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Sorry, as a ten-year-old bookworm, I am a bit picky when it comes to reading. I am just giving some advice to the author. If you don't like it, don't criticize it! I just read the first few pictures and I feel that a person who is reborn in his 50s is still a government cadre and has no city government at all. He is still entangled in emotions and work. In 1991, he could not do anything based on his foresight. Especially Bai Ling. The typical one is that his horizons are opened, his vision is high, he looks down on people, and the protagonist still can't look away! Come on, author

This author always dwells on women's issues when writing official articles. He thinks he handles the plot well. I can only say that this aspect is very naive. A person in his 40s has been an official and became the secretary-general of the municipal party committee. He was reborn, and then he still can't handle the so-called love affairs. With such emotional intelligence, he can still be promoted all the way in this life. I can only say that the author's understanding of our party's personnel management is too superficial!

The map is a mess. At first, I always thought that Hanchuan was Sichuan, Handu was Chengdu, and Jiazhou was Chongqing. Looking back, I realized that Hanchuan is not Sichuan because Sichuan is on the map; Handu is not Chengdu because Chengdu is on the map; but Jiazhou is Chongqing. And Hanchuan is not any of the surrounding provinces in Yunnan, Guizhou, Shaanxi, Hunan, Hubei, Henan and Anhui. So the map is very messy. If the author publicly drew a map of China and clearly marked Hanchuan Province on the map, I dare say that the author would probably be held criminally responsible for forging and tampering with national maps. Therefore, the author is guilty because he tampered with the country map and invented provinces that did not exist.

It's really disgusting. The main character is like a dog. He's still like this in his 50s. The setting problem is huge.

I regret reading this book. Damn it, this emotional drama blinded me as a helmsman.

It's so bloody, can you do it?

To be honest, up to now, the heroine is still undecided, so I might as well not follow up on this book. In real life, a life without emotions, no matter how well written, lacks charm!

Lao Rui, I have read two of your books a long time ago. Now that I have read this one, I can't help but have some opinions and suggestions: 1. The narration tells too much and explains too much about the background. You can have a simple and important introduction, but it should not be too long. 2. The characters' appearance, clothing, expressions, and movements are described too little, and the characters speak less. On the contrary, there are too many descriptions of the psychological activities. The psychological activities of the characters should be reflected through the characters' language and movements. 3. It can be a single protagonist, but there is basically no activity line for the supporting role. There are too few activities written between the supporting role and the protagonist, which results in the character image of each supporting role being very lifeless. The character types are also very single. One type is officials, and the other type is some businessmen friends of the protagonist. For a masterpiece with such a large subject matter, the characters should be from all walks of life. 4. The plot is too simple. All the space of the article is devoted to writing work without other arrangements. From the perspective of the structure of a novel, it is too simple. From the perspective of grammar, there are no ups and downs. The plot is not attractive and touching. The protagonists are basically working and have little or no other spare time. Life is too boring. I suggest you write and play with friends. Where to go with your girlfriends, this type of activity. Although the scene of pretending to be slapped in the face is vulgar, it happens once or twice every now and then, and it can be considered a bit of fun. Improper trends and the fight against corruption have also been the norm in official circles in recent years. It feels like you are deliberately avoiding it and have basically not touched on it in the plot so far. This is also very abnormal. 5. The nature of the protagonist's work is too single, basically focusing on investment promotion, state-owned enterprise reform, and other economic work, which is not conducive to the protagonist's comprehensive growth. Some work experience in party building and cadre team building should be added. 6. Regarding my girlfriend, I think the previous way of writing is undesirable. A person who is passionate about work and wants to do something for the country and society should be a person who is passionate about life. Even if you have experienced the failure of two relationships, you should still accept a new relationship. Even if you add in several relationships from your previous life. Moreover, the protagonist is still very young and hormones don't allow it! The problem is, there are several good girls around, and it's too shabby for you to chicken out without even trying. No matter you tried bravely, it is normal to break up if it is not suitable! After reading the book for so long, I have a lot to say and feel unhappy about. Of course, what I say is my own opinion, which may not be correct. You must have your own arrangements, Lao Rui. I just hope that my suggestions can bring you some assistance from the perspective of a bystander. I hope Lao Rui can become more and more exciting.

