Sword Art Online Life from Scratch

I am still willing to go back and rewrite this book that was written 17 years ago. I admire the author very much. I haven't read the original version, but after the reset this book is to my taste. In terms of plot, this book has added a lot of original plots, and has also made significant modifications to the original content. Therefore, although the pace is slow, the content is quite substantial, the writing skills are average, and the easter eggs and foreshadowings are carefully embedded. In terms of character creation, the protagonist's outlook on life is very upright, well-ordered but not childish. There are no OOC characters in the original work, and the supporting characters who don't play many roles can also feel the difference in personality without being stereotyped. I hope the author can persevere and let more people see this excellent work.

I've read about half of it. How should I put it? The author has ideas, but his writing skills are a bit weak. The emotional changes of the characters are too blunt. Maybe the author wants to write about real human nature, that is, there are good and evil. However, as a novice, it is better to start with facial characters. For example, Knight-kun, if you write that he is not a bad guy, but at the same time write that he threatens the protagonist, it will be incomprehensible if the writing is not strong enough. On the other hand, the protagonist's emotional changes are too drastic. Whether it is with Argo or that NPC, the key events experienced together are pitifully few, but the corresponding emotions shown are too rich. As the saying goes, the male protagonist and the female protagonist need to meet at least three times before the plot can unfold. Here, they have already had a big change in their mentality after only meeting a few times. From the plot point of view, it is too anxious. Finally, it is best to make the best use of every setting for the protagonist. It can be said that the protagonist's NPC identity is basically useless here, but has brought a lot of negative effects to the protagonist. This does not mean that the setting of the protagonist must be positive, but the identity of the NPC is obviously a very important setting, but it is too little developed.

I've been busy these past few days and haven't had time to update. Regarding the setting of Level A, I drew a sketch when I was writing it, but it was a bit messy after I changed it many times. Today I took the time to draw a new one. This setting diagram will basically not be changed, and it will also give everyone an intuitive impression 😃

The update started on December 26, 2017 and stopped on January 14, 2018. It continued on July 24, 2021 and stopped on October 12, 2021. There are 50 chapters in total.

A bubble proves that I'm still alive 😥 I really haven't had any good inspiration in the past two days. Although I can barely compile four to five thousand words based on the outline, I always feel that it would be really pitiful if I really hold back the word count for the novel like I hold back my academic paper... I can't write happily, and I can't give everyone a good reading experience. So in the past two days, I have been mainly reviewing the first volume of the attack novel, and correcting various bugs in the previous article. Well, anyway, I guess not many people will care that I, a ghoul, don't update every day, so I just follow my own pace 😃.

Come on, author, the fried chicken looks good.

It's very well written. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch. (PS: Because it seems that the author's performance is not very good, but I will always support the author.)

(=ó∀ò)OHappy Mid-Autumn Festival

Novel novel はなかなかおもしろいだね～servant はきだよ! Writer さんもよいとう!はにThanks to するわ, だっでさ, このSuharu らしいnovels にせをもらったよ! I'm happy to see that the author has finally updated. Cheers, author! D(`･ω･´)b Like (It was my first time to post a book review, so I was a bit nervous, so I wrote a Japanese one XDD)

It's reset to Chapter 18 🙄 After writing 110,000 words, I'm finally ready to defeat the first level boss... Maybe I'm the slowest swordsman author ever 🙂

Personally, I think the author writes one chapter a day, and each chapter is about 30 pages. Just don't be a eunuch. It's really nice.