My Journey Started from Super Seminary

Author, can you redo that table of contents?

It feels short, weak, and boring. . . Jiang Ye is completely confused here and so boring. . . When will the night end

She expressed that she did not want Liang Bing to be resurrected, and those who hoped to be resurrected were those who wanted her to be with Qiangwei, "What you lost was just billions of lives, but what she lost was love." But her sins did not mean that they were written off once she became King of Apocalypse. Countless beings in the known universe were cursing her in the most vicious words. Liang Bing, who became an angel, passed all of her sins on to the angels.

It's the end of the year! I plan to finish updating the Zhuxian dungeon today and tomorrow, about 15 updates! Anyway, the science fiction editor has refused to sign the contract, and I am ready to let myself go! How do you feel?

I don't know what's so good about Liang Bing, he's just a devil. How much harm does it bring to the earth. Forced whitewashing. From the standpoint of the earth, all enemies must be destroyed.

People like Xiaolun don't deserve anything. You can use reality to bring it in. It's just stupid.

What are the other fanfics? It's just an urban harem story under the cover of a super seminary. Everyone has their own favorites. What I like is to make up for the regrets of the super seminary, such as Angel Chase, Liang Bing, Qiangwei... Of course, Kesha has to die, otherwise the plot will not be able to develop, I'm sorry, little titty Sha... I hope this one will not go back to the harem, at least it will not be split into official roles...

The content of Chapter 29 of the first volume has been completely rewritten, and it is quite different from the original, but it can barely be synchronized with the content of the subsequent Super God chapter. I completely feel that the new version is good, and I will gradually revise the subsequent chapters! Give me some advice, thank you! ! I guess there is no unsigned author like me who rewrites a book. My determination must have been seen! More votes, more collections!

! ? ? There is one thing I don't understand why Reina and Yaowen are working together to rebuild the new Deno. ? ? Deno is not one but two. Dexing, Noxing. And Reina herself is the monarch of the top civilization in the universe besides angels. How could Reina marry outside?

I retreated after seeing a fight with Yan after only a few chapters. Yan has been fighting for seven thousand years and has a third-generation divine body. Why do you, a newbie, have such a good fight with him? Yan's Lei Lei is not a vegetarian. Do you think she is not fast? Or don't you have a strong sense of fighting? Or lack of skills? A man who has lived longer than Chinese civilization is like this? Is this a pure warrior?

It's really uncomfortable to mix the two systems together. Brother Monkey is the protagonist of the third generation body. In the early stage, Brother Monkey was more powerful? When you first experienced two worlds that were not high-level martial arts, you pressed Yan, who is also a third generation, to the ground and rubbed him? Is it better to be invincible in everything? And angels can read dark information. It doesn't mean that they can't see you if you avoid surveillance. It's also the system's ability to erase dark information from pig's feet?

Kesha is at most a golden immortal, and she has only reached this level physically. As for her cultivation and state... Do you think a scientific person can have such things?

I have never seen the invincible genre since the beginning. They are all mainstream abuse. The protagonist dies in various ways. He is robbed of weapons, killed by his own weapons, killed by Ato, killed by Morgana, killed by a supernova. He is abused in various ways, such as monkey abuse, Ato abuse, and Morgana abuse. A single person can abuse the protagonist.

I said that everyone in the Super Theological Seminary has their own shining points (Hua Ye has no moral... From a human perspective), so in fact, every character is okay, Su is loyal, Mo loves his subordinates, Ka's pursuit of knowledge, and I hope everyone will not only see what they have had. ·No one in Si's bad side or good side has been whitewashed, but their shining points have been highlighted. Furthermore, I don't think I will necessarily do better than Xiao Lun and Xin Ye. I think their growth process is okay, otherwise it will be a brainless novel. Finally, let me talk about this book. The author's ideas are very similar to mine, but I agree with the devil Atuo and others. I love the fool among fools. I don't agree with them, Mo's actions, and Mo's order. I agree more with angels but they are a bit extreme, but this does not hinder my admiration for angels. Although I don't like them, I admit that they have qualifications. I also try to be as comprehensive as possible with other people, civilizations, and orders of faith. Evaluation, so I will try to have a happy ending for all the characters, but I don't think I can afford it, so I read the author's book. Just because of its different themes and ideas from other fans, I will read it. As for some white and water... This is used to commemorate the characters of the Super Seminary and the super god in the author's heart. Is it necessary to choose this way? It is much better than Kai Gong, Aotian, and Dark. My favorite fanfics are those with endings in the author's mind and regretful changes. Maybe I don't like some of the endings, but just don't read them. Whatever you want to criticize, just write it yourself.

