Gundam: The King's Arrival

There is indeed a lot to write about in Tubbins, and the author has a good grasp on the plot. Let me make a few comments: First of all, there are "bracket explanations" that always appear in each chapter, which affects the reading experience. In fact, even if the author doesn't explain the reason, readers can still understand it. After all, people who follow the book are Gundam fans and have read it on TV and comics. If you want to add explanations, please add them at the end of the chapter and list them specifically. The second point is that there are too many typos in the article The third point involves the writing style. The vocabulary and sentences are relatively monotonous. For example, the dialogue between the protagonist and his women is relatively short and empty. It would be better if there was more humor; MS dispatch is the communication in the battle. There is only one word "understanding", which can be used as "received, understood, OK, don't worry" and so on. The fourth point is the setting issue. In the original work, the "Valkyrie Skeleton" is relatively rare, and what is the Vulcan cannon on the battleship? As well as the repeatedly emphasized high mobility, high firepower, high defense, and the Alaya Consciousness System, all of which we readers know, there is no need to emphasize it in every battle, just fight directly. Also, the armored transport ship Clover carries 40 mobile suits, which is too exaggerated. Tekkadan's transport ship Hotaru only carries 8 mobile suits in four containers. Generally speaking, 3 mobile suits can form a team. The author is recommended to read the Gundam Wiki-Iron-Blooded Orphans-Full Aircraft List, which contains a more detailed introduction to the airframe, including model and equipped weapons. For example, Tabings' "Warhammer" is an armored assault ship, model TIR-0009.

As soon as I heard Iron Blood, I wanted to sing Flower of Hope

I am a Gundam fan and read all the Gundam novels. As soon as he saw it, he decisively abandoned the book.

I am a die-hard Gundam fan, but I will never admit that I am a Gundam 😠

When I saw Chapter 4, I thought the protagonist had traveled directly to Tekkadan, but it turned out that he had traveled back to the original characters. Overall, I think it is better to travel to Tekkadan, and this is what I wanted to read, so I'm sorry, I can't understand this book.

I really can't stand it when I see the protagonist going to the Earth Circle for surgery! Author, why do you have so many ink marks? I opened a simulation with a lot of supplementary settings and shipped three mechas, which told the story behind the three chapters and the consequences of a certain commander. But what does this have to do with the protagonist! Who cares to watch these? Even if you want to write the setting, can you advance the plot first? Are you Hideo Kojima? There are more settings than games! If you really want to write a setting, you should enrich the background story. Explain the overall environment of the Iron-blooded world and explain the impact of the protagonist's expansion, the preparations made by the Tubbins when the protagonist left, the actions taken by all parties to deal with the anomalies caused by the Tubins, the protagonist's future plans for the Tubbins and Tekkadan, what difficulties Jim will encounter in setting and repairing, the changes in strength brought about by the integration of Tekkadan and the Tubbins, and how to remedy the increased risk of the ultimate goal being exposed due to the increasingly larger actions of the Tubbins. The impact of what the protagonist saw and heard on Earth led to the accurate positioning of his alliance with McKinleys, and for this reason, Tubbins adjusted the status of both parties in the future. This is called setting and supplementing, this is called detailed description! Do you know that this useless nonsense you ink on is paid for by subscribing to this book? It's okay to sleep and spend Qidian coins to watch nonsense! How about getting some useful information!

The author can change the introduction. The flavor of the stallion novel is too strong. I feel like it is extremely toxic even if I don't read it.

The author's writing is great, just wait for the protagonist to say his famous line "Do you dare to disobey me who has Agares?"

Iron-blooded Orphans, the last thing to fight is technology. Since the beam is useless, the floating missiles in the UC world and the electromagnetic weapons in all Gundam worlds are terrible. Why don't you, the protagonist (the author), pile them on the battleship with large anti-ship floating missiles, small anti-MS floating missiles, and anti-ship steel needles with a caliber of 2000 mm, and then equip the battleships with dozens or twenty Ahap reactors.

This is a rare Gundam fan, please finish it 😡😡😡