The Myriad Worlds App

What the author wrote at the beginning made me not interested in reading it

Please withdraw it. If this book becomes popular, I will challenge all the great people.

The aura of mental retardation is too powerful. I can't stand it anymore. I'm withdrawing.

I don't want to read it. The protagonist's psychological and mental development is too late. For a person in his 20s and an orphan, his mind should be mature to a certain extent. However, the protagonist in the article is like a kid who came out of junior high school. He is as white as boiled water.

After reading Chapter 20, I found that the protagonist's IQ is very lacking.

I've only read ten chapters and there are already a lot of pretense and slaps in the face. Isn't it too frequent?

Not much to say, there are many poisonous points, the pretense routine is too old-fashioned, and it only describes one world. Obviously there is capital to enter other worlds. The whole route is a bit like the style from 10 to 13 years.

******The plot of the protagonist who is mentally retarded

After reading Chapter 12, I would like to share my opinion: The author's creativity and world background are described very well, but the plot is a little too hasty, and the pretense and slap-in-the-face plots are too frequent, which somewhat affects the reading experience (probably because the writing is too plain, which makes an old bookworm like me very twisted). It seems to be forcing ridicule, showing off, and pushing the plot. I hope the author can write better stories in the future ^_^

Don't ask me why, I can't afford crocodile