The Waves of the Prehistoric Water Flow

The writing is so beautiful. Author, you need to reflect on it. It's even more uncomfortable for me to follow you.

1. I suggest that Chapter 6 should be revised. I feel that it is not connected with Chapter 7 and it is a bit confusing. 2. There are some typos in the text. For example, in Chapter 7, you wrote "Sit back and watch the sky"; 3. I feel really speechless when writing about magic weapons. Can you not mention the Chaos Spiritual Treasures and Chaos Supreme Treasures? After all, the highest ones in Fengshenyanyi are only innate treasures. And don't you think it's inconsistent to classify Xiantian Lingbao into top grade, upper, middle or lower grade? I think the two types of innate spiritual treasures and innate treasures can actually be combined. Just set a total number of 108 pieces. Don't make the later innate spiritual treasures the same as the cabbage on the roadside, which would be boring; 4. Why is it so difficult to write prehistoric essays? It's because there is no way to write about saints at any level. You have already become the Great Luo Jinxian at the beginning. Are you going to write about the Three Thousand Worlds of Chaos and what about the Great Realm in the future? It is recommended to write slowly, starting from the heavenly immortal or the golden immortal, otherwise there will be nothing to see later.

Ten volumes of prehistoric texts and nine and a half volumes of eunuchs