When the Game Plane Comes to the End of the World

It's a story, the protagonist has a weak intelligence. As for the author saying that he doesn't want his sister to be in danger, I just laugh. He knows that a catastrophe is coming, but he doesn't let his sister to strengthen herself. He still uses this to explain it. It seems that the protagonist can defy the sky and the earth and solve the catastrophe with just a wave of his hand. No one else has this IQ.

How could such a good beginning end so poorly?

The protagonist is called Linlang, the game is called Linlang, and the world is called Linlang. It really makes people feel uncomfortable watching it. The character of the protagonist is also disgusting, and the whole process is extremely frustrating to watch. If the world is about to end, why would you still ride to school? I want to ask what is the point of going to school now? For water word count? And there's that mess about the consortium. Are you really writing a post-apocalyptic novel?

Pig's Feet took 3,000 yuan, which was less than 5,000 at most, to buy a helmet that he thought would cost at least tens of thousands before the price went up. What kind of logic is this? But in the end, you actually bought it. You didn't even bring enough money, so you wanted to buy a helmet on credit.

It seems that all the post-apocalyptic game articles will be reborn, which is a bit boring.

Linlangxing. Ye Linlang! Earth. Ye Earth is so awkward. It might as well be that the aliens changed the name later.

The inner monologue of the mentally retarded protagonist, looking for a crazy villain when nothing happens, and a bloody plot involving siblings. . . Toxic death

I didn't want to read the book after reading the review. The author's writing is so simple and boring.

This book is too hypocritical and contains many poisonous points.

Wouldn't it be better to quietly write an online game? Either it's saving the world, it's the end of the world, or it's revenge for so and so, what are all the fake ones doing?

Did I remember it wrong? Isn't there something wrong with Jian Ying? Why would he be allowed to serve as the secret manager of the elite 500 people?

What a bad book. It looks so confusing. Is the protagonist the boss from the previous life or the current person?

The closer you get to the back, the more poisonous spots there are. . Very scary

Selection of new books, any book can be recommended, this book has not been updated for 22 days, it can be considered a selection of new books, I am so drunk

The protagonist is a reborn person, why would he still hesitate to buy a helmet? It's too lackluster and doesn't fit the protagonist who has experienced life and death. Furthermore, just like in reality, NPCs in games don't have names, so how can they have famous names? Wouldn't it be more logical to say wanted warrant?

Very good idea, keep writing it down

It's best if the heroine is single, and the plot is a bit draggy. Some of the upgrading and monster fighting should be shortened and dealt with in one stroke. After all, the main theme is the end of the world, so many impatient readers will just give up and enter the end of the world as soon as possible.

Author, I didn't start like this before, even if the writing was a bit stiffer. Don't transition like this, it's a routine.

Let's change the main character's name first. One moment He is bad, the other Ye Linlang, it's easy to cause drama.

Come on, come on, come on! 💋🌹

It's really good. Come on↖(^ω^)↗It's a pity that it ends too quickly.

What rubbish, is this the end? Unfinished

I think it's okay, but after reading too many similar articles, I'm still a little bit addicted.

The main character's name is particularly interesting. Although it's good, it feels a bit strange when combined with the name of his planet. Just like someone on Earth calls Ye Earth

I hope the author won't write too many background settings in the future. It's really a bit verbose after reading it.

Novel is not a tool for you to vent your dissatisfaction with reality. Who doesn't know what it is like in reality? Why fast food writing is popular is because it can numb yourself and relax your mood. A few words of ridicule and sharing the same hatred with the enemy are fine, but long and lengthy descriptions are annoying. Grasp the degree. The more important thing is to be careful with 404, brother.

I don't know how the writing is, but the author has a very good attitude. It can be seen that he attaches great importance to the achievements of this book. It should be a labor of love. Give it a try. Give the author a chance and give yourself a chance.

Big cheers for the author↖(^ω^)↗

Sorry everyone, I have been poisoned! Sticking to Chapter 56 is already the limit.

Three or four women in one book do not count as a harem, right?