside the wilderness, it took a long time to find the body. The protagonist did not find anyone who killed him before time travel, and the superiors did not pay attention to it. On the other hand, The protagonist Bian killed those two garbage men after time travel, and the crime turned out to be the next day when they found the bodies of those two gangsters in the river. Let me tell you, it took you two more than an hour to deal with it. What the hell did you do, just throw the two dead men directly into the river? You are mentally retarded, even a mentally retarded person knows how to throw them away separately! ! What's more, the higher authorities actually sent a big boss (a nationally famous one) to investigate this matter. I'm telling you, there is no fundamental difference between killing two men and killing a woman. In the past, one was killed by a woman and she didn't take it seriously. Now she won't do it (at least not in a short period of time). The world will not change for you. If the local public security system doesn't want to eat, will you go to the State Council if something goes wrong? In addition, after finding the elixir, you are worried about being caught, while the second one explodes, and you scream in public ~ speechless, you can have more time even if the incident is kept low-key... How weak can you do this? Isn't it better to find the elixir and use it as soon as possible to improve your strength, but to have a good time like the protagonist and then rent a hotel to get it slowly? You must know that you don't have much time, you may be arrested and imprisoned at any time! After a hard time preparing it, I asked my gay friend to use it first. I'm speechless, I'm really speechless. You have a lot of time as a gay friend, so when can you not use it? Are you a murderer, one kill or two? You also know that there is a top domestic boss coming to arrest you, but you are the last one among the three to use it? If the case handler comes and confiscates all your money, then you, Dog B, will throw away your money! Finally, these are the reasons why you are not popular. They are not complete 🤭🤭🤭

The beginning is nonsense and the childhood sweetheart is tainted. It's so disgusting. Do you know how to write, getting into a car accident is better than this? What kind of protagonist?

There are a lot of poisonous points in the opening chapter. What a great subject matter, but the dialogue and handling of the characters are so childish. When a gangster kidnaps someone, he can also ask for help from the most powerful martial arts master in the city, and at the same time, he can also ask for help from a Taoist priest who saves the world. Is this what a gangster can do? With so much energy, are you still a gangster? It's ridiculous to alert the province after two gangsters died. The murderer can't be found even though the provincial department takes action. Are you kidding me? Is there no surveillance on the roadside? Why did the deceased go to the scene? Don't take the police lightly. In most areas, when something goes wrong, the police don't do anything. There are many reasons, but it's definitely not because they don't know who it is.

It's so venomous. The writing style is comparable to that of a primary school student. Don't ask why it's not for kindergarten, because it's hard for kindergarten students to recognize so many words.

Am I the only one who left after reading Chapter 3?

Xiao Baiwen came out of the world. It's so poisonous that I can't bear it anymore. That is to say, those who are new to online writing or like this genre can read it. I'll admit defeat! Farewell

I am indeed not a Shennong! I couldn't stand it any longer, so I retreated first.

It stopped at chapter 34 and I didn't stick to it. After reading the book for so many years, I would be addicted to this kind of book with good data. Personally, if I go to Sanya to find spiritual fruits, I need to bring a friend with me? I felt a little tied up, but luckily I was able to hold on. In Chapter 34, Xiao Huangmao actually took a girl to rescue someone. The most amazing thing is that the police paid great attention to investigating the death of the person in Tamsui Bay. They actually arranged a fight in Tamsui Bay and killed the protagonist? ? Police: We are no longer human beings 😅 (a good metaphor for another scene of an accident that is still under investigation)

A book that I can't even read for free. . . Really poisonous