The Most Exciting New Life

I liked everyone who said they were childish.

The logic of this book is a mess. There is no logic at all in the beginning, and it's so weird. If the author doesn't read it after finishing it, can he continue to write such a zz novel?

I made certain preparations for the harem at the beginning, but the problem is that you have gone too far with your harem.

This is the most verbose novel I have written in ten years. Everything is introduced in one go, so much that I doubt you pasted it from Baidu. It's so verbose.

I rarely write long reviews, but in order to give others a reference, I still write one I haven't read much. From the previous point of view, the poisonous points are roughly divided into two parts I am an old bookworm and have read a lot of published or online novels. If I say something wrong, I can point out First: paragraphs and sentences Personally, I feel that I can't stand it, and the writing is not very expressive. Many times I type out a long paragraph and I don't know what I want to say. I have to think back and forth several times to read a novel. The point is that these plots are very boring useless. From this point of view, it is best not to read this if you like to read short stories or relax. Moreover, the paragraph allocation is very problematic. I feel that many paragraphs are arranged with almost the same number of words, making it very boring to read. I hope the author can make improvements. Second: Plot Shaping I personally feel that the more ordinary and ordinary the plot, the more good skills are needed (this is why daily sweet articles are liked by many people). The author defines this book as a story about ordinary people who become legends after being reborn. Then yours Character creation, story setting, plot development, and conflict transitions all need to be mastered with ease. However, after seeing dozens of pictures, there are almost no plot highlights. The guilt towards parents after rebirth is not written out. There are only a few words about the changes in the protagonist, and they are still the same. Moreover, I feel a little confused in terms of prices. The author's life experience or book writing experience is really lacking I hope the author will continue to work hard. In a word, the characterization failed, the plot arrangement failed, the paragraph distribution failed, the protagonist's behavior was passable but the words he said were very strange. Overall, it was slightly toxic, and there is room for improvement. Anyone with different opinions can discuss. I hope the author can improve and let me order all of your books

Book reviews are more interesting than books. Your book successfully arouses students to explain common sense.

I have read a lot of novels about finance and business wars, and when I read Chapter 650, I felt that there were quite a few poisonous points. First of all, in terms of relationships, although it is understandable, it is still too studly. When I see a beautiful girl, I will turn up, and I have no chance to create opportunities, or I will fall behind. I don't see how handsome or charming the protagonist is. Secondly, in terms of career, it is generally good, with not many bad points, but it is too anxious. For example, in terms of film and television media, some variety shows, TV series, and film and television dramas that seem to be classics now may not necessarily work in that era. Finally, I hope the more I write, the better

It's been more than seventy chapters and I'm only halfway through the semester of high school. It's so scary (°ー°)

The title of the novel is "The Most Exciting New Life", but I have finished reading the free part of the novel. I still feel that it is enjoyable in some places, but it is not the most enjoyable in any case. The article is not right. For example, Tian Lili, who appears in Chapter 39 "Teacher Guo", is the class beauty but misbehaves. Author, is this your first time writing a cool article? Don't you know that one of the key points in writing a cool novel is not to include any beauties who would not be included in the male protagonist's harem? Whenever I see such a character appearing, it feels like I've eaten a fly.

Why haven't you taken action yet after talking about rushing to BAT?

Three hundred thousand a day, one million a month, more than ten million a year, the author has a problem with math. Three hundred thousand a day is more than 100 million a year.

Keep the current level of full booking! ! ! !

Let the author take a look? I just saw this place selling grilled sausages, but there was a loophole that really made me unhappy and couldn't help but mention it. The article sets the background of 1998. I calculated the price and wage levels for the author. In 2000, my aunt was a primary school teacher with a salary of 800. At that time, my young family was also busy. In order to facilitate school, I lived with my aunt in the teacher's community. She gave me one yuan every morning, and I went to the store to have breakfast. A fried dough stick, a meat bun and a small bowl of hotpot paste cost 80 cents. I went shopping with my aunt. Pork bones cost 7 yuan per pound and tenderloin cost 5 yuan per pound. Green vegetables such as cabbage cost a few cents per pound. So even if the salary was low in 1998, it would not be as low as tens of dollars. That was in the 1960s and 1970s. In the 1970s, my grandfather's salary was more than 100 yuan. Don't ask me why I remember it. I still have my grandpa's pay stub at home, and I won't tell you that I bought three boxes of firecrackers with the ten yuan that my aunt left in my pocket when she bought groceries. My aunt who taught mathematics punished me by copying arithmetic formulas a hundred times, so I remember it deeply. So I can't understand the purchasing price of this sausage. It's really uncomfortable to see. What's wrong with the sausage? The price of buying one can buy half a catty of meat. I hope the author will be a little more rigorous when bringing in the data. It does not require it to be completely consistent with historical conditions, but it must at least be reasonable, right? Even if the salary in the article is indeed only a few dozen, it is even more impossible to sell it at this price, so the author really wants you to slightly modify the data before, and I will not complain about the plot. After all, the novel is about rebirth, so this is not bad.

