My Dream Is Strange

I feel that it has nothing to do with the first person. I think sometimes the first person can express some emotions that the third person cannot express. But the author, your writing is a bit messy. It feels like you are just typing on the keyboard with your mind empty. I hope the language can be organized better.

Unless the first-person writing style is that of a professionally published author, it will be overwhelmingly inconsistent and unmanageable.

The first person and a long paragraph of narcissistic yy look really...

The most basic thing is, if you first look at the founders such as Gu Long and Jin Yong, then look at Infinite, Confucianism, Taoism, and Xi Ling, you will know why no one writes in the first person. In the current novel world, the sense of substitution in the first person is too illusory, and it is not as powerful as the third person.

Ahem, you are better than me, I admire you.

Each chapter is too short, and there are attribute panels and so on. I feel discouraged...

To be honest, I was already attracted by his introduction, and after reading the first paragraph of writing, I felt that there was no problem, but..., The first person, I just paid my respects.

I admire this perseverance so much

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

Boss, just practice writing. Looking forward to the day when the boss becomes popular

Not many people will read the first person version.

I'm so used to the first person, I can't stand it.

Is it in the first person? It's a bit hard to read.

I feel like it would be more popular if it were changed to third person

This kind of novel with the core of the game is not suitable for waste material flow. Xianxia fantasy has time to develop. The pace of the game is much faster, but the protagonist is a weakling. It is impossible to see what attributes the protagonist has that can make him stronger. Moreover, the people around him are stronger than the protagonist. I can't stand it when I see the second novice trial.

One chapter is about a thousand words long. It's so short and contains data, so it's really quite informative.

It's not a problem to be in the first person, but I can't stand it if the heroine is a loli.

Damn you are so awesome. Keep it up.