The Frontier of Calamity

I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and I have also tried to write them, but failed due to various reasons. There is no denying that this book is indeed a good book, but I would like the author to refer to some suggestions: First, prevent harmony. From online novels, it should not be said that from the beginning of writing, literary prisons and literary control have always existed, and this dynasty is even better. Online novels have always been relatively lax due to their particularity, but they also have their ceilings. As far as this book is concerned, the creativity, writing style, and conception are all top-notch. It reflects the cruelty of reality. However, as reflected in the book, reality is cruel, and the law of harmony is also waiting for you, the author. From my personal experience, I was able to escape the Harmony God before because the book was not popular, but the public's eyes were sharp. When the results come up, harmony will come to your door. I think this book will not be able to escape the great harmony that will come after the New Year. (This is also the reason why I don't dare to reward a lot) From ancient times to the present, many great gods have fallen under the influence of harmony, but don't worry, as the saying goes, there are policies and countermeasures, and words can be said to be magical or miraculous, but they are neither magical nor miraculous. Learn from some of the dark masters who have been in the limelight recently, such as: Go away, a line of egrets ascend to the sky. Speaking of these two, I have to encourage the author. If you are a reader who has been reading the novel for a long time, you should have discovered by now that the policy is changing! Yes, it is changing, and it is becoming looser, not tighter. Look at the two above. If we push forward 10 years, we can publish books normally at the starting point? Even if I can publish, can I get a recommendation position? Think of Zhongyuan Wubai. Today's general environment is stable and peaceful (at least the Great Celestial Empire is like this). Of course, this brings advantages and disadvantages. I won't go into details about the advantages, but the disadvantages! The simplest thing is that social classes are too stable and people's hearts are impetuous. Vent! It is the mainstream among young people today. Whether it is games, movies, animations, novels, etc., No one wants to see these things anymore. This is also the reason why several dark gods have risen recently. I think our superiors may also feel it, so that the God of Harmony will become weaker. So to sum up, author, your path to earning money by writing dark articles is a bright one, but don't be too explicit, otherwise the God of Harmony will not be a vegetarian. (For now) Second: Persistence. This is an old saying. I would like to give you a piece of advice. The simplest thing in the world is persistence, and the most difficult thing is also persistence. I hope the author will not forget his original intention. Half an hour long review, you owe me 2 chapters. Can you tell me what time it will be updated tomorrow? Author! 🔪🪖

It's always hehehe, the protagonist hehehe even the supporting characters are hehehe, it poisons me to death

This book is really well written. Whether it is writing, plot or character description, it is very suitable for preschool children to read.

Four suggestions. The first protagonist should not be a protagonist who has inherited the inheritance of some big shot or is invisible. The first part of this book is better, but the second part feels that the protagonist is appointed by the emperor and is special. I don't like this feeling. What I like more is a protagonist who accidentally obtains the extraordinary ticket and then clings to the top on his own. Second, don't give the protagonist omnipotence, which means don't make your IQ appear to be impeccable, as it will be too easy to fall into the self-pleasure mode. Readers can't stand this either. The third system is realistic. I hope the world of the novel is relatively real, but to be honest, this book is too gamified, especially when you hit someone and drop equipment, drop equipment you don't have, or the original equipment disappears after death. These really affect the sense of reading the novel. The fourth protagonist should not whitewash the character. The author gave the protagonist an excuse to whitewash the story at the end of the novel. To be honest, don't do this with the dark stream. Things like this, which I would like to be a good person if I could, but was actually forced by life, should not appear. You positioned the dark stream in the early stage, so most people like to watch the dark stream when you see it later. What will others think if you do this? If you want to be dark, you must have a dark consciousness. The fifth is my personal factor. I am more confused about the role of Brother An. I specially emphasize that there is no need for brotherhood, let alone homosexuality. Well, these two are the only ones.

Is this a dark novel? Why do I feel stupid?

After reading more than 30 chapters, in each chapter the author repeatedly emphasized that the male protagonist turned black because he was killed inexplicably. However, from the thirty chapters I read, I think the male protagonist should be like this in nature. He just did the things he wanted to do but did not dare to do during his life. After death, this is not called blackening in my opinion. It should be that the male protagonist originally had this kind of virtue and became a little unscrupulous after death.

One of the characteristics of the dark flow is that it is too dark and grows too fast, so it breaks fate and defeats the author.

This Lord of Disaster is simply awesome. His subordinates were suppressed and massacred by the so-called legion. Those who can rise up in the encirclement and suppression of the legion must be very strong, but the number is undoubtedly too small. There are more legions at the same level. This Lord of Disaster must be mentally ill.

The setting is too simple, there are too many loopholes, and the background is unclear. The plot is okay, not toxic!

Why does Mao feel that this disaster god is so low?