Fantasy Life Since Prehistory

Author, when will this world end?

It's a pity that you were not happy on the day you met me. Maybe it was because we met too late. But I have to leave, but Nuan Nuan has to leave. Can there be another me behind you to make you happy? Hmm, what is the next sentence? Please popularize it.

First of all, I have to say, I'm hungry after reading the author's name.

I came back and looked at why the writing was so scattered (ㅍ_ㅍ) personal feeling The text is still attractive but The first problem is that the emergence of the golden finger and the new world is too hasty. There is no price for the golden finger and there is no mystery in the new world. The selection and setting of these various initial conditions could have increased the depth of the story. They can be used as foreshadowing or as a hidden line to suppress the progress of the protagonist. They can also directly enhance the look and feel required. The island has always been a potential point. I remember there used to be a game called The Island. Although the plot was rubbish, some people were still willing to play it (however, the sequel Ghost Ship has not been announced mmp), but at least it had a plot (ㅍ_ㅍ) The second problem is that there is no sense of strangeness. Think back to the first world What else can you think of immediately? The image is not very clear, isn't it? The lack of plot is one thing, and the writing operation is also a big reason. One of the highlights of game system writing is that the format highlights some things, making it easy for people to feel like they remember something. The third problem is the slow tone. This is a big problem and a hidden highlight. After all, there are very few slow style articles.

I feel like this should be turned into just a prehistoric survival novel.

The first volume seemed quite interesting to me, but it suddenly ended. . So Laifu.

Come on, to be honest, I like this type of novel very much, it's very good, come on

I just want to ask what the protagonist does when he first enters the prehistoric world? To hone your will? Exercise? Still don't have an outline, so just write wherever you want? Where is the value?

The protagonist seems to have never exercised himself, so will exercising help the protagonist become stronger?

In fact, the most terrifying thing about being alone in the wilderness is mental torture. That kind of loneliness will drive a normal person crazy. The protagonist is only physically stronger, but mentally he should be almost the same as an ordinary person.

Although I don't know what the prehistoric world was like, the creatures today are different from those in prehistoric times.

In the midst of dying illness, I sat up in shock, another short and weak update

Two male protagonists, Laifu and his feeding officer (manual funny

18 Years old... Wisdom, experience, and knowledge are not enough

The protagonist's soliloquy about the leopard is really watery

Write the main character's taste more clearly. Is it clear? [Funny]

There are still people in Big Pot reading your novels, don't take the opportunity to cut them off? ?

Now that I have read Chapter 72, I only have one question to ask, where is the golden finger? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? (●°U°●)​ At this moment, my heart is broken

It seems that in the first three chapters, the protagonist is smart, good at thinking, and very appetizing; finally, come on, the author↖(^ω^)↗