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After reading the whole book, it is still a good football (crossed out) romance novel. Apart from the football itself, what I am most looking forward to in the book is the story of Gao Zheng and Sister Feng, lying in bed with my aunt laughing. Jpg However, there are also shortcomings. The first is typos, and the progress towards the end is a bit fast, especially after the Champions League final, it suddenly jumps to the top 40, which is very abrupt...

Today's articles are like running errands, without any passion at all. Perhaps the author has become famous and has no longer focused on writing books.

I'm convinced. The game is so slow. Sometimes I feel like your writing is just too slow. It's very annoying to watch.

Old taste and old feelings, support me. The routines of sports and competitive novels are a bit solidified, so just keep it for now, I can't get enough energy to read it.

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I saw that the author said that Icardi had been changed a bit, and that it was a bit restrictive to write according to a real character. I am very happy that the author has made such changes, but the changes are still too little. Since reading Heart of a Champion, I have mentioned many times in book reviews and group chats why I can't write a novel with all virtual characters to surpass the classic anime Captain America? I received a lot of looks and even abuse, but I still want to say it. Some book friends said that Young Football is not very good. I won't comment on whether it is good or bad, but Young Football is of far-reaching significance and has played a role in inspiring a generation. Even domestic variety shows about football and basketball use the theme songs of Young Football and Slam Dunk. When will our domestic programs be able to play music from our own country? Let's discuss it from the perspective of IP development. There are so many names of real characters in the novel. Can IP be developed to make a drama in this way? If you were filming a drama, would you like to find actors who look like those football stars? Furthermore, there are too many real people involved. In the event of disputes involving personal reputation rights, portrait rights, etc., Will there be a risk of the defendant or even claiming compensation? I really look forward to the author writing a football novel with all virtual characters, and writing a football novel that can inspire a generation, come on!

There's nothing that can't be hacked (a Milan fan who has been here for 24 years) I started to like Milan when I was in primary school. Since the Serie A broadcast became popular across the country in the 1990s, and continued in the Internet era, my time as a Milan fan has taken up two-thirds of my life. I just saw a book friend who is also a Milan fan objecting to the author's black Milan in the comments. I think it doesn't have to be this way. First of all, this is a novel, not a sports commentary, not a news media. How can Kyon in Haruhi Suzumiya be described as such? Elderly people have poor memory, so you can search by yourself. Secondly, this book does not viciously attack Milan, nor does it fabricate facts. The Milan laboratory did make many mistakes, and the club's business philosophy in the past 10 years has indeed fallen short of standards. To tell the truth, there is nothing to be dissatisfied with. Thirdly, to love a team, in addition to keeping the glory and beauty in mind, you must also accept the dark times and endless regrets. Regardless of success or failure, it is the history of this team forever and is a part of our beloved team. Real fans only want to learn from failures and create new glories. There's really no need to protest against negative storylines about favorite sports teams in novels. Doing so is nothing but showing a glassy heart.

Samp debuts and then goes to a team that can beat Milan in the face. Is there anything more suitable than Little International? And I can continue to be teammates with Mr. Beryllium (Icardi) and renew our relationship. After Little International became famous, there were 2 choices, La Liga and the Premier League. Real Madrid and Barcelona shouldn't go, after all, Melo is here and can't be the core. Atletico Madrid will be short of strikers if they sell the car to Costa, so they can consider it. In the Premier League, the only four teams that can go are Manchester City tycoon, Manchester United, Liverpool, and Chelsea. Manchester City has no protagonist to go, and the league also dominates. As for Manchester United, although many novels are written about Mourinho, the way he leads the team is really ugly. After Klopp went to Liverpool, during the rising period, I felt that he was the most suitable. The trident he brought, although Firmino was a strong striker, was always a bit uninteresting. If the protagonist goes, this trident may really have to fight back and fight back. It has to attack difficulties. I feel that the direction of the development of the protagonist is a comprehensively enhanced version of Ibrahimovic.

