Dad, He Doesn't Do His Job Properly

This novel definitely exposed the author's dog-licking nature. When I read Chapter 9, I licked three people, and I licked three more people through time. I licked (after all, my father's abortion was normal), the first patient - I licked (the hands are so beautiful, how come, in the end, I haven't treated you yet), and the second patient (she licked even more powerfully than the first patient, the female celebrity, and she was beautiful and so on, but this female patient has a boyfriend who is better at licking than you). Wake up, author.

Today I decisively removed this book from the shelves. The update is slow and the content is sparse. These two points alone have turned away a lot of book friends. People who are short of books cannot afford to wait. To be honest, with such an update, it is difficult to get VIPs to subscribe to such an update.

I couldn't stand it at the beginning. Eating an egg tart can fill so many chapters, but it hasn't been put on the shelves yet, so what? In addition, the logic is so "touching", shouldn't ordinary men know how to make desserts? Is making desserts an extraordinary skill?

The word count is too small, the plot is lost, and it is a waste of money to read. It is better to wait for it to be put on the shelves. I strongly recommend that it be removed from the shelves!

There are too many lyrics. You said it would be okay to excerpt a few lines, but half of the result was, should I read the book or watch you copy the lyrics?

This book is not badly written. It's this update that is intermittent. It feels like I'm going to be fucked.

The child's mother doesn't want help? A person who has seen a doctor once is so enthusiastic. So awkward

It's not a monthly magazine anymore, don't be afraid——

Damn, I originally wanted to read it. When I opened the first chapter, I saw that it was written in December 2017. It's only been 19 years now and it's only over 400,000 words. How did this happen? I didn't want to read it for a moment.

It's too watery! Best friends have a few chapters when they meet each other

The protagonist has a mental problem, so he scolds him, and then he is forgiven. At that time, it was understandable that a pregnant woman's life was at stake. But if you forgive me later, you won't be able to read this book. Everyone has a temper, and anyone can scold him if he doesn't accept it, and then just apologize. Then just say sorry after killing the person. If I were that doctor and that man came to my hospital, I would call him out directly. Who doesn't have the same problem as his father? You can scold me if you want? If you want to make peace, make peace; if you want to apologize, then apologize. I'm spoiling you. He didn't even accept the apology and kicked him out directly.

The author is too ambitious and wants to attract all types of readers. No matter doctors, entertainment, dads, or gourmet food, everyone wants to try it, but his level is limited and he cannot control it. Nothing is written well, only a bunch of pretense and slap-in-the-face plot numbers. A very good story that fell apart...

The title I wrote is "Dad Man's Story", but it's actually a pretentious entertainment article. The plot is very blunt and not as warm as "Daddy Man's Story". The whole movie is about hiding this and that. I don't understand what my parents have to hide.

The plot is starting to get a little wet! ! Can you please update it better! !

You've been pretending for two or three chapters, and that's enough for you.

I found that the author is not suitable for writing stories about dads. At present, the previous description of Xiao Xinyue is not too much. The description of the child's psychology, action description and language dialogue are not very accurate. In the story about dad, it is necessary to distinguish who is the protagonist in the story. The story about dad should be about the dad and the child, and only the dad is showing off. Jinzhi Entertainment Xiao You know, it's boring. It makes people feel that the author has a problem with his emotional intelligence. Let's talk about the update issue. I won't go into detail. I guess you are part-time and have other jobs. I can forgive you, but compare it with the author of "My Life as a Daddy". He is a programmer, but he updates it twice a day, basically without interruption, unless he is sick or something. Also, you have updated. Please don't write so poorly. It's not good to write down the key points. Dad's writing is a daily happy style. Please don't buy dog ​​meat with a sheep's head, OK.

They actually changed the composer. The entertainment company offended a composer who had many good songs for a newcomer. How did the people in their company develop so short-sightedly?

I also find it strange that when people go to your clinic, you say nothing, stare at them in a daze, and grab their hands without taking their pulse. You force them to walk, and you have to check their bodies. You are a clinic, not a hospital. The most shocking thing is that these actions are caused by throat problems. If a normal person does not treat you as a pervert, it means she is abnormal. In the end, the protagonist still feels helpless. I haven't read the latter part, and I'm not qualified to comment, but I would like to pay attention to the previous part. This kind of plot can be written normally, and there is no need to do complicated operations.

A small plot is tossed around repeatedly, and then the next plot is explained again, as if one chapter cannot be divided into several chapters to reflect the level of quality. Have you considered the reader's reading experience? Is it because Jiang Langcai just fills the page with water? Abandoned!

Can you please stop updating for several days?

What do you mean by updating a chapter these days? Can't we afford to order it?

Author, there is no one else who can say this. How come there are so many endings...? I am so embarrassed that I am suffering from embarrassment. Goodbye, give up.

Why am I disgusted that the heroine is from the film and television industry. Even though his wife is tired of being with other people, he still yells 666 from the side. Doesn't she feel good being a diva?