The Space-Wielding Girl's Struggle

Author, you have too many loopholes, but your writing style is still good. First of all, let me talk about your loopholes. You often use "la" as the last word at the end of some sentences, which is not good. It depends on the sentence type. You just use "la" and just add it and it is done. Of course, it may be that you prefer to end with "la". Secondly, character names will be coded incorrectly, such as Wang Chen becomes Wang Cheng. Although it is not frequent, it still has some impact on the reading experience. There is also the nickname of the protagonist. Generally, the name has three characters, and the last two are directly called. Only two characters will be called one character and read twice. I am not very good at expressing it, but I think it is better to call it Xia Xia, Xia Xia or something, which is a bit awkward. The above is a personal opinion. I hope the author can correct it. I am still very optimistic about this book. The most effective way to correct the three loopholes is probably to finish writing it, read it yourself, read it again to others, and correct the mistakes. I hope the author will adopt his opinions and don't think I'm verbose. Thank you. 😊😊😊

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