Wen Sao

I have read about 300 chapters, and here are some of the shortcomings of this book. The first point: the author's writing style is very good, and there are many funny jokes. Judging from the time spent writing these chapters, they are also very novel and interesting. Second point: The emotional scenes written by the author really left me speechless. Combined with what I said in the first point, the writing is very good, but I just can't stand it. My complaint is the Qiong Yao style of vomiting blood and the twists and turns of emotional scenes, but now we no longer like to watch Qiong Yao style of deformed love. Let's put it this way, it is not in line with the mainstream values ​​of today's society. The third point: The author writes that the protagonist travels through a hanging space (the Capital Library in the original plane with a carrying space), and then acts as a copywriter to arouse the excitement of the readers. The author has achieved this. However, the author has to add some unpleasant plots, such as Lan Xia's suppression of Feng Xuan. Since the protagonist is not willing to change his surname to Han to avoid it, he should straighten his waist. If Lan Xia suppresses him, then fight back (otherwise, the time travel cheating will be in vain). If it doesn't work, he can immigrate to the United States (the Chinese who travel through the plane set in the book are not inferior to others in the United States). What does it mean to have to kneel down in Lan Xia and beg for a title?

It is suitable for book lovers who are still in school, especially those who are still in high school. I had already gone to work and didn't have any sense of involvement. In the early stage, I mostly pretended to be with my teachers and classmates, hitting here and there with a hammer and a stick without any logic. And it feels like a collective brainstorming, full of loopholes. It's too poisonous to stand.

Poisonous weed. I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 34. It's too poisonous

At first glance, the title and introduction of the book make me reluctant to read this book. Come to think of it, it started out pretty well and was interesting. Look, something is wrong. Emotions are actually very difficult to write well. After reading more than a hundred chapters about the protagonist's love for his sister, I thought that if there was a plot in the future where the protagonist marries his sister and comes home, I would definitely abandon the book. Really. . . . If you want to be a stud, don't write about loving someone from the beginning. I feel like I'm a bit overthinking what it is. For old bookworms, the more they read, the more uncomfortable they become. . . Finally, I would like to express my thoughts. For this kind of novel that contains a lot of content from other works, it is still necessary to reduce the excerpts from other works, especially the excerpts from modern works. Concerning copyright issues, people generally don't investigate them, but if someone really wants to pursue them, it will be a problem. Including those fanboys and the like. Not authorized by the original author. Be careful when quoting

Shen Nong tastes a hundred herbs, guess which chapter I can persist to?

What should I say about this novel? Maybe it's because I haven't read a novel in a long time and I really can't understand it.

I just want to say that the following chapters have no idea what the author wants to express, and the writing is too shallow What he wants to express cannot be understood. For example, the conflict and interaction between the two people when they were making a replica of the horse and flying swallows, the three chapters did not make people feel what the protagonist wanted to achieve and his purpose. The main reason for being complained about in your comment area is your writing skills. Also, you should copy less elements you don't understand and add them to the book. If you have little life experience, you need to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses or read more. For example, the baggage in cross talk is called jokes For example, those plots that force a twist and suddenly suppress the IQ of the companion character Also, singles can describe less about women's hearts and emotions It's okay to write silly, white and sweet, but don't expose your IQ You will be laughed at

I found that the story backgrounds of many such novels say that the country cracks down on piracy and supports the genuine version, but the entertainment itself is mediocre. This is not in line with the market. If everyone supports the genuine version in the fight against piracy, it proves that the market is huge and money can be made. There will definitely be a lot of people who want to make money. Then the market competition will become more and more fierce, and the rubbish will be quickly eliminated. Only high-quality products can survive. Such a market may be more cruel than our current one.

Are there any bosses? Can you please list the chapters where the male protagonist and several female protagonists achieve positive results? Although I have just read the novel, my heart is as itchy as a cat scratching it now (✪▽✪)                       ๑v๑Hey hey Add some energy first, if you have any, I'll give you five monthly tickets.

