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If you damage the foundation, you are useless. Your sister really knows how to write. Let me see how you write. Don't slap yourself in the face later.

First reaction, Tiandao Library🤭

Let me just ask, is this book a stallion? . . . . . Now, apart from the heroine, there are already two spare parts. . .

After watching the beginning, the writing and creativity were okay, but the plot just felt fake, especially the female protagonist who is a god-level genius. She liked the male protagonist for no reason, but there was nothing special about the male protagonist. Apart from cheating, even the performance of the male protagonist when he first entered the other world, like the supporting characters, seemed to have a worrying IQ. First of all, so many people have failed to enter. It is obvious that the world cannot be judged by common sense. Secondly, even the readers have already guessed what is happening due to the traces detected on the satellite, but the plot characters are still making random guesses. This kind of readers have long known that the fact that the characters in the plot are still interacting there will give the readers a sense of intellectual inferiority, and they will not be able to take on the role of the protagonist, which makes people feel very awkward.

This book is very good-looking so far. The author is really awesome. It is said that the protagonist can learn everything and become better and better at killing enemies at several levels. The heroine appears at the beginning of the article and confirms that this setting should be regarded as the poisonous point of the novel. But this book is able to turn these poisonous points into pleasant ones. The writing is clean and neat, and the male and female protagonists portrayed are the kind of real geniuses with strong temperament and strength. Even Yan Chixiao, who received a box lunch when he first appeared on the scene, has a distinctive personality and can leave an impression on people. I feel that the author is very good at portraying characters. Just looking at the author's related works, it seems that many of them are about eunuchs, and the author is still publishing two books. I also like the other god-level BUFF book. I hope that the two books I am writing are not about eunuchs. Come on, author