I haven't played a game for a month, and the psychological descriptions of various soy sauce players account for more than half. The main plot is cut into pieces. I started reading Lin Da's book from Light of Champions, the pirated version I read in the student party (sorry, I will update the original version when I get a stable job), and started reading the original version of Heart of Champions, but it suddenly stopped me halfway. I was persuaded to quit because I wanted to drive my friend for a month, so I could only do one update a day, but I couldn't stand the passion anymore. Knowing that Light of Champions was over, I started to follow the new book from the first chapter. It was fine at first, and the rhythm was very comfortable, but from the plot to the reserve team winning the championship, it turned into the grinding rhythm of Heart of Champions. It's not that it can't be updated every day. Several of the books I follow are updated every day. I can tolerate it when I encounter a certain sleeper and a certain shrimp who collect news and update family activities from time to time. The key is 1. Keep your word and keep your promises. You can update once a day or even once a week. As long as you, the author, say it, you will do it. 2. The plot advances at a reasonable speed. As a member of the KKK who updates once a day, you have to be willing to give up to gain something. Since the update is not strong, you need to have more dry information in the plot. You will have all kinds of naysayers before the game, all kinds of contempt before the goal, all kinds of shock after the goal, and all kinds of praise after winning. Maybe the game plot of 5 chapters can be sustained by the psychological activities of various passers-by to 15 to 20 chapters. You can use one book or two books with this method, but now I am really tired. I tell many new authors not to let readers influence their rhythm, but now I really hope that you, Lin, can listen to our voices. I really hope that in a few years I can tell my children that I had a favorite author whose novels gave me a football dream, and now it is your turn. Instead of the sea, you are all water... Lin Da, isn't your dream to write China's own young football player? Are you still persisting?

Are those who keep cheering and continuing in the comment area sick? I searched for a long time and couldn't find a meaningful and informative book review. Do these 8,000 reviews account for more than 6,000 of them?

Not choosing to shoot but passing the ball, this is the difference between a leader and a shooter...

The national football team is actually not too bad in Asia. There is a good midfielder who can attack with the ball. It's okay to raise it a notch or two.

I have read basically all Lin Hai's books, and this one is probably the worst one written by Lin Hai. I felt a little depressed after reading it.

I would like to ask if the protagonist of this book has a golden finger. When I saw that it was about to be released and I hadn't seen the golden finger yet, I wanted to say why he became so awesome. There are no examples in reality, and he didn't have a golden finger. If you write that he became awesome on his own, it would be a bit false.

How to rise without plug-ins? It's not that I look down on Chinese football, I despise Chinese football. I want to rise without cheats. Go back to sleep, I have everything in my dreams.

After reading what I wrote today, I want to say something to the author: Please respect your readers. It is they who have made you where you are today. Is this how you treat your readers?

I understand that in competitive novels, the protagonist is criticized by the media for racial reasons, and then gets slapped in the face by relying on his outstanding performance on the field. This kind of plot is considered a standard routine, so it is reasonable for the protagonist of this book to book the Golden Boot in the 13th round of the league and be criticized in various ways by the Italian media. But when the league entered the final stage, the protagonist was already far ahead in the scorer list, and the golden boot was basically confirmed. The media and fans were still arguing in various ways. This was deliberately trying to outsmart the media and fans to slap the protagonist in the face. At this time, it is barely understandable. But when I saw the latest penultimate round of the league against Catania, this deliberate demotion has reached an unbearable level: in the article, in order to prevent the protagonist from breaking the Serie A single-season historical scoring record of 35 goals, Catania did not hesitate to lose, not guarding the protagonist's other teammates, but only guarding the protagonist. This perverse and mentally retarded routine is not only an insult to the basic sportsmanship of real-life football competition, but also an insult to the reader's IQ. After all, the competitive circle is not the entertainment circle. It is relatively simple. The evaluation of the participants is based on the performance of the participants on the court. At this time, the protagonists have already made history. They are being criticized by all kinds of senseless things for no reason. They are even deliberately criticized by professional teams who do not hesitate to lose... You can be YY, but this kind of mentally retarded routine that deliberately lowers the intelligence is really over.

To be honest, this book was really not well written, the characters were not well developed, the story rhythm was also very bad, and there were even a lot of typos. Lin Hai didn't write carefully. Disappointment.

Isn't there anyone in the comment section? It's all for support. Before reading the book, I looked at the comments and couldn't find it at all. It's okay to support it. You can't support the new book after other people's books have been written. So disgusting

Lin Hai could never regain his original passion when listening to Tao's books. When I watched "The Godfather of Champions" back then, I still remember Tony Twain's surging passion, George Wood's rookie transformation, and the red storm of Nottingham Forest. While watching "Heroes in the Zone", the father gave everything for his son who loves football; a stupid guy, because he loves football, played step by step from Ukraine to Germany, and then became Liverpool's hegemony. "Light of Champions" also describes the step-by-step story of an ignorant boy from the bottom, who gradually becomes a football superstar. In these books, you can see the protagonist's growth step by step, including shortcomings, regrets, tears, successes, and gains. But these are indeed missing in this new book. The frustration of AC Milan is also weakly described. After the protagonist was given a shot of chicken blood by the master, he was resurrected with full blood and became invincible all the way. This kind of plot of being invincible at the beginning, harvesting all the way, and losing ten points of IQ when the opponent meets is so speechless. The media will always praise or criticize everyone, and then slap them in the face. To be honest, among the books written by Lin Haitingtao over the years, this one is the worst. The author is older, has a family and children to take care of, and has participated in media football commentary activities, so this book has less focus. But this will slowly lose many readers.