After testing the poison, let me tell you what I think about this book. This is a book about the rebirth of officialdom. Chapter 1: Rebirth. In his previous life, the protagonist was a middle-level leader in his fifties. When he woke up, his soul passed through him and he just took up the post of a secretary not long after graduating from finance school. Standard routine for reborn people, the dilemma starts with two dilemmas: one is that his girlfriend has just broken up with him and is depressed; the other is that his boss who admires him has been transferred away, and he is about to be transferred to a remote place. Chapter 2: Memories This chapter is divided into two parts. The first half is the protagonist's memories of the gains and losses in the past life and self-reflection. The second half is the protagonist's classmates coming to find him. I will focus on the second half. The author's portrayal of the protagonist's classmates is quite profound. If the protagonist in the previous life lost power, he would help him, but if the protagonist was successful, he would deliberately keep a distance and even make things difficult for him. In the end, the author concludes: [I'm afraid you're not good, but I'm also afraid you're better than me! This sentence is like an enlightenment, which instantly elevates this article to several levels. It not only makes the character more real, but also makes readers deeply agree - who doesn't have such a person around them? Readers agree that the sense of immersion will naturally be stronger. Although the description of scenes in the first two chapters of this book is also excellent, Ruida tells us through this that character dialogue can sometimes give people a greater sense of immersion than scene descriptions. At the end of the chapter, a classmate asked the protagonist if he really broke up with his girlfriend. The protagonist replied yes, but deep down he could not forget his girlfriend. This aroused the curiosity of the readers. What kind of woman can the protagonist not forget even after he is reborn? Chapter 3: Historical changes. The protagonist's classmates brought bad news. The place where the protagonist was transferred was different from the one in his memory. This is the dilemma of the protagonist, but for readers, it is a reversal. Originally, they thought that the protagonist would rely on the advantage of rebirth to kill all the officials in the world, but when transferred to an unfamiliar place, the advanced audio and video of the protagonist's rebirth will be minimized. This kind of writing is very good, and it can better reflect the protagonist's abilities, making it more lovable than the average reborn person who only relies on memory to show off. At the end of the chapter, the plot changes, the career is not settled yet, the protagonist's girlfriend comes again, the two lines are intertwined, and the readers will definitely be deeply involved. Uh, one last thing to add, the book reviews are purely original and hand-written, and they are advertised based on their strength. Please be merciful to the administrator! Click on my avatar [Countercurrent Horror Era], and ask the bosses passing by to subscribe to a chapter, and I ask for hundreds of fans! Grateful! For more original book reviews on Huoshu, you can also click on my avatar.

After reading the first dozens of chapters, I felt that the author always likes to repeat sentences. What he said in the previous sentence is repeated in the next sentence. The same thing has to be said at least a dozen times. Isn't the word count too low? It's so long-winded and the plot progresses very slowly. It's annoying.

Just watched it, nothing else. Even when it comes to emotional descriptions, I get into trouble. Even at the age of 27 or 28, I don't feel like that. How can the author describe a man in his fifties like a fledgling? You are over 50 years old, and you have experienced first love, divorce, confusion, etc. As described by you, the author. Why are you so unbearable?

I've read dozens of chapters, and I haven't gone to Nandu yet. The foreshadowing is too long, and I'm too tired.

A good novel, finally written by the author, it is so bad. Who knows what will happen later. It has been so bad after following it for so long. If I had known it, I might as well not have read it.

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Writing in officialdom is hard, and finishing is even harder. Now the author is becoming more and more proficient in handling it.

After reading 100 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. The author's previous writings were really good, about being a beauty in the country, making waves, and boundless officialdom. This book is far behind. I personally think the biggest problem is the setting. The protagonist is a 50-year-old department-level cadre who is reborn, and it shouldn't be like this. It would be much better if Lan Ke Yimeng was replaced. Lu Weimin was very good before. Also, this book is a little too watery. There isn't much short content either.

