The Battle of Heaven

If you can throw away such a good book, is this writer still a human being?

I have just read over 100 chapters. Let me start by saying a few words about this book. The content is very rough and the details of over 100 chapters are not very clear. There is also a sense of inconsistency. The Tianxing World Competition in it can be said to be completely uninteresting. First of all, the author did not clearly write down what professions there are and the skills of each profession. It's basically all written in one stroke. I suggest the author refer to "Thriller Paradise", which is about three days and two nights of sleep, but the writing about spiritual practice in Tianxing World is pretty good. To be honest, I could fall asleep reading this novel, it doesn't have any outstanding features. The above is my personal feeling, please don't criticize me, thank you.

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and the first half of the book is very well written, followed by the main character's memoir - Miserable - Qing Dynasty [Camp] - Poor. Start with sss, then punch Beihai Kindergarten every day, kick into the net and kick Qingshan Hospital 😢 It's not attractive and I can't stand it anymore. Personal thoughts after reading

1. The plot is too delayed, and the plot that should be concentrated and scattered is not handled well. Most of the chapter is an introduction. The author should let the readers read it, rather than just introduce it. For example, when writing about a cult and where the evil is, write it through characters, plots, dialogues, plots, lead it out, and open it up (I Eat Tomatoes New Book). Some authors who are good at it express the author's ideas and world setting through some dialogues, instead of each chapter, each chapter, and most of each chapter being an introduction to the setting. 2. The plot changes at the critical moment, look at the first sequence, look at the King's mercy, look at the Nine-Star Poisonous Milk, look at the Super God Card Maker, look at the Era of Summer Light... Looking back at Tianxing, I feel really uncomfortable. The iPhone The battlefield was laid out in Ming Dynasty, and other boring plots were written, and when it was continued, it was already halfway through the next chapter (the first half was used to write the setting, which was not coherent at all, and the author's other plots were also like this, such as Fengqing Bureau and Gambling Car Factory). The plot had reached a climax, but then he switched to writing something else. It seemed boring, dragging from about a hundred chapters to more than two hundred without reaching the climax. 3. I can understand that the author wants to practice writing, but why should he escape from reality? Even if he knows that he is not good at that aspect, he still avoids writing, and some plots are not explained clearly. For example, when refreshing a dungeon, why can records be refreshed? Why, first, always write down the details? When refreshing a dungeon, shouldn't you write down the details once? Even once, at least you have to write it the first time, and you can save it later. Another example is the settings of those professions. The main professions should be analyzed in chapters. If the introduction is not written, it can be discussed directly. Later, those few posts were all guided by online public opinion, and the discussions in the posts were too clumsy (I think they already have the power to control public opinion). It would be fine if it were like this for one or two chapters, but it would be very inkless if it were like this for several chapters. (Actually, it just needs to capture the expressions and language of low-level people, gangsters, small clubs of mid-level journalists, and people from the high-level National Development Administration, wouldn't it be enough to write in language?) Why is the author escaping? As for the college social competition, the author obviously lacks the ability to write about the battlefield of this kind of game. Many times he is not strong enough. From the back of one chapter to the end, he actually feels like he wants to skip the next chapter. It is perverted. There is also the question of why Tianxing is related to the fate of human resources, why games are related to reality, and whether galaxy resources are solved through games to solve the distribution problem. The relationship between Tianxing's virtuality and reality is not clearly explained. 4. Let's talk about the setting. The book is a good one. The themes of science fiction/games/ancient fantasy/urban are good. The author's idea is very grand, and he has turned so many themes into one book for practice. If it is written well, it will definitely be widely praised, and there will be great gains in writing. Maybe the author has been famous for making great progress in certain themes, eh... For example, the fantasy plot I watched was well written by him (Feng Chen), which is worthy of recognition. But it is a pity that the author is not very good at writing some subjects, or has very little experience. And maybe you feel like you want to escape, or the plot is too much, or you are not sure, you can't decide, or you have never written this type before. 5. What moved me the most in the book was the previous plot. Now, when I registered my own account and came to the Hall of Glory, I looked at the photo and told my life experience. I thought whose account was here is very good. The first one is to let the readers think about the identity of the pig's feet, how the pig's feet came to be in the first twenty years, and why the pig's feet did not have the setting of parents. The writing here is wonderful and strong. There is also a plot that is a reflection on mankind, the future, and a dialogue in which heroes are harmed by interests. It is also very strong. Another one is that our journey will never stop! This sentence is very burning! 6. I think the author should have his climax in every chapter of the book, but the author has been brewing, brewing the early stage, the early stage of the climax, and it can be seen that the handling of the climax and post-climax requires some practice.

