Legend of Xia Dao

I've been following it until now, so let me give you some thoughts. First of all, the style is very novel, and the martial arts routines and gun technology battle gimmicks are also very good. However, judging from the current performance, I only see the NB of martial arts routines. In comparison, the power of gun technology is slightly insufficient, and it is reduced to a supporting role. But since you said this is the first one mainly about Eastern martial arts, that's understandable. Overall, the pace seems to be very fast, the story development is not sloppy, and almost every article is full of useful information that can promote the plot. At the same time, due to the lack of water, the proportion of dialogue is large and the description of scenery is small, making it easy for people to not know what environment the protagonists are in. I think there's nothing wrong with the action description part. I think a lot of the action designs are quite interesting, especially the good and bad guys going back and forth during the fights. The description of body movements is quite detailed, which is much better than the novel where you shout "XXXX wave" and then roll a spiral pill to cause a one-kilometer explosion to end the battle. I hope you can keep up the good work and I will keep reading.

Hurry up and break out, writing is too slow.

Recommended votes are here, speed up the update

A book with connotation needs to be able to withstand loneliness, just wait until the word count comes up!

The author has a good grasp of when the plot should be fast or slow in the book, which is worth reading.

Good book, good book! Very beaky, I still want to see it after seeing it

I like the writing on this subject! Big cheers for the author!

That's great. It's not a bit hard for the author to write such a good novel. Come on. Looking forward to the update.

The writing is really good, the plot is compact and smooth, not bad!

I don't know how to comment, I just think it's so quick to write an article