Alien Bar: Picked up a Wizard Girl

Just pull the grass, not recommended! The idea at the beginning of this book is very interesting and makes people want to read on. The characters are well established and each character is very distinct. But it didn't take long for it to become more and more toxic, mainly because the characters' personalities were getting worse and worse, and they were heading towards the explosion of their outlook on life. Lanya, the wizard at the beginning, was a very well-behaved girl. It is said that she became more and more useless later on. Not only was she useless in the team, but she was even a hindrance. Her personality became more and more annoying. She treated herself like the master all day long when she couldn't help, and she always vented her dissatisfaction. The male protagonist is even more outrageous. I don't know what kind of character the author wants to create. Is he cynical? Being cynical doesn't mean you are a fool! It was quite charming at first, and he looked like a very unique person Not to mention that an ordinary person on earth could suddenly fight a lizard assassin 1V6 with a staff. I said he sold the staff for 460 and made a profit of 1000. He bought it without even cutting the price. Forget it if he didn't understand prices, but the author still wanted him to pretend to be a b, and said "I know that staff is expensive, but I bought it anyway" Why? Because "I don't care about the money"! Knowing that there is a pit and deliberately jumping into it, isn't this just taking advantage of someone? And you said you don't care? This is not what you did when you deceived the ignorant slimes before! It was obvious that we could reasonably negotiate a deal and get a win-win situation, but the male protagonist chose to use the slime's ignorance to deceive her and exploit her Similarly, the senior sister who sold the protagonist's staff also collapsed because of the price. According to the female mercenary later, the purchase price of this staff was only about 40 gold. Even if the shipping fee is 100 gold, do you want to sell it for 1,000 gold? The person who can sell it at such a price is definitely not a "cute little profiteer". He is already a big profiteer who will be stripped and cramped if he is discovered! Anyway, I always feel that the protagonist is quite arrogant, or it can be said that he does not treat these characters from another world as human beings, but as NPCs in the game!

This book belongs to the stuffed buns! ! !

Good guy The plot of meeting the devil for the first time is too forced. The elf friend is captured, and the bones tell you that the enemy can fly. You, a novice who has only learned magic for a few days, and an even more novice girl dare to chase you. When you chase him to the door of your house, you find that the enemy is the boss, so you shake him (is it too late? It is not good to shake him earlier) It's faster than the two rookie mages chasing you, right?), The boss promised to win, but after entering, the boss disappeared, and the protagonist and the girl appeared directly in front of the devil. Then the acquaintance Headless Horseman asked the protagonist to make a drink because he was afraid that the protagonist would be raped by the devil. The devil agreed, and the protagonist used a few bottles of garbage wine to make the drink. The devil is very satisfied and accepts the protagonist. The protagonist gives in and signs a contract to enter the devil's camp. Looking at this, my poison resistance is no longer enough.

I really enjoyed the exchange between the protagonist and the drinker, it reminded me of a game I like. Cyberpunk Bartender Action was originally called "VA-11 Hall-A: Cyberpunk Bartender Action" The bartender Jill played by the player does similar things to the real bartender, responsible for bartending and communicating with the bartender. Customers chat, and playing this game is like finding a quiet corner in a noisy world. Players act as bartenders and interact with various game characters, handing them cocktails, listening to their stories, and "making drinks and changing lives." So I like this book very much, and I hope the author will keep up the good work, come on! By the way, the game is independently produced by two developers from chaotic Venezuela.

It was just for daily viewing, but suddenly it started to cause trouble... I don't understand why I didn't tell the store manager that the wine was stolen. I decided to catch the thief myself even though I knew that the thief might be a legend. What would happen even if I found the person? I'm afraid I won't be touched completely again

Dear author, you haven't updated for three minutes. Even the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Would you consider updating more 🤓

I won't talk about this aspect since I don't know much about bartending, but the more I read this book, the more I feel that the male protagonist is very arrogant. It's the first time a slime has come into contact with humans and she doesn't understand the rules of human society. Just ask her to use slime liquid instead. It's a lesson to her. But it's too much to do this the second time I go there. Isn't it okay to say that I can use slime liquid in exchange for wine? You have to lie to people. There was also the matter of the wine being stolen. Shouldn't this be told to the boss? Judging from the settings, the boss is not weak and cannot handle this. The male protagonist gave me the feeling that he was playing a game. He didn't care about other people's feelings, as long as he was happy.

The alias of this book is: The Spirit of Spring Wine (only valid for women)

The character description is not good. I think the worst part is when the protagonist needs the raw liquid of a pure water slime. In order to get it, he coaxes the slime to drink when he knows that he does not have enough money, without telling it the price and then collects the bill with the original liquid. This slime has never been to the human world. It is especially easy to deceive. The protagonist has deceived it twice in this way. To be honest, this paragraph makes me feel like a landlord and a rich man tricking farmers into spitting out the liquid. The things that are vomited are not important at all, just like humans use up their physical strength. The male protagonist can clearly explain that he exchanged wine for liquid, but he doesn't say it. He just wants to show a completely unnecessary operation on the country bumpkin slime who has never seen the world. Moreover, he bought a 200 gold coin staff for 1,000 gold coins when he knew it was a scam and then said that money is not important to him. The ease of daily writing is not so easy, Kaizi.