With this plot advancement speed and update speed, can it be completed in ten years?

Books that are reread more than three times are fake! After following it for so many years, the verdict was actually good in the mid-term, but the detailed description was too complicated and collapsed, so much so that I committed suicide! I had sworn not to pursue the eunuch again, but I broke my promise. Take a look without any hope and see if your writing style has changed in the past few years. There are no tickets, not even one. Money will be spent, and subscription is compulsory.

Did this guy do it on purpose? Every time I prepare to delete the bookshelf, I add a few more chapters, this fat guy 😵

There are too many repetitive psychological descriptions, the plot cannot be advanced, and it doesn't look passionate. It's not like the level of a fat man.

It has been removed from the bookshelf, goodbye 🙏 Judging from your setting, your plot should not be the main plot. Your main plot should be in the professional league. But you are stuck now as you write this. No matter what your reasons are, I think you are more likely to be stuck in the future than you are now, so I don't want to wait any longer. We are well on our own, I don't care if you cut off yours.

Continuous updates 😍, keep at it, men must last

Update

Definitely be patient, no problem. Just write well.

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Hold the grass! What's going on? Updated? Resurrected? Or have I traveled through time?

I clicked on it with great expectations and exited cursing! ! !

The mission to kill S-class warriors should be this year's plot, and joining the sect will probably be next year.

I was just wondering, what is the author busy with all day now that the epidemic is so serious? Doctor? Not even a chapter has been updated! Is this not caring about the readers' feelings at all?

I'm a eunuch, I haven't updated in a few days.

0.03Am means tomorrow update 🤭

Will this test take a long time?

Qi Er, when will the ruling be updated?

The fight finally started, I hoped it would only take twenty-four hours. .

I almost forgot about this book, but I suddenly saw an update and came over to take a look with excitement. The result? A little disappointed 😰 I don't get any points for my update speed? Give such a long excessive chapter. .

😐😐😆 Still not writing?

It's too difficult. Brain-burning novels are harder to understand than suspense reasoning.

If you think this book also needs eunuchs, fine! You can just open a small account and update it! What's the point of being frozen like this? Just keep these two books and make up for them when you have ideas for writing.

Very good, the book has been added to the bookshelf. Please take care of yourself. See you in five years.

As soon as Seventy-Two opened a new book, everyone who read the book followed him and shouted: "Seventy-Two, your "Judgment" has not been updated for another two months!" He did not answer, and just said to himself, "The new book has been opened!" And then wrote out three or five chapters. Everyone deliberately shouted loudly, "There will definitely be eunuchs in the new book!" Seventy-two opened his eyes and said, "How can you accuse someone of innocence out of thin air..." "What innocence? Four years plus six years, less than one chapter in one month, and a bad ending, a eunuch." Seventy-two blushed, and there were blue veins on his forehead. The article came out and argued, "You can't be considered a eunuch if you are broken... I'm not a eunuch! ... I haven't given up yet, I don't know how to be a eunuch..." Followed by difficult words, such as "Western fantasy is difficult to write", "exchange of eunuchs", "explosion of saving manuscripts", etc., Which caused everyone to complain: the book review area was filled with a happy atmosphere.

The update of this book is extremely unstable, and it is normal to update it every one or two months. Don't be fooled by it being on the update list. Newcomers need to be cautious when entering the trap!!! Don't enter the trap if you have a bad attitude. PS. Once you fall into the trap, please be mentally prepared for a long-term cessation of updates, maintain your quality, and don't curse everywhere because there are no updates, pollute the environment of the book review area, and don't make personal attacks on the author.

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