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I just watched it and I don't like Bai Ling...

I had several marriages as deputy director in my previous life, and I am reborn in officialdom in this life. Do I still not know what the minefield of officialdom is?

Those who are good at the beginning will be successful, and those who are good at the end will be poor. I hope Laorui will not forget his original intention, keep up his efforts, and strive to write a work that surpasses "The Tide".

What is the upper limit of official novels now? Jungkook? Vice-state? Main department/province? In the past, someone could become the No. 1 Novelist. Can he still do it now?

[A brief review of Bai Ling] I can't say I like the character Bai Ling. On the contrary, I kind of hate her. However, I saw many book friends scolding Bai, and some of the words they said were quite unpleasant, so I felt it was necessary for me to stand up and say something. In fact, there is nothing wrong with the character of Bai Ling. What is wrong is the attitude of "Sharigan". After all, he is a person who has gone to Wuwu. In his previous life, he was also a deputy department-level leading cadre. If he still procrastinates and hesitates on such a small matter, what big things can he achieve in this life? In short, all the mistakes were Lao Rui's fault: "The break was not clean enough." I think many of the book friends who came to criticize "Still Reading Today" should have read "Backward Journey to the Age of Innocence", but what I want to say is that Bai and Ye are still very different. Ye in "Backward Journey" is really disgusting. We can tell from one thing that "Ye is really a scheming bitch"; although Bai also has various problems, he is undoubtedly much better than Ye, but this still cannot conceal Bai Ling's reality, and I have no intention of "whitewashing" Bai here. First love in college is indeed beautiful, but at the same time reality is cruel. When entering society, should you "stick to first love or accept reality"? You can't have your cake and eat it too, so obviously Bai Ling chose the latter. Of course, love is free, and Bai Ling is free to choose to break up; but we can "condemn her from a spiritual level, slap her in the face or slap her from a practical level." Summary: This relationship can only be remembered twenty years later. I am at a loss. I think Bai Ling can arrange a mistress identity for her. After all, this woman has good looks and is quite capable. I am not treating the person but the situation [naughty]

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Reagan has both writing and talent. It's true that what I wrote before is not the same thing. There is no limit to fashion and officialdom. Pig's feet are the kind of things that are used to feed sperm. Any pretty girl will be messed with. This is disgusting. Can a person who thinks with his lower body reach a high position? Illogical and devoid of rationality. I hope this book can be restrained in this regard. For example, The Chief Physician of the Nine Heavens of the Galaxy is the supreme masterpiece among the official novels. There is no obscenity involved in the whole story, but the plot is extremely fascinating. Some authors like to rely on stallions to attract book lovers, and inevitably fall into the inferior category. The official masters have blocked the writing, so I can only read it from you. I hope this one can be more normal. The essence of the official document is gaming, not stallion!

Help your friends become multi-millionaires and get a few hundred dollars in salary yourself. A beautiful woman complained that she still had nocturnal emissions when she woke up in the morning. He makes money for the masses every day without even having normal life and social interactions. There is no need for normal wages, the government's food and accommodation is enough. This is not a human being. Isn't this something that only the saints recorded in history books can do?

I really like Guan Dao Wu Bian, and I hope this book will not disappoint us.

A common problem with officialdom novels is that they have a lot of lovers, but the protagonist is very decent and serves the people. I get a headache just looking at him, I can't control my waistband, and yet he behaves so righteously.

To be honest, Regan's official writing is quite good, but one common problem is that he likes to write about harems, and the beautiful women he meets become thinking animals. However, many readers are disgusted. This does not mean that the readers are noble (I also like beautiful women, and often have many in my dreams, it is a common problem among men), but it is a common problem among men who cannot bear to damage the image of the protagonist. Besides, isn't this an opportunity to hand the opponent a knife or pull the pigtails?