Catastrophe of the Demonic Dragon

I hope that the protagonist can truly become someone who can kill anyone for the sake of the great road. Don't just kill demons and let go of people. This world consists of your own people, enemies and passers-by.

There are very few novels of this type. To be honest, the evaluation of this book so far is quite in line with the standards. Among novels of the same type, it is the best choice in terms of level division, character creation, and plot foreshadowing.

Take a break from sentence segmentation and wording. Some sentences look very illogical.

Since the demon clan is the lord of heaven and earth, then humans are a branch of the demon clan. Why should they be treated differently? The language and characters belong to the human race, the aesthetic concepts belong to the human race, and civilized countries are mainly composed of ordinary people. Humans do not have the power of dragons and elephants, the speed of cheetahs, and the number of insects and ants. They become the protagonists through wisdom and creation. And demons are intelligent, just like humans. Why are you so on guard against people?

The sky is big and the earth is big. Eating is the best! If you can't support the children and old, what are your interests and hobbies? . , Provide good support for the young and old, only then can you be qualified to say that you are interested in fun

Three Golden Chapters. Author, look at how you wrote the first three chapters.

With so many Hualong novels out there, I can only rely on your creativity. The simplest thing is to go dark to the end, to help monsters and kill people, to be dark and inhumane. Or be more creative and have a good idea Otherwise, how could such an old-fashioned subject matter become popular?

It seems like those who give priority to fellow human race go away, or write the demon body and immediately transform into an ordinary immortal cultivator novel soon, or those who kill the clan are hesitant and hesitant but kill the demon clan without mercy. Let's wait and see what the author writes next.

In fact, there is little market for Hualong's novels. Too much

It's pretty cool, but the main character doesn't have a golden finger. How can I make him stronger?

To be honest, I like being transformed into a dragon, even more than a snake, but let's forget about the real dragon and Shenlong. Moreover, dragons are not strong in mythology, even in ancient Chinese legends.

I've been keeping it up. I took a look. How do you know if your grades will improve after just a few days after joining VIP? It is recommended to stick to it for 1-2 months. If your grades are still too bad, take a tj.

You can keep it for half a month to see if it can still go up. If not, just eunuch. I will continue to pursue another book.

The author should not be too lofty and ambitious. As the saying goes, you have to eat one bite at a time, and the road has to be walked step by step. Not to mention that you are a newbie and not famous, and you have TJ before, and updates are slow. Which great master doesn't accumulate slowly? Of course, if you want to make a living by writing books, that's a different story. All in all, I quite like this book.

The protagonist has long forgotten all about illusions during the fight.

Except for the thrill of counterattack in the beginning of the plot to Qingya Mansion, the rest of the plot is not good. Suddenly the protagonist becomes like a god, and then suddenly becomes low. It was a constant struggle, but the comfort was too low. You can let the protagonist struggle, but each small stage of struggle should give a reward and master the rhythm. There is also a plot that is very disgusting for male readers, that is, you hug the thigh! This is nothing at first, but you insist on a pimping plot when you hold your thigh, which is too disturbing!

Feeling pretty good so far, The author is also from Chongqing? ╯╰ Come on

I counted carefully and there were only 48 subscriptions. . . . Find the shadow area in the author's heart. . . . 48 Subscriptions is not bad, I feel good. . . After all, I am a newbie. . Not popular. . Make the effort. You won't be disappointed, and you won't faint in the toilet. . . . Let's discuss it

Tsk tsk. It's a pity that there is one less book to read. But I understand the author.

I really want to say, author, please stop writing books in the future.

Hey, isn't it TJ? Also gave out red envelopes.

I feel that the most important thing about a living being is his stance. He has his stance as a human being, and he has his stance as a demon.

After all, I am a newcomer, so I have few readers at the beginning, so I will accumulate it slowly. The story is very good

Keep at it. If you change your writing, you have to start over again. It's not very painful. The more you write, the more popular you will be.

Ha, I thought I was back again.

25 Fans, this is the result of people not being human, monsters not being monsters,

The author has already gone to serve the Queen Mother, so let me come in without wasting traffic.