Minecraft Editor

No framework, no plot, no purpose, disorganized, no clue

A bit poisonous, consider the licker as your mother

It seems quite irritating. There is too much nonsense. I feel like the word count is too low. I hope the author will reflect on it.

How many people have been "cheated" into "Minecraft"?

The protagonist is grinding and whining**********! My intelligence is not very high, but my IQ drops when I see a beautiful woman! This is the biggest problem with this book! It seriously affected the rating of this book in my mind.

The author is just like the blockbusters made by Director Zhang Da. The audience doesn't like it. He said it's not that I didn't shoot well, but that the audience doesn't understand. Anyway, that's what Director Zhang Da wants to express. We ordinary people don't understand it. We feel almost as uncomfortable watching the protagonist you wrote. So Director Zhang Da's blockbuster hit the street. You,,,,,,,,,,

A bit poisonous. Take a licker as your mother.

I feel that the MC has to destroy people's outlook on other worlds to be happy. The wooden button of Resident Evil can crack the password lock, block the monsters on the stone, dig a hole to leave, and destroy the entire base with a bucket of magma... In short, it makes scientific people think it is unscientific, magical people think it is not magic, and the unhappy world is summoned to wither.

Let me see how many comrades there are who were tricked by their names.

With all due respect, this book, as they say, has ideas but no brains. After seeing Alice resist the nuclear bomb in Resident Evil, she really couldn't hold on anymore. I summarized the reasons. First, watering down relies on association, and doing things relies on conjecture. For a long time, you can see that most of the chapters are filled with mental associations and have no actual content. How could you make the plot so embarrassing? Pig's feet work and rely on guesswork. Do you think it's natural that the final chapter of Biochemistry is not a story? Have you checked it in the hive? Did you really explore it during your week in Raccoon City? Second, brainless! ! ! Yes, this is not a joke, nor is it a joke, it is not even childish, it is really mindless! I don't want to talk about this anymore, just take a look for yourselves. As for whether it will bring wisdom... Haha

Why do you always like to start writing about Harry Potter? To be honest, I haven't seen this movie, but I don't know why the author likes to write about it, because he is famous?

I came to see my world, not to see your blind Jill traveling through time. Forget it, it can be used as a collection module to update the gameplay of Minecraft. But you don't have any, not even a chapter dedicated to writing about Minecraft. It's just selling sheep over dogs, disgusting 😤

A diaosi is still a diaosi no matter how golden her finger is. Dr. Chen teaches you how to open the right way.

I watched Thirty-One Chapter with the utmost tolerance, but I really couldn't stand it anymore. The author's thinking is not clear. He writes like a chicken eating rice, with one paw in the east and one in the west. It makes people unable to find the direction at all. Traveling to Harry Potter, TM stole the Sorcerer's Stone at the beginning. . . . An Asian Muggle met Hagrid in Alley and stole the Philosopher's Stone. . . . . What the hell is this? ! If you don't know magic, go to a magic wand shop? And dragging Hermione along? ! This is not an idea, but a hole in the mind, right? In the biochemical world, instead of hoarding resources, do you want to become a saint? ! ! ! It's too poisonous, I retreat, the author is free to do whatever you want!

