Starting from the Martial Arts Plane

If you learn the small phaseless skills and Lingbo Steps in the Eight Parts of the Dragon, it will be the same as if you haven't learned it. Any monk can catch up with it. This is still the Lingbo Steps of Dacheng. The small phaseless skills have become the main method without any bonus. In addition, 30 years of Da Huan Dan skills have no effect. The most unreasonable thing is, what about Dacheng's Dugu Nine Swords? The Great Shift of the Universe that completes the 7th level of perfection has no effect. Being chased by several people, I could only escape through time travel. Is this still the world of Condor Heroes? It must be the wrong world. This must be the world of wind and cloud.

Why do all the protagonists in martial arts novels have to practice swordsmanship? In 9 out of 10 martial arts novels, the protagonists have to practice swordsmanship. Why do they have to practice swordsmanship to write about The Condor and Swordsman? They have to practice the Nine Swords. It seems that if they don't practice, they are not the protagonists. It seems like there is nothing else but swordsmanship. She's almost become a "bitch" 😡😡

There are a lot of flaws, not because of the writing style, but because of the lack of care in the details. The protagonist has obviously just traveled through time, and is wearing a flesh body. He can communicate seamlessly when he comes in directly. Forget about the language issue, which can be appropriately ignored. But the author, you didn't describe the protagonist in more. I can only think that the protagonist is still the same as in modern society, with short hair and modern clothes. He can communicate seamlessly with others. If others are not surprised, it is too careless. Also, the protagonist is a modern person. If nothing else, at least he is not too malnourished. If you tell me that you are a person who escapes from trouble, and others still believe it, you are insulting the reader's intelligence.

Forcibly opening the plot is a bit poisonous. Duan Yu, a dabbler like Lingbo Weibu, is so powerful that even if he is full of evil, he can't be caught. You're such a well-rounded person that you can't even dodge a 10th-level Dragon Elephant Skill and three 9th-level attacks. Not to mention the other magical skills of the protagonist, they are all in vain.

I didn't even accept Xiao Long Nv because I was bored and stopped watching.

TJ? 🔪

After seeing pig's feet going to Tibet to save people, I lost interest.

Add it to the bookshelf first, and I'll read it when I get richer 🤓

Another farewell to the system with intelligence and tasks

It's too hasty. About 10 chapters in, I travel through a world and become a eunuch. There is no layout at all, IQ is not enough, and I have to force myself to show off. Without a system, I would have died a long time ago.

The author of the original work is also quite good. I feel that he is not writing about human beings, at least not pure human beings...

The update speed is too difficult, come on!

Ask a question: Yang Guo calls Ouyang Feng dad, and Wang Yuyan calls Li Qingluo mom. Isn't this inappropriate? There was such a title in ancient times, but they were basically called father and mother, which always felt awkward. And I haven't seen people calling their parents mom and dad in the ancient movies and TV shows, which always feels weird. Maybe the original works have them, but buddy, can you make these your own? Can't you just copy it directly?

I hope that the protagonist's cultivation level will increase faster in the early stage, he will find more martial arts, settle down for a while, and then quickly go to the fantasy world.

After reading Chapter 15, I decided to give up.

The protagonist is a bit contrived. Without the will of the world, there is no so-called plot. Why should we follow the original plot? Isn't it inconsistent to take away Yang Guo's opportunity and ask him to follow the old path? Wouldn't it be good to let him live in the ancient tomb? Jianghu would not exist without Yang Guo

The ancient dragon's force value is higher than that of Jin Yong. First, write Tianlong, Shooting Condor, Divine Condor, Yitian, Xiaoao. Those who are writing about Gu Long are Da Qi Men, Xiao Li, Tianya Mingyue Dao, Jue Dai, and Lu Xiaofeng.

The black iron sword is made just because Dugu uses a sword. In fact, it is more suitable to make it into a stick. Besides, what is the difference between the epee sword technique and the stick technique?

Watching one update a day is not enough.

Another person who knows martial arts in the world of martial arts

Author, where are you from? What is your home address? Where do you live now?

The brothers have dispersed, already gg! No need to wait any longer!

The author doesn't know anything about writing martial arts, so he just said that the protagonist just joined the ancient dragon, and was forced into such a bad shape by two people. A warrior can reach the level of a grandmaster, and his actual combat experience is so scummy. If he rushes with the first move, he can instantly make up for it with the second move!

It's amazing how you can practice Lingbo Weibu without any internal strength. If you can still increase your internal strength while running, what kind of Beiming magic skill should Duan Yu learn? Writing blindly.

Damn it, Yang Guo called Ouyang Feng "Dad"? Can you please stop being so poisonous! You haven't written a novel, but you haven't watched any TV series?

Another one blowing the Dugu Nine Swords, I'm convinced!