My Star Gate

Damn it's so poisonous! At first I thought it was pretty good. The pace was a bit fast but that's okay. The problem was that the poison spots were too dense! Ever since I traveled to the first world, various poisonous points have been emerging. I am unprepared, unprepared, unaware, naive and willful, hey.

I just feel that the protagonist can compete with the so-called backer left by God, and then he is suddenly plotted by the so-called descendant of God's faith. I just feel that the protagonist is not cautious at all, and I feel that the protagonist has become weak instantly, so I feel a little inexplicably bad╮(╯╰)╭-------------O(∩_∩)O~ It turns out that my tone is a bit harsh, I didn't expect the author to reply to me, thank you, thank you 🙏👍

Rubbish novel, rubbish author, makes me think about how to get the author to write more chapters every day! ! !

Very well written, come on ↖(^ω^)↗ come on

Chapter 113 is really good. I will wait until 10 years to finish reading this novel.

Why are the designed characters so disgusting? Can people keep reading this kind of book? Chapter 18. If it continues to disgust people like this after a few more chapters, it will be lost.

Enjoy the masterpiece! Congratulations on the great sales! 🤝

I feel like the protagonist has no sense of urgency at all and will be killed sooner or later.

In the beginning, it was updated twice a day. Now, since the second volume, it is updated once a day. It's so annoying.

Deep, not vulgar, seedling. If the quality doesn't change drastically, it's worth collecting.

I feel like the protagonist's presence is so low

I won't talk about it before, but let's talk about the first world that I traveled to, which is completely in the second-dimensional style. However, this book is obviously not classified as two-dimensional, so some plots are completely inappropriate. For example, the power system and worldview are not clear, and the characters' behaviors are illogical. If you don't agree, come and argue!

This novel is so well written... The very beginning of the novel lays out all the foreshadowing of the future unfinished story! ! ! Should I stop writing in the future and just activate the summoning technique of the ancient protagonist? ! ! Summon a dragon Aotian to directly kill the protagonist and then pretend to be cool...

It's written like a TV series, not like an online novel

I would like to ask if Lu Tianxia is just a sailor in Qidian?

After reading the first chapter and then looking at the introduction, I wanted to complain, "I'm back to the peak of my life all of a sudden"? Have I always misunderstood "hui"?

I have enough resources and time before time travel, but I don't buy books to accumulate knowledge.