
One Piece: Super Awakening
海贼之超级觉醒
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 75k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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2Fans
35Chapters
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The worldview of One Piece is gone...
Now that I'm reading Chapter 8... I can't help but complain. Let's not talk about the appearance of the protagonist, Diaosi... Just look at the awakening elements mentioned in Chapter 8... It's full of poisonous points, this isn't a comprehensive comic... The worldview of pirates has been completely written down by you... The elements you mentioned can only be realized by fruits in One Piece. There can't be any restrictions at all, right? I can't imagine the scene of awakening the light element and fighting with Kizaru, awakening the ice element and fighting with Qingzhi... Another problem the author has is the way he writes pig's feet. It's full of Chinese internet fantasy diaosi style, especially the sentence "Thirty years in the east of Hedong and thirty years in the west of Hexi". It's really... This sentence is really poorly used and it's not in line with the style of Japanese anime like One Piece you wrote. It makes me uncomfortable when I read it... (This is just a personal opinion, don't start a fight or anything like that.)
The protagonist was so startled that his balls hurt when he saw it
The protagonist always looks like a loser and is speechless
And he's always surprised