Rebirth and Traveling Through the Worlds

The first chapter comes with a warning to quit. If you want to start a harem, don't look very infatuated. And that Su Muxi, if her relationship was really sincere and deep, why did she marry a boss right after graduation, and said that the boss was a scumbag if his business failed and he drank too much? It is normal for a originally successful person to suddenly face failure and not be able to accept alcoholism all of a sudden. And Dongfang Yue, since the protagonist already understood Su's feelings for her when she was in college, and she got involved with Dongfang again, I feel that the protagonist's emotional line is so messed up. If the author is not good at writing emotional dramas, it is recommended to write less emotional dramas.

Are you toxic? Did ancient people build power stations? Have you studied physics? Do you know the positive and negative poles? Can you make a generator? How do you cause disconnection? What about the light bulb? What about the voltage regulator? Do you think it depends on your mouth? What you are talking about about ancient man-made power plants is like talking about our modern man-made flying saucers. Do you think a shell is a flying saucer?

Did the author not read the entire book? The description of the realm in it will be criticized by the original party. In the original chaotic world of Pangu, The realms of Qi Refining Immortal are: Celestial Immortal (the quality of golden elixir is third level, all in this world are third-level Celestial Immortal), Chunyang True Immortal (the true immortal with the lowest quality golden elixir is equivalent to the gods, and has understood a great way), Daluo Taozu (has understood a heavenly way (yin) Yang, the Five Elements, Creation, Destruction, and Chaos (this is the God of the World if you understand it thoroughly). In the outside world, you are directly the Ancestral Immortal. However, in this world, with the breakthrough of the Daluo by the third-class Golden Pill, you are the ordinary Taoist ancestor (equivalent to the True God or the pure Yang Zhen who breaks through the first-class Golden Pill. Immortal), those who understand the combination of heaven, such as yin and yang, the five elements, and creation and destruction are top-level Taoist ancestors (the strength is close to the ancestor gods), and those who have broken through the true gods in the body refining realm are leader-level Taoist ancestors (equivalent to the ancestor gods). At this time, they can be called ancestor immortals) , World God (who has understood the Chaos Heavenly Way or the other nine Heavenly Ways, also called the Chaos Immortal. When he breaks through, he will destroy all the golden elixir space and gather it together, returning to chaos, making a chaotic world appear in the golden elixir. Then the golden elixir is broken, and the Taoist tree is formed) Immortal-level realm of divine and demon body refining: God of Heaven (comparable to a Pure Yang True Immortal), True God (integrated into a great avenue), Ancestral God (integrated into a heavenly way), World God (the cultivator of gods and demons reshapes the divine body with "Tao" as the core, and achieves a skyrocketing increase in strength through each jump of the divine body.)

As for the protagonist's scumbag cultivation, he seems to be invincible in the world. He also lets those big shots know that he came from time-travel. He also lets those big shots know that the protagonist can travel to other worlds and cultivate into that kind of big shot. He is not a ruthless master. Only the author can have whimsical and poisonous ideas!

Chapter 1: My childhood sweetheart gets married. I heard that my husband's business failed and he drank too much and said that other people are scumbags. I feel sorry for my childhood sweetheart. Suddenly and without any warning, he suddenly changed his mind and wanted to have sex with his own aunt... Then he entered the Divine Eagle and immediately wanted to have sex with Xiao Longnu... Suddenly another girl came out and he also wanted to have sex with him... I was also drunk, so this loser has the nerve to call others scumbag?

Trash. Just read the first chapter and you will know that he is a trash who can't move when he sees a woman.

Mom sells batches, and she still complains for five thousand a month. I am going to commit suicide for three thousand a month.

The first chapter has the effect of dissuading you. Damn, you are so lustful, and you have such an infatuated look on your face, who are you pretending to show?

Extremely poisonous🤫🤫

Strength Chapter 1: Persuasion to retreat! ! !

People like me who don't pay to watch it usually don't have any brains. It doesn't matter that the protagonist is always a five or six year old child in the early stage. It doesn't matter that Huang Rong calculated the rice yield in the Song Dynasty in kilograms. Who told us not to spend money?

I haven't read it yet, so I looked at the table of contents and volumes. Personally, I think it's better not to go to Tomato's world in the early days of All Heavens and Worlds (I've seen Star Transformation, Coiling Dragon, and Swallowing the Starry Sky). The first two are other people's inner worlds, and the big boss who swallows is the master who can play with time and space.

Announcement of a harem in the first chapter? Learn from other people's Projection to the Heavens and Live in the Heavens. They are still popular without a female protagonist. The purpose of fantasy time travel is to watch the protagonist become stronger, not to watch the protagonist pick up girls.

I'm not a troll. I have been reading the book for more than ten years. Yours is the only book I have given a negative review for, but I still patiently spent three days jumping on it. Finish reading it. I'm not saying that when you write a book, you have to satisfy everyone's desires. But no matter which angle I think about it, I can only come up with one answer: Your book is brainless.

Typical garbage works that have been framed and built as archways

I don't understand. If a woman practices Nine Yang Magic, her chest will become flat, and in the end she will become neither a man nor a woman. In Chapter 29, the protagonist gives the Nine Yang Magic to the woman.

Don't pretend to be innocent when writing about the harem. You'll die from poison and burn the paper if something happens.

Very poisonous😅😅😅

Chapter 1: Persuasion to retreat, Taizu Changquan, what the hell is Shaolin Changquan?

A six-year-old child should at least have the experience of a thirty- or forty-year-old person in dealing with others. I wonder what the author thinks? It feels like eating a dead fly

As long as he doesn't feel embarrassed, others will be embarrassed

Can you see the wild scrolls here? I suggest you start writing books when you are an adult. You should read more when you are not an adult. I advise you to quit.

It's so fucked up that I almost vomited

What rubbish are you writing? Yang Guo didn't even follow Guo Jing. Why should Guo Jing teach you martial arts if you are not a relative? The early plot was wrong. Aren't you afraid of being slaughtered after knowing so much?

He died of poisoning in the first chapter, goodbye

It's so weak and stupid that I can't stand it.

To be honest, this is a mess

I slipped away and read the first chapter. I was confused and had only one thought: Why are you so stupid?

The first chapter is to persuade people to quit. There is no such thing as Shaolin Changquan. If you use it as a golden finger, it is extremely poisonous. Taizu Changquan is the right one.

The back is absolutely no better, just a piece of shit.