The network management system costs several thousand yuan. Let's find a few computer science college students to write it. Can a living person choke to death? After the system is written, it can be sold for takeout. A set costs several thousand yuan.

After reading the first chapter, I don't want to read anymore. I was a piece of rubbish in my last life, but after my rebirth, I actually decided to study, make money together, and be excellent in all aspects. I still can't understand what those people who only focus on making money think when they are born again?! Haha, you were such a piece of rubbish in your last life. What gave you the confidence to think that in this life you can do two things, do well in studies and make money at the same time?!

This author tells everyone a truth: getting rich without any background will quickly turn a man into a stallion

After reading the first three chapters, to be honest, Pig's Foot was born more than 30 years ago. After being reborn and crying for a few days, Pig's Foot's character is still similar to that of a child. . . Is it necessary for you to ask your parents everything, because you don't know anything about your past life? Or is the pig's trotter itself just unscrupulous? Find an excuse to get hundreds of dollars from your parents. After you make money, you make your parents worry about you! So many words. . . This book can only be so-so. . . Pig's feet have a bad personality, and they are still the same after rebirth. . .

Is it okay if the author doesn't know what happened in the 1990s? People reading this are embarrassed. Prices have been so high since the 1990s. It's funny. Now sausages only cost two pieces. This price has only increased in recent years. The author started writing without any experience. Didn't he do some research? It doesn't make much sense at first glance. It's better to watch the eagle's fortune again!

Regarding the economy, I would like to defend the author. I lived in Chongqing in 1990. I was in the first grade (I was in kindergarten at the age of 3 and a half and in the first grade at the age of 4). I studied in the village. The tuition was 30 yuan. My family couldn't afford it and had to borrow it. I still remember the scene where my brother and I knelt in front of other people's houses and howled. In 1995, my parents went out to work in Yiwu at a construction site. My mother's daily salary was 10 yuan, and my father's daily salary was 15 to 20 yuan. , Eat and live on your own, the salary increased significantly in 1996, my mother was 25 per day, my father was 35 per day, but prices rose at the same time. In my hometown, I remember that rice noodles were sold for 1 yuan and 3 taels at the beginning, and then rose to 1 yuan and 2 taels, and then 1 and 5 yuan. In 1996, I thought about my parents, a little brat who was picking up the train and the hot truck when it arrived in Yiwu. At that time, I was just in Xiuxiu Lake Park, and a cup of ice mung bean soup, ice milk, 1 yuan , in fact, the author's price is not wrong, it's just that you haven't experienced it.

I couldn't stand it anymore. This sense of immersion in a rebirth novel is really important. When I saw a city like this where the sausages were sold for more than a thousand dollars a day, I decided not to read it. In 2003, I paid RMB 2.00 For a lunch, and you bought RMB 2 for a sausage. So even if there were people who had money and were willing to give it a try, more than 500 people would eat it in half a day. I can't.

The author is probably born in the 1990s and does not know the prices in 1998.

Who told you that ten yuan for a meal was not much in the 1990s? Are you serious? Chapter 7

I gave up the book and couldn't read it anymore. The chapter about opening a hamburger restaurant only takes 24 hours a day to get more than 2,000 membership cards. Even if you take three minutes or one minute to get a card, it takes more than 100 hours. How much did you get a membership card worth 210,000 yuan? How much did people in the 1998s earn per day and how much per month? Spend a hundred yuan to get a membership card, then order food, hamburgers, fried chicken, etc., And buy thousands of portions, and buy sausages. In 1998, you sold them for two yuan a piece, and two young working couples ate several of them. How much was the salary at that time? The two of them also ate five or six cigarettes. The following chapters were all copied and pasted from Baidu introducing the company and information 😰😰😰

I found a lot of urban articles about people who went to buy a car and were looked down upon by the salesperson, all kinds of sarcasm, and then bought several luxury cars out of anger, 😁😁😁. The boss said,,,, it's so easy to fool someone like this. I've seen you trying to show off before, so I fell for the trick.

Rebirth articles all follow the same pattern, making money is very easy. Since you are a middle school student, it should be what students should do. More sunny and upbeat things may attract readers more!

I read it well before. Chapter 77 suddenly comes with a bottle of poison. In 1998, a 200-square-meter shop cost 500,000 a year. It was still an ordinary county town. It can be bought in first-tier cities. Doesn't the author change it?

Author, please build a readership!

Brother, I'm sorry I posted it wrong! 😭

Such a fucked-up person, who doesn't learn and doesn't do serious things, was most harmed by the popularity of the Bewitched Boy during the two years when he was in the limelight. So. ． ．

The Internet cafe the protagonist talks about is a bit unrealistic, especially when you have no capital at the beginning, how can it be possible to continue running? And won't the computer break? Don't you know that there was no Internet cafe management system at that time, it was all manual, and it was almost impossible to open a large store. The shop owners did not dare to hire people, so how could it be possible to keep running? ? ! ! Of course you can talk about developing an Internet cafe management system. The question is, do the protagonist and the three have money? And was the technical level at that time really good?