Poison Master

Has the author seen Master Gu? You can learn from Gu. For example, you can make a centipede and put it on your arm, just like a chainsaw. It's really exciting to fight with others in close combat.

That's called Gu, it's just a bug, it's boring.

I've finished reading another book, what else can I say 😭

Because I have only written one disappointing book before, it is inevitable that there will be many problems. I hope you can point them out after you find them. The author will make modifications or explanations based on the problems found. Thank you for your support.

There are so many typos, can you comment? .

There are many logical problems in this book. I can read it because of its novelty. Some things have nothing to do with pig's feet. Pig's feet are the main ones when they come out. For example, the two-dimensional guild. I am also a thoughtful person. Why do people treat you like a child when you come out? They don't know themselves. Go and compensate the person named Lu. You have to compensate the person named Lu. Even if there is something wrong with me, I won't ask you to pay it. I don't know how to ask someone from my own guild or a close friend to go and pay it. It's so similar to you. No matter how awesome you are, do you need an outsider to intervene in my own guild's affairs?,, The author sets the final The main line is the aura world of a different planet, the exploration of a different planet, and the final development of the cultivation world. The secondary main line is the development of your own guild, and the deeper exploration and development of the game. I admit that there will be many weird things in the game world, but you are a person in the cultivation world. It is a high-level world. Don't interfere without reason. It's a funny world, otherwise you are also a funny person. Don't interfere in other people's guild affairs without reason. No matter how awesome you are, you are not qualified. Of course, you can write this book as a pure game novel, 🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐

Why not raise more of the same Gu? Moonlight Gu, Soul-Eating Gu, Void Mantis, Poisonous Spider, Poisonous Toad, Poisonous Bee... Why not raise more? If you don't have the materials, why not buy them? Why not post a reward if you can't buy it? 🤫

DNA is not important? ? ? Are your descendants not important? ? ? Why? ? ? ?

Isn't the protagonist curious about why the reborn can be reborn? Have you ever thought about why he can be reborn? Is there someone behind the scenes who allowed him to be reborn? Do you want to set up a plot or something, so you can just seize the body without fear of problems?

BookThe review area is so deserted

In fact, the biggest problem is that the positioning is not clear. The game is not like a game, and the fantasy is not like fantasy. It is more like a group traveling to another world and being able to travel back and forth freely. . .

The skill requirement in Chapter 32 is 40 points of comprehension, while the protagonist only has 30 points. Please author correct it

I abandoned the book in two chapters and talked about the shortcomings. First of all, the idea of ​​a person who takes his body and is reborn is boring. What is the difference between a person who takes his body and is reborn and you who are reborn? Secondly, and most importantly, the writing is too poor. Although I only read two chapters, I can't see what the author is writing about cultivators. The dialogue description in these two chapters makes me seem to see two middle school gangsters who are involved in the underworld. If a cultivator meets his friend and is killed, shouldn't he immediately search for his soul and torture him, and then directly avenge his friend? What the hell are you going to do with a bunch of useless stuff? Thirdly, the plot setting is extremely confusing. A wealthy prince wants to kill someone to appear in person? Nonsense? Also, the effects of force are reciprocal. If you kill someone with a car, how good will your end be? Especially driving directly into the house? The guy who drives this damn thing is almost dead. Let's talk about the setting. A cultivator was hit and killed in his own lair. This is the funniest joke I've ever heard. No matter how bad a cultivator he is, he can't let an ordinary person be hit and killed by a car in his lair. The author is really 666.

The heroine appears within three chapters, so this book can be discarded

There is a problem in Chapter 6. It was said earlier that the soul is destroyed to prevent self-awareness, but later it is said that bugs cannot develop self-awareness due to their small brains and fragile souls. Aren't they inherently unable to develop self-awareness, so why prevent them from developing self-awareness?

Chapter 9, there is a question. Doesn't it mean that if there is a Tyrannosaurus Rex breath, you should not dare to approach it? Then why is it said that small things often get into its chassis by mistake? (It's not my mistake, it's the author's mistake)

Author, do you plan to focus on online games or reality in the future?