The devil who falls in love with the brave man, is this a verb or...

Why does Mao like a weak and weak loser girl? Does he need to be worshiped so much? So vain and lacking in confidence? How attractive should a confident and courageous girl be?

It's really three golden chapters, after three chapters it's just shit

He used a playful attitude to stay outside this other world, jumping up and down in other people's worlds every moment. The feeling of being out of place, like if you don't want to go deep here, you don't have to contact me.

If you don't know how to depict characters, don't give up. The setting for such a useless girl is obviously very lovable, but the writing is sloppy and useless. Except for a slight liking when we first met, the subsequent writing directly made me hate this character.

I still prefer the beginning of the protagonist's role as a bartender. The more I watch the adventure, the more boring it becomes. After all, I've become vomiting after watching the bartender less than the adventurer.

I can still read it at the beginning, but the more I read later, the more shitty it becomes, especially the slime and buying equipment scenes. To be honest, a rich person will not be ripped off and looks like I am happy with it. Not to mention that there is a woman next to me who has been poor for a while. My evaluation is relying on ghost shit. I can't stand it when I see it. Not to mention that there is an idea in a fight scene. I don't know if it is a change of characters or something. Anyway, the more you read later, the more shitty it becomes. If you come here specifically to have fun with ghost shit, then you can still read this book.

This author can't afford to criticize me. If I point out my mistakes, he will delete me.

Chapter 24: Toxic, the male protagonist is an Earth bartender. After "training for a period of time", he can survive the siege of six lizard assassins with only an alloy staff (not even using magic). The physical fitness of most people on earth is obviously not enough to make the alloy stick "dance like an airtight wall". This is like going to another world to strengthen their physical fitness. But if these six assassins had basic intelligence or had fought once, they probably wouldn't have been blocked by six knives coming from the same direction and hitting the alloy staff. It is known that the lizardman prince can blow people's heads off with dried fish in his hand. Even after the earth is weakened, his combat power far exceeds that of ordinary humans (he easily beat away three gangsters three times on the earth). The assassin sent out can kill all his guards and seriously injure him. If the protagonist hadn't rescued him into the tavern, he would have been killed. After dancing for a while (leaving aside whether normal humans have the physical strength and ability to hold a stick to defend themselves against six knives), the male protagonist used magic to push back the lizard assassins (what kind of trash are these assassins), then grabbed a horse and ran away with the girl. Just think that the hero's riding skills were learned in Hawaii, but being able to lead one person on a horse and ride away while fending off six people's attacks is probably a bit otherworldly.

Author, have you missed the point? Do you want to see the protagonist fight monsters and upgrade? Can't you just mix drinks honestly? What's the point of all these bells and whistles? I really can't stand it if I don't write about bartending in my daily writing and write about long-form adventures.

The writing is pretty good and there are no major problems, but the structure of the novel will determine its performance in the later stages. I hope that the pattern of the subsequent novels will be larger, and the holes dug in the previous chapters can be filled, and this novel will be successful.

The story is pretty good, but I found that the scene changes were a bit sudden, and there were a few places that made people feel a bit baffled.

Hey, I have a suggestion for those who criticize in the comment area. Since we think it is poisonous, then stop reading it? Not every book requires that the characters in the book should not have dark spots. I personally think that in this kind of daily novel, it is more real if the characters in it have something to do. Just like the cyberpunk edgewalker, anything can happen in life. In it, only the female protagonist dies, and the death methods are all kinds of weird. Is there a problem with this? On the contrary, it highlights the reality more, which makes us better understand the reality in this background world. The author probably has thought this way. The author may have wanted to correct it, but he couldn't do it completely. If it is really forced, it may be worse, right? If you really want to read it, it doesn't matter if you change the book. The author has added some details so that more people can see his hand.

My brows furrowed when I saw it. A dishonest dog took another 2b dishdog to take on a fatal mission and looked so heartless. What did you think?

It's a leisurely story about a different world. It's okay at the beginning but then it turns sour It's an adventure and the characters are not well developed.

It's getting more and more out of topic. Bartending new customers and interacting with them should be the focus. Adventures shouldn't be just interludes. The recent plot has been quite boring.

Here's a suggestion: don't write about adventure, it's cliché, and you can't write about others. Just write about the daily life of the bar at the beginning. It can turn into an ambrosia like "Midnight Diner". ps: The character of Lanya is quite annoying, a useless cute character who deliberately acts cute for the sake of being cute. Disgusted

It's beautiful and heart-warming. It's very refreshing to read this book after reading too much. Don't listen to what they say about opening up the world. The protagonist does not necessarily have to conquer the world and become the strongest. It is good to just be a bartender in Emerald, research new wines, learn magic, and then unfold the story around his companions.

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The writing is very good. I vowed not to stay up late again. Damn it.

It feels a bit like the Japanese comic style of another world. It should be very popular if it is changed into anime.