It is a novel that I really like to read. Why does it require so much to read?😅

To be honest, the protagonist's family is really courageous. The protagonist's surname is Feng. Feng is the surname of the former emperor and the current royal family is still on guard against people with the surname Feng. The protagonist's family named the protagonist's company Ding Feng (Ding Feng). It's really cool! It's so cool!

Hello, I am the deputy chief physician of orthopedics in Germany. Do you want to reserve a bed?

I saw about two hundred chapters. I have some doubts and am not happy about it. I watched it for seventeen or eight hours continuously, and the more I watched, the more uncomfortable I became. I really feel that this book is a pity. —— What is the protagonist doing after traveling through time? Is it to make up for the lonely life of the previous generation? Or is it just to get a title so that you can open a harem? Or is it just for the sake of career? The main line becomes blurry as we look at it. If you want fame and fame, start your career as soon as possible. I'm really tired of reading "Three Doors" and "High School Life". One-fifth of the way through this book, the novel is only two months old? What I feel now is that I went to a very good restaurant for a big meal, but ended up eating some fancy appetizers for a long time. Is the protagonist short of money? Is it possible to make money by copying novels? If the protagonist wants a title, does he need to gain fame? Can movies, literary masterpieces, poems and songs be published? I didn't see the plot moving forward. I only saw the protagonist in Moji, various side tasks unfolding, but not doing anything serious. Just like I am short of money and just don't make money, I want a knighthood but I just don't work hard, so I just want ink. Buy a cat? Is this considered an investment? You write a notebook and a short book, but if it doesn't work, wouldn't you make more money by moving Marvel over? I really didn't feel any better or look forward to it after seeing it. At first I really read it word for word, but now I'm reading it in leaps and bounds. I really don't understand that there is so much to write about in a high school life? How many women appeared in the first two hundred chapters? I also like to watch harems, but I don't like to watch this kind of chaotic harem. Just like when you learn to walk, you start to show off. I like my sister, but Su Huan appears out of nowhere. Okay, I'm getting along quickly. I admit it. I'll deal with the speed of high school life and go north to find her. Is that okay? The result? Lu Xiaoxi acted like a lunatic, and Su Huan also acted like a lunatic and quickly went offline. Why can't it be handled one by one, woman by woman? Do you want to force a group start? I like my sister, and then work hard to settle down, make money, study, and go north. Wouldn't it be better to unfold them one by one? The rhythm is really messed up. During high school, I worked together with my sister to make comics, and then copied articles. I met Su Huan during my senior year of high school. When I got to college, I was able to win both sides, or make preliminary progress, develop in the direction of film and television, and then hook up with Lu Youxi. Isn't this okay? The plot advances and the story flows smoothly. Why do we always have to compete at a certain place and time? You can meet different women in different places, and you can also meet different women at different time periods. Why do you have to get together in the same place and at the same time? Adding difficulty to the game yourself?

I have read a little bit of this novel before. I remember that the male protagonist was in love with Han Wu, and then the star Lu Youxi, I forgot the reason, publicly announced that she and the male protagonist Feng Han were going to get married. As a result, the male protagonist actually said that he could not refuse, otherwise there would be bad consequences, and he actually agreed like that. . . . Don't say anything that will damage Lu Youxi's reputation, and don't say that you will be scolded by others. A female star who has no feelings and even has conflicts publicly said that she wants to marry you, and you agreed. Well, I give you a thumbs up. It's quite impressive.

In fact, this book is better to listen to. This is the best book I have ever heard. Himalayan members can listen for free.

I've read Chapter 40, the full text? Attending a wedding and being slandered by others, without even an apology. Nothing happened afterwards. I want to ask the author, what is your intention in writing about this incident, disgusting readers? It's impossible not to write about it. If you write about it, readers will be disgusted. It's really disgusting. If you can't read it, you've stepped on the wrong side.

There are 11 booster cards in total, all for you. Come on!