Minecraft, as a big topic, is indeed unfortunate to serve as a foil for millions of words like this. ------------------ There are many reasons why a book can attract readers, and the quality of the beginning is naturally the first one. The beginning of your work is not particularly bad, nor is it particularly good. Next, it depends on writing skills, knowledge, and whether it is interesting. If your writing skills are not good, you can practice it. This is nothing more than a pile of words. The advantage of being able to copy one person is plagiarism, and the advantage of being able to copy a thousand people is that of being a master. There are ready-made works, but the descriptive ability of your works has not improved. Alan Moore is naturally the best candidate. Laorui read a portrait of Alan in his video. This is a passage worth chewing on, let alone in an online novel without pictures. If you are not good at writing, you can practice it. I can't stand what I wrote before. But there is one thing that can be changed, the selection of materials. Your work did not use "highly versatile and excellent modules", but chose "fan-created modules". Of course, there are also powerful ones among fans, but I suspect the author is not a player. The combat performance is very bad. I don't ask for Devil May Cry to be full S, and Assassin's Creed is perfectly synchronized (although it can be done below), but even if you look at the game's promotional CG and use action descriptions to analyze it step by step, you can still create excellent combat. It's a poor choice of material, and this question will undoubtedly disgust readers. There is already a powerful MC in the starting point, so the selection of talents becomes the key. [Bamboo], [Drawing Sword], [Industrial Age], and [Twilight Forest] are all extremely powerful modules. However, based on your requirements, [Kaguya's Five Problems] is more suitable than [Harry Potter]. Of course, I understand the above to mean that your work does not contain MC knowledge, and neither do you. This is a "commercial" online novel created using "Minecraft's reputation". So as a business article, naturally only the plot and writing style are important, the audience? Didn't Marvel and Xianwu dominate the scene at the starting point? However, these two key points have not been improved in your work. Take mankind's most powerful strategic weapon, the nuclear bomb, as an example. A conventional nuclear bomb (ignoring air blast, ground blast, gun structure, implosion type, TNT equivalent) is enough to vaporize all matter within 8 light years. After all, there is a neutron star 8 light years away from the earth. At the same time, nuclear bombs can be intercepted by air defense measures, unless they are struck in low-Earth orbit (outer space), in which case there is absolutely no way. But an air-burst nuclear bomb (Little Boy, Fat Man, Ancient Relic) can still threaten a city with its lethality. After all, the fireball radius, radiation radius, and later shock wave range cannot be compared to vacuum backfilling. The modern cutting-edge (Tsar bomb) has a huge range. Once dropped, Taiwan will be left with one end and one tail (just as an example, Japan cannot withstand a few rounds) At this time, I borrowed the ID name of a certain construction boss in NetEase Minecraft: Food is the original sin. It feels so right for no reason. Regardless of this trump card level weapon, talking about ordinary combat. Ha ha.

When I read Chapter 20, it was basically all descriptions of psychological activities, with some miscellaneous explanations. The main plot made no progress and was not interesting at all. The reading is not smooth in many places, and it feels confusing I have no desire to read further. Strength persuades us to retreat, 88!

Good guy, the title of this book... Tricked the dog into killing him

I don't even know what you wrote. I feel like there is no main line or outline. I just write whatever comes to mind. No wonder it's still LV2 after writing so much!

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the entire chapter was full of nonsense about the setting, or the protagonist kept filling in his head with his poor wisdom, which made me confused.

The protagonist has said in the previous chapters that he cannot survive in the MC world, so he can just leave. The plots you want to see using MC characteristics, unlimited resurrection of the protagonist, unlimited gold and money to show off are not there. The main world is called Minecraft, it is better to say it is Hogwarts. A poorly written Resident Evil can write 60 chapters. I really don't know what to watch.

One word, bad, two words, very bad, three words, very bad, four words, extremely bad.

Nonsense, nonsense, poisonous, retreat!

The beginning of writing is a bit embarrassing - after all, they are fantasy works, but the protagonist has to be written very cautiously. The part about stealing the magic stone at the beginning is really stuck This has nothing to do with the age, Mc has come out long ago Huang's persistence in Tomato is better, and some parts are quite exciting (I don't have a deep understanding of the plot, but I have a deep understanding of the module)

After reading the book reviews, I feel that many of them are just discussions with the author without getting to the point, and it does not help the author to write better. I have read nihilistic books that are characterized by imagination and surprise. There may be various problems such as writing and plot settings, but it is not a big problem for my kind of imagination. As long as the plot does not seem too protracted and does not follow the world plot blindly (of course, if the writing is not good and you can't control it, just follow the plot)

"Being a God of Cookery in Time Traveling Animation" is a pity

That sucks. You're writing a novel, not a game description.

I was confused when I read it. I didn't know what I was writing for a long time, and it was nonsense.

I have customized a novel for my world. Can you please taste it and point out my shortcomings?

Looking at the directory, it seems that it is not the Minecraft editor, but the Naruto World editor.

I used to use my mobile phone account to travel through the fantasy world. But I changed my phone. .