The Transformation of Football

Come on, come on, your writing is really good.

The author's writing is quite realistic and not so systematic. Unfortunately, most authors now want to see the passionate side. The title of the book was wrong and it is not famous now.

The writing is really good. The shortcoming is that it is a little dull in the context of online writing, but it is still very good. Good luck, author!

The author is really honest. Slapping the media in the face is one of the most common tactics used in football writing, so I just skipped it. This book is less formulaic and more sincere. It is indeed a breath of fresh air.

I just watched the beginning, and I feel that the language is mature and steady, the plot processing is natural and concise, there are ups and downs but it is also very smooth, and the introduction to football is also very professional. It can be said that except for the regret that the protagonist's character is a bit boring, there are almost no shortcomings. To be honest, it gives me a personal feeling that it is even better than Lin Hai's novel, and the choice of depicting domestic football has a very special entry point. I also wonder why the results are so poor... But I still selfishly hope that the author can persevere and don't give up. It is really a new book that I haven't encountered in a long time. The last little comment is that I have only read Chapter 60 or 70, and there have been three different provocations and unruly women, and the protagonist calmly explained or responded back. Although the plot design of the three times is different, it does not seem to be repetitive and annoying, but the character of the unruly woman appears too frequently... I suggest that there be fewer such characters in the future.

There has been no interesting football article since Dleer, but this book is a surprise. Thanks for the recommendation of Longkong solomone. I will write a post tomorrow if no one recommends it again. Come on, author, I think this book will be a hit.

To give an opinion, I still need to write with a little more passion. It feels a bit bland. I can appropriately reflect the explanation, other people's perceptions, etc. You can learn from the book "Out of My Life". The protagonist's personality is very similar, but it's a little more irritating to read.

I read Long Kong's recommendation post a few days ago. It's rare to find a football article above the standard now. Good luck, author＾0＾~

I haven't seen non-system articles for a long time. Come on and update. One update a day is not enough.

This book is actually a relatively pure competitive text, with not so many system tasks and not so much pretentiousness. But the start of the domestic league does lose points. I personally watched it directly from Germany. Another point is the issue of the national team. I hope the author can think carefully about how to deal with it. Personally, I suggest that the national team should not score, but not if you are not a ball dominating player.