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After reading Chapter 12, I would like to share my opinion: The author's creativity and world background are described very well, but the plot is a little too hasty, and the pretense and slap-in-the-face plots are too frequent, which somewhat affects the reading experience (probably because the writing is too plain, which makes an old bookworm like me very twisted). It seems to be forcing ridicule, showing off, and pushing the plot. I hope the author can write better stories in the future ^_^

******The plot of the protagonist who is mentally retarded

I've only read ten chapters and there are already a lot of pretense and slaps in the face. Isn't it too frequent?

After reading Chapter 20, I found that the protagonist's IQ is very lacking.

The aura of mental retardation is too powerful. I can't stand it anymore. I'm withdrawing.

What the author wrote at the beginning made me not interested in reading it

As we explore forward, you might as well come and write a story together. For example, set up a character you like, point out some mistakes, or give some good suggestions. Newbies and new books. If you want to comment, please comment on this post. I will browse and read it every day.

Don't ask me why, I can't afford crocodile

I don't want to read it. The protagonist's psychological and mental development is too late. For a person in his 20s and an orphan, his mind should be mature to a certain extent. However, the protagonist in the article is like a kid who came out of junior high school. He is as white as boiled water.

Not much to say, there are many poisonous points, the pretense routine is too old-fashioned, and it only describes one world. Obviously there is capital to enter other worlds. The whole route is a bit like the style from 10 to 13 years.

Please withdraw it. If this book becomes popular, I will challenge all the great people.

Six votes a day support, although it's not much, some thoughts

Many readers like to gain weight first and then read it. After all, it is too thin and not satisfying. However, many times I find that if I keep it, I'll keep it... Holy shit, I'll die if I keep it! I would like to say that as a book writer, coding is like raising a child. Who wants to work hard for hours every day and persist for a long time, only to suddenly become a eunuch? So the author has reasons for not updating. As a good young author with morality, three views, ideals, ambitions and dreams. What I want to say is: Even if it sucks, it won't be a eunuch. (Actually no different from eunuch) Usually, I will tell you in advance before the eunuch, and then the last chapter will be finished... Therefore, readers who keep books may occasionally see that I have not updated. As long as the above complaint does not occur, please don't worry. Maybe I am delayed by something and cannot update for the time being. So keep it safe! (After all, I have to work and support a family, and my baby is about to be born, so I have to be even busier.) Don't worry, I will tell you before the eunuch! !