Lu Lixian Ji

It is said that it is difficult to make a sound with a single hand, but the flames are high when everyone gathers firewood. This book is a few months old now. I hope you can give me some comments and suggestions. Whether it's about the plot or the writing. I believe that with everyone's help, this book will get better and better. Here, thank you in advance😁😁😁

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I just started reading it. If the author keeps writing like this, it will definitely be another good book.

The writing is very good, I feel like I want to keep reading!

I hope the author can speed up the update.

Is this a fairy tale book? The world of cultivating immortals is cruel, and the protagonist is so innocent. It feels like reading a text.

Continuework hard, I hope the follow-up will be more and more exciting🙂

The mortals parodied in the first few paragraphs?

The writing is so good that people are jealous of it

After reading the first few dozen chapters, the writing style is generally good, but the plot of the story is too old, and the pace is too fast. In the first few dozen chapters, the golden finger, the heroine (who is suspected of having a harem), and the spiritual beasts are all collected. At the same time, the golden fingers appeared too frequently in the early stage. There were three golden fingers in just a few dozen pictures (twice with copper coins to protect the soul and once with a spirit beast taking drugs), which showed that the protagonist was too incompetent. At the same time, although the protagonist has some experiences during the Qi training period, these experiences are written too concentratedly and the descriptions are not detailed enough, making it difficult for people to have a sense of involvement. It gives the impression that the protagonist traveled in the demon territory for three or four months, and then broke through in seclusion for three years.

Author, I read pirated copies, you won't come and beat me up😂😂😂

Personally, I don't like this lack of rigor. To me,

It's well written but updates are too slow. But anyway, this book is worth reading. I hope the author will work hard and write a full-length novel

One chapter has 2,000 words, only 600,000 words. The update is slow. This book is inherently underdeveloped.

Hey, did the author change the first three chapters? Why does it feel a little different from what I read before? It looks more rounded.

It's only 570,000 words after 1 year and 2 months of writing. Will you continue writing?

The author opened this harem too early and too quickly. . . . .