It is said that a group of girls went to a farm for internship. The farm taught them how to milk cows and taught them the skills before letting them practice. One of the girls squeezed for a long time, but still failed. She was very discouraged, so she turned to the farmer and asked: "Why did others squeeze more than half of the bucket after squeezing for a while, but I squeezed for a long time and my hands were sore before I squeezed out a little bit?" The farmer followed the girl and took a look, sighed and said, "Girl, not only did you squeeze the wrong cow, but you also squeezed the wrong cow." Click on my profile picture. . .

Stop paving the way, I want to take it off the shelves directly. Originally, reading is just a pastime, but it's not interesting because it repeatedly foreshadows Korean phobia and Korean team members' evil intentions. This is just for entertainment, but now the more I watch it, the more upset I am getting. Please get over this episode quickly.

Stop reading the edict and write a new book 😡

In fact, the biggest mystery in this book is probably which country the heroine is from, right? (Lin Hai's special hobby/manual comedy)

I just read a series of discussions among some book friends about the significance of a superstar to the Chinese national team. I found it very interesting. I tell you what I think. 1. The national team copy may not necessarily win the World Cup. Cruyff and Van Basten are both undisputed legends of the generation, but the Dutch team has yet to win a Hercules Cup. Therefore, not winning the World Cup is the norm. But not winning the World Cup does not mean that there is no classic plot. In "Slam Dunk", Shohoku didn't even make it to the finals, but among sports comics, this masterpiece by Mr. Inoue is still a peak that no one can reach. ("Chess Soul" is an intellectual sport and is not included in the calculation) 2. The significance of superstars to the national team is still huge. The Korean team with Son Heung-min and without Son Heung-min are completely different things. In this top 12 match, it can almost be said that the national football team lost to Son Heung-min in the away game, not the South Korean team. At home, we defeated the South Korean team without Son Heung-min in a passive situation, which also confirmed the role of a superstar. But the role of a superstar is not limited to this, he will also have the power of role model. In particular, the protagonist is a player who has been diagnosed with a serious injury that will prevent him from returning to the field. His success will inspire young players, restore confidence to other injured players, and improve the image of the football industry. And these combined will also improve the strength of the national team. Although this improvement may not allow the Chinese team to win the Hercules Cup. However, the Chinese team has not won the Asian Cup yet! China has not participated in the World Cup knockout rounds yet! China has never won the Asian Games gold medal! Wouldn't it be exciting to see these goals come to fruition? Especially reaching the knockout stages of the World Cup, isn't it cool to compete with a truly first-class team in the most competitive competition and give it your all? Even if you don't win the championship in the end, the kind of game where you are fully committed and exceed your own limits is great enough. Besides, even if you don't win the championship, it's still very satisfying to defeat a top team and get a huge upset during the promotion process. Do you still remember Maradona's thumbs up after Uncle Mila led Cameroon to defeat the defending champion Argentina? Such a victory, even as an opponent, the unruly football champion has to be convinced!

After winning the Champions League, there are only fifty chapters left, which means that the fourth volume only has fifty chapters It must be unfinished, so I won't read it anymore.

The setting of the protagonist reminds me of Wang Chu. Look at Mane, who played in Metz at the same time as Wang Chu, and now he has become Liverpool's thigh. Look at Wang Chu, who had his leg broken by a gang of black-footed players at the National Games who were aiming to use people as useless. It is really a pity...

The Milan laboratory is indeed very famous, so the author conceived the plot this way. However, the research and diagnosis of sports injuries in Europe are not all concentrated in Milan. The Milan laboratory itself is famous for being the first to create such a model. So when the club and even the players themselves are confused about injuries. He still has places where he can get checked and re-examined, and there is more than one place.

I guess the protagonist will return to Milan, but it will be Inter Milan When the time comes, Serie A will also be able to meet up in the Champions League for a showdown. The stupid things that happened in the Milan laboratory are no longer one or two. Aren't the medical teams of the Bundesliga teams more brilliant now? It is impossible for the protagonist to join Milan, because Bei always sells him wherever he is worth. The original Moratti was more affectionate and righteous, of course, relatively speaking.