Elemental Holy Spirit of Douluo Dalu

The writing is so messy, there is no sense of connection or immersion, the writing is poor, and there is no reading experience.

The martial spirit originated from his parents, and it mutated like this. Didn't his father suspect his mother of cheating?

Name: Wei Xuelong male Wuhun: DNF Male Ghost Sword Berserker Soul Ring: Hundred Years, Hundred Years, Thousand Years Soul Skill: First Soul Skill: Mountain Collapsing Strike Second Soul Skill: Bloodthirsty Third Soul Skill: Soul-Eating Hand Background: Because of his weird martial soul, everyone thought he was an evil soul master, so they expelled him. With the help of his parents, he left his hometown and came to Shrek Academy, hoping to become a great soul master. Personal recommendation: Play a supporting role to the protagonist. 🙏

Example: Name: Mu Xiao Male Wuhun: Wheel of Destiny Soul ring: ten years, a hundred years, a thousand years Soul Skill: First Soul Skill: Second Soul Skill: (Don't be too weird, be normal! You can play a supporting role!) (Very, very good, you can play a supporting role!) (Huh? What does it mean to be very, very good? What I like is called very, very good!) (I hope you will support me, click to collect, and vote for recommendation!)

Doesn't it mean that Douluo Dalu's fan fiction can't be signed?

Please give me a normal Douluo fan novel, not those overly cheating novels about three-life and five-life martial arts.

Dear author, how did you sign the contract with Douluo Fan?

Your sense of immersion as the author is too poor. There is no sense of time travel at all. There is not even one protagonist. Even a six-year-old child can't be fooled, and he traveled through time. What a fart! Don't tell me, that woman is also a spirit beast. Aren't you from the Thief Douluo Continent? I don't ask for anything, I just ask you to be closer to the original. I don't object to you adding your own writing, but can you please not give some of the third part of Douluo Dalu to Tiandao. In the first part, for example, those soul beasts are obviously the ones after Tang San became a god in the second part of "Douluo Dalu". So, please author, please be consistent with the actual situation. This is not to say that you are stupid. I just want to say that if you can write a little more realistically and have a little sense of empathy, I think your book will definitely be very good.

Emmmm, since you can write whatever you want, don't write those embarrassing words.

Anyway, I can tell that the author didn't read Douluo Dalu seriously (yawn). When writing fan fiction, you should have something of your own, but the main thing is that if you have your own, it will be hard to lose the original. Come on

When I first saw that the protagonist of this book only had one martial spirit and it was still a wheel, I knew that this book was going to collapse. The martial arts were too confusing, and I didn't even know which soul skills it was.

Chapter 182 is finished. Could it be that you are teasing me?

I'll give you a monthly pass, which can also be considered as a settlement.

It's really illogical. Go away. I'm just thinking. I'm sorry.

Author, stop being a eunuch! ! ! (See the chapter about you having no motivation)

Why has the book club disbanded?

Name: Wet Nurse, female; Martial Spirit: Holy Spear of Punishment; Soul power level 90, soul ring, black, black, black, red, black, red, black, red; soul skills should be copied from those of the Wet Nurse with Poisonous Milk Powder

I feel like the protagonist's code of conduct and character creation in this book are just a patchwork of characters from Long Aotian and Dark Avengers protagonists. You, the protagonist, don't have that kind of life experience. I would like to ask how did you get such an extreme personality? And when writing fan fiction, can you at least respect the setting of the original book?

The book is great, I also wrote one 😊

After reading a few pictures, the key is the writing style. . . There are also many poisonous points in Zou Zou's speech.

Name: Linghu Yue (innately full of soul power) Gender: Unknown (the author sets it himself) Age:13 Wuhun: Clear Sky Moon Gun (guns and weapons are affected by the weather) Toward, each time you break through the great realm, a clear sky moon wheel will be added. Pieces, nine is full) Soul ring: yellow, yellow, purple, black, black, red, and red Skill 1: Skill Assembly (Assemble fragments into modern weapons; such as sniper rifles, rifles, etc.) Second skill: fatal blow (double hit to the head or heart, Damage to other parts is normal attack damage) Third skill: Enchantment (increase elemental damage to weapons) to enchant other people's weapons) The author can set other skills by himself (those that attack high blood and thin blood) Plot: Picked up in the Star Forest, similar in age to the protagonist, received lunch at level 90

The author is accumulating experience and the next book may be better.

The part about giving a hundred gold soul coins to the girl Xiaoyun is mentioned in the book itself. Ordinary people may not get it in their lifetime. It would be too dangerous to just give such a sum of money to a little girl on the street. She also asked her to go to the medical clinic and show it in front of so many people, which was more dangerous than the money. The book may not set up dangerous plots, but in reality, there will definitely be no good results. The writing here is a bit sloppy.

Name: Ouyang Xiaohong Soul power: level 60 Gender: Female Age: 15 Wuhun: Gem Sword Soul ring: yellow, yellow, purple, black, black, red, and red Skill 1: Hidden (hidden weapon) Skill 2: Sneak attack (attack damage from the rear is doubled) Skill 3: Wind Wings (four small tornadoes form behind to form reverse thrust) Skill 4: Perception (can sense the location of the person who has been attacked) Skill 5: Treatment (perform treatment) Skill 6: Defense (Wrap yourself in sapphire blue) Skill 7: Perseverance (Injuries on your body will not affect the battle until you die) Skill 8: Giant (similar to Susanoo's Gem Giant) Skill 9: Reflection (reflection attack)

After the appraisal is completed, it is being sold as dog meat. That's because the name is related to Douluo Continent