Old Buddha, I'll give you a reward of 100 yuan. I just ask you to let me die with dignity. 🙂

After trying hard to endure it for 2 days, I still couldn't help but give up. Except for the women's part, the other plots can still be watched. But this harem is really disgusting to me, and makes me feel like male pigs are scumbags. Among the several female characters, I hate Lu Youxi the most. No one is more like a bitch. In addition, I personally feel that there are problems in the creation of female characters. I feel that the author is a harem for the harem, and some behaviors conflict with the character's own personality positioning. Some young ladies are obviously independent in character, well-educated, and should have very upright views, but why do they secretly fall in love with a male pig after being in contact with him, and some are repeatedly exposed to all kinds of ambiguities. This doesn't make sense. A rational and restrained woman, when she knows that the other person has a partner (girlfriend or wife) and they are happy with each other, why doesn't she restrain her emotions and distance herself at the right time? Doesn't she know that she is being a mistress? Doesn't she have the courage to cut off her love? Arrangement is willing to travel thousands of miles to deliver it, but what about self-respect and self-love? Is it just to satisfy the male pig's vanity and give him the blessing of being a human being? Knowing that the other person has someone he likes, he still tries to seduce him and get involved. And there is more than one girl with this tendency. Now that I think about it, it seems that all three views are wrong. OK, what I saw was a hard-working mistress and a scumbag and a scumbag. I have tried very hard to abandon these messy emotions and read the plot, but I was still disgusted by the waves of mistresses and mistresses. Online novels, you either have to go with your heart or your heart, and the path of going with your heart also includes a heart-wrenching emotional drama. The rolling mudslide only made me feel that I am worthless. Author, you win. I have no objection to foreign (text) dramas other than relationships, face-slapping scenes, flowing water scenes, etc. I can still adjust my taste after watching them occasionally. The author's handling is still manageable and has a certain appeal. As for having a harem for the sake of a harem, it goes against the character of the character, and it's just called love, true love, etc., The author, it's true. You can either write frankly that it is a harem, or you can be more specific and don't let your feelings get mixed up in it. The current way of dealing with it is too annoying.

I read Chapter 228 in one go. What kind of ghost character is Lu Youxi? ? I totally want to persuade people to quit. Is it really okay that the male protagonist has such a tolerable personality? Is it because Lu Xiaoxi looks beautiful? Is it really better to not pay so much attention to marriage? I'm speechless. I wonder what will happen to Deer Young Creek in the future? Anyway, it makes me sick now! It's a pretty good book. Please give me some advice. Will things get better in the future? ┻━┻╰(‵□′)╯┻━┻

I have just read about 200 chapters, and I feel that there is not much in terms of writing. More than 80% of them are about the ambiguous entanglement between several women. Is the title of the book wrong? Is it "" rather than ""?

Do you feel like a mature beautiful girl?

The author made the same mistake in two consecutive books: not handling emotional issues well. Originally, both books were excellent works with clever concepts, wide imagination and good writing. However, both times they lost readers due to poor handling of emotional issues. How sad!

Oh my god, when I saw the scene where Lu Youxi forced a kiss and threatened the protagonist into a fake marriage, I knew that there was something wrong with this author. The collective wisdom belongs to yes. I managed to get through it before, but I didn't expect that I couldn't survive it after all.

This book is so powerful, it forcibly subdues your intelligence. Don't read this book with your brain in mind, especially the "Deer Young Creek", it is simply poisonous to the point of explosion...

In a harem story, you have to get a lily to cuckold the male protagonist, right?

It's over, Teacher Xiaomi is going to be killed by Feng Han! Old Buddha, what have you been feeling lately? Why are you pushing this girl like a bulldozer? Take your time! Teacher Xiaomi is so cute and you actually want to kill her. It's scary!

I have reached chapter 551 and I want to complain about it. Time Boiling Rain is also a plagiarism. I didn't buy the copyright when the movie was released. People heard it as a Japanese song called Windmill. The melody was not changed at all. It was just a Chinese version with lyrics. I don't know if they secretly bought the copyright later. Anyway, they didn't have it before it was released.

Anyone who likes to write about the major events of Lu Youxi, please help me to continue writing...

I read this book based on someone else's recommendation. I ended up dying of poison in the first dozen chapters. I said goodbye. I really don't know how those who said it was good read it until the end.