In fact, any Dino conspiracy, supergod conspiracy, or domestic high-level conspiracy in the world of supergods is not valid, because they have no way to control a future god unless they transmit their thoughts from an early age. But obviously, in the original work, no one tried to seduce Galen from an early age. There are a few of them, but Galen and the others have very upright views, and in the context of a big universe era, engaging in these conspiracies and tricks always makes me feel petty. Not to mention that the domestic high-level officials have no ability to control Galen and the others. It can be confirmed that Deno and Dukao are the leaders who are capable. , If he wanted to engage in a pyramid scheme, how could his daughter feed Morgana for the sake of the earth, and was assassinated? I was told how the devil could assassinate him so easily, and I never thought that the aircraft carrier was bombed, all the soldiers were dispersed, and even the wet nurse was taken away by Morgana. A devil who can open the insect gate at will, how difficult is it to kill a Dukao? As for the supernatural conspiracy, needless to say, the principals have reconciled, and there is only one wandering Ryze, who is a scientific researcher. It seems that after the Xiongbing Company was completely handed over to the earth, he went to pursue the footsteps of space. Finally, let me say it again, there are so many civilizations and such a big stage. If you want to write about these conspiracies and conspiracies, it is best to summarize them in a small number of words, otherwise you will be really petty.

If you like someone, you just like one person. If you like several people, that's not called liking, that's called lusting after someone else's body. It's disgusting. The most disgusting thing is the harem story. Do you know what Dao Lu is?

Regarding relationships, I personally think there is still a single heroine. Others can be ambiguous, but not too deep. It is best to kill the plot, but this will make many people uncomfortable, so how to write it depends on the author

No wonder the grades are poor, the character of the protagonist is too contradictory. The time traveler will definitely receive the education of cyber blood before crossing over, and he also experienced two worlds in the past, which is considered a boss behind the scenes. At the beginning, the protagonist has experienced so much, and his character has not grown at all? Is it irritable, has the mentality of a child, and doesn't have any sense of strategizing and being under control? One moment I am mature, the next moment I am doing nothing, my head hurts just by looking at it.

I retreated after seeing a fight with Yan after only a few chapters. Yan has been fighting for seven thousand years and has a third-generation divine body. Why do you, a newbie, have such a good fight with him? Yan's Lei Lei is not a vegetarian. Do you think she is not fast? Or don't you have a strong sense of fighting? Or lack of skills? A man who has lived longer than Chinese civilization is like this? Is this a pure warrior?

I don't like demons, I don't like angels, and I don't like Dukao. If you ask me, it would be best for the protagonist to kick all these aliens off the earth. In short, as long as I don't join the Super Seminary, don't be a licking dog, and get all these aliens out of the earth, I can continue to watch it. This is just my personal opinion, and there will definitely be people in the comment section who come to criticize me, but I really can't stand it when I see Dukao, a so-called war madman, being whitewashed by the author.

The author looks up what Daluo Jinxian means. Don't write it as a weak chicken Daluo. There is also a super god universe that can destroy Jinxian by just blowing on it. Don't write it down.

The revised version looks better, I hope I can write it again

If you want to read it, just read it. If you don't want to, just read it. Why do you have so many pressing things?

The strong make the rules, and the weak follow the rules. If you don't even have basic logic, then this book will not be attractive.

The protagonist wastes 10,000 years in all the worlds, so he might as well say a word of silence to Ge Xiaolun! The protagonist has the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms and other super powers, and even the skin of the super genetic warrior is not broken.

This book is awesome, with high points and low points. The bad parts are so bad that it hurts the eyes, but it also manages to fill in the holes as much as possible. I thought it would be a multi-female protagonist, but it turned out to be a single heroine novel, and the first one is not together 🙂 It feels like the author didn't have an outline when writing it.

Why don't you dare to do anything, can't do anything well, and your destiny is a little bit worse every time, and it's unreasonable.

Are you going to open a new book? Is it this number or something else?

The third generation, Yan, Thorton can actually be injured by stones. Is your stone more powerful than the God-killing Martial? You can also attack Yan with your mind. The angel's brain development should be above 25%. He can actually be hurt by you. There is also an awakened Liu Chuang who doesn't want to reveal his identity and can be beaten by TM.

It is not easy to insist on being more spicy. Ended around 430-440?