Rebirth of Japanese High School Life

Why don't the chapter names and chapter content match?

Author, you can write a supplement to this article 20 years later

Tomoyo and Sakura is the first anime I watched .

Farewell The author insists on dressing the male protagonist in female clothes, so he might as well just write about the transformation.

Might as well transform and become a girl! Women's clothing! ? The diaphragm should be panicked! But it's okay, there are people who like women's clothing! Come on, author! ! ! If you like to watch but don't want to go away, I'll go away first to respect you! By the way, what the hell are you trying to push me! A dog beeped!

This...

Chapter 11... Farewell🙏... I don't hate women's clothing, but I appreciate that I don't like women's clothing for the sake of women's clothing.

Cross-dressing has been written badly, and it makes me sick when I see it.

The three Maoyan sisters would actually think that a nine-year-old boy would take advantage of him and have trouble with a child. Isn't this poisonous? Also, the main character just wants to be a Phantom Thief again and never considers his own age.

Author, if you dare to do anything in this book, I will kill you with a knife. Can you write more emotional plots with Chise?

Author, please change your high school to a primary school.

There's something poisonous about Transforming Army Girl...

Many chapters have been deleted, and there is this hot search. I thought it was a Japanese high school student's vest that was unblocked. But I was so excited.

It's over two hundred chapters, and it's still elementary school. Japanese elementary school students are so precocious. Isn't the title of this book College Life?

I feel like I'm the only one watching, no complaints.

What the hell, the chapter names don't match at all.

This is obviously about the life of primary school students, where does the life of college come from?

I just watched the beginning, and the protagonist's character is confusing and his strength is vague. I don't know what other people's common sense is, but it is common sense that the older the vintage of red wine and white wine, the better. I just don't know. Those who have seen Maoyan should remember that there is a plot where he steals red wine. I remember that the bottle of wine is very expensive. Also, in a fusion world where the protagonist knows that there is extraordinary power, the Moon Rabbit, who is the pinnacle of power (known), reveals his attitude. Is he thinking that he is doing too well? Praying to the gods in a shrine (even though everyone knows that Japanese gods are miraculous) to kill him in a collision. How can an ordinary person seek death like this? The scene of the fight against the gangster was so embarrassing. How do you make me believe that a kid who can fall even when running can beat a kid who is older than him? Several times, I have seen the author's descriptions. The protagonist is either a monster thief or an unscrupulous thief who lacks common sense. His heart is higher than the sky and his destiny is thinner than the paper. In summary, I persuade him to quit and leave.

In Chapter 11, forget about dressing up as a woman for work. In Chapter 96, you get the magic book and forcefully transform into a woman. It also comes with gender-changing special effects. Okay, you can force-feed poison and directly change the woman's clothing into a fixed buff. Goodbye.

To be honest, your writing style is not very good, especially some "image words", such as "pinch". I really don't know what it means. I think it's just a laugh, it doesn't feel right. There are also some metaphorical sentences, such as "sweat dripping from the head". It's really embarrassing to see this. If you can If you use "a drop of sweat hanging on your head", it will express the helpless emotion more specifically. If you use "a drop of sweat hanging on your head" to describe it, you can't tell whether you are sweating from exhaustion or sweating helplessly. Although you can tell it by watching the plot, it is very distorted. Finally, thank you for letting me see the memories of my childhood (even though the ending is so crazy!!!!!!!!!!!! Why is it so bad!!!! It's so bad that I need to swallow a thousand needles!!!)

Whip the corpse, when will the author update it? 😅😅😅 Also, are there any other Kazakura books? Don't fight at night, I want fan fiction.

Although it is finished, this is also the first fan fiction I have read. Although it has some shortcomings, I am still very satisfied with it. I also hope that the author will get better and better.

This is not a bus to kindergarten. I want to get off.

I wrote some of them based on my own ideas, please forgive me "Yes, I am very grateful to Sister Xiaotong and Sister Xiaolei for taking me in at that time, but what did you do, cause trouble for me, and ignore you for Sister Xiaotong's sake? What did you do later? You stole my work clothes and forced me to wear a maid uniform. Ha, I am a man. Do you want an apology from me? Don't even think about it, what bad habits have you been accustomed to?" You said calmly on the chair. Then, Yuu looked at the next student, "Sister Xiaotong, thank you very much for taking me in at that time. I'm sorry for the inconvenience caused to you and sister Xiaolei because of my nonsense. I'm sorry, sister Xiaotong." Yuu sat on the chair, lowered his head, and said sincerely. "You... You..." Afterlife Hitomi looked at Afterlife Ai who was crying because of Yuu's words and didn't know how to refute. Then, she ran upstairs and returned to her own bedroom. Afterlife Hitomi said worriedly, "Xiao Ai, Xiao Ai, Yuu you..." "Sister Xiaotong, it seems that Sister Xiaolei is not at home today, so I'll leave first? Sister Xiaotong, don't worry, I won't help my brother-in-law anymore. I really didn't know it would cause such a big trouble to my sister. I'm sorry, Sister Xiaotong, can you take me home? I have small parts at the police station, and I won't need them in the future. , Count it as my apology. And I will transfer one million yen to your account tomorrow." Yuu jumped off the chair and looked at Sister Xiaotong who turned her back. "And, if you need my help with anything, Sister Xiaotong, you can come to me. I like Sister Xiaotong who is such a good person. " Lai Sheng Tear turned back and looked at Yu with a complicated face, "Uh, no, the eldest sister is sleeping on the second floor. Yu, wait a moment, I will go up and call her." Suddenly, Lai Sheng Lai's voice came from the second floor.  …  …  … I just want to write down this part of the middle dialogue The last paragraph of the sentence about giving money is based on the previous article. The next life loves to apologize, and the next life's tears exempted the compensation of hundreds of thousands of yen (it seems to be the price) of red wine. We will never tolerate bad habits.

In fact, the work is well written, but the writing style is a bit poor, and the description of the relationship between the characters is a bit inconsistent.