Dimensional Observer

After reading the previous article, I felt that the writing was really good at the beginning, but when it came to rescuing Fite, I felt that the plot arrangement was very unreasonable. I could feel that the author intended to write the episode 6 years ago through Fite, but using it here was really a failure. It was originally a major suspense in the book. The various obscure expressions at the beginning of the work were very interesting and gave me I have a strong desire to read on, but the sense of urgency that I originally had about rescuing a girl has been dragged out by the abrupt plot of hundreds of chapters. After reading it, it gives people a very watery feeling. If the chapter about the sister can be concluded compactly and the story of 6 years ago can be released through various fragments, the beginning of the book can be said to be very good, but it is a pity. Although there are some minor problems with the others, they are all acceptable. It can be said to be a well-written novel, and readers who have not read the original work can also read it well.

Come and make a sound😭 I now feel that except for the four book friends who have been subscribing, the other more than a thousand collections are all fake. This is so scary 😭

Emmmm, the dialogue [] is very subtle. To be honest, the book can still be read, and the writing can also be improved in the later period... Okay, I can't edit it anymore, this dialog box is really, really, really uncomfortable╯╰... I have made a full subscription, which is considered supportive, and the plot is actually okay 😅😅😅

After all, there are really few two-dimensional novels. Can see ( ˘•ω•˘ )

My wife Sai Gao⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾

It's really getting cold. No one is watching and I'm very unmotivated! 😭 Even if you keep books, you should also activate an automatic subscription! 😢

This introduction... Has a million words and is still as good as jade... emmm... I don't care how long it takes, as long as it doesn't last until the end...

Why! Dian Niang's two-dimensional area has always been like this, just treat it as practicing writing, come on

Come on, don't give up

After reading it, I still want to read it, and I still want to read it. Bigbig hurry up and update, I'm really looking forward to itLooking forward(∼‾▽‾)→))*‾▽‾*)o[finger poke]

Asha is still the best 😁

It was really uncomfortable to watch the scene of rescuing Feit (•̀へ •́

After reading a little bit, I think it's okay, but the author is indeed a werewolf, how can he persist for so many chapters?

What type of book is this? Insert an eye first

I thought it would be free forever like the book "Oath and Destiny", but I didn't expect it to be on the shelves in the blink of an eye.

Is the author still alive? A small recommendation vote to comfort and comfort

I just found this book, is it a eunuch...🔨

This result is really disastrous. . .

How should I put it? The writing style is okay, but the subject matter is not very pleasing.

Kneel down! 😄