Mobile Vertical and Horizontal

Brother Shimoying, if you continue writing, I will continue to reward you. Although I am not a rich person, I can still reward you. I just support a book I like and an author I admire. Work hard!

I can't say I couldn't stand it after watching the beginning. This book is not too poisonous. The reason why I can't read it is that I feel that the author is not clear about the positioning of this book. The protagonist is a genius with an invincible heritage. The dream is to protect the country from internal and external troubles. The biggest poisonous point so far, and the only poisonous point, is that the protagonist doesn't know what he is struggling with? There are powerful enemies outside the country, and there are major forces inside that only care about their own interests and betray the country. Are you so confused? Either join the army, serve the country, climb up the ranks, and then carry out reforms. Written in a passionate and refreshing way. Or stay out and become a hermit. Written as a farming article. Or gather a team and write a hegemony article. The result was completely different. Looking uncomfortable

I have only read the first few chapters, so I don't understand the rest. The author's writing style is definitely above average, and the various descriptions are relatively accurate, but there are also problems: sometimes a long paragraph describes the same thing over and over again, which can easily give people a complicated and empty feeling. To be honest, the author has no poisonous points in at least the first five chapters. Apart from the overly complicated description, the overall reading experience is actually quite comfortable. But it is also this lack of quality that restricts the development of this work. When I first read it, my impression was that there were no outstanding and impressive highlights, and there was nothing particularly bad about it. It was relatively mediocre. To put it simply, it is not attractive and will not make people abandon the book. Compared with other readers with clear characteristics, this book is less competitive.

Sheng Qiangwei ran away with someone else? Is it so poisonous?

I can only say that this book is mediocre, and I am not saying that this book is not good, but I didn't feel it at all because it was a very passionate opening scene, which made me easily distracted while reading. In a word, this book has no charm.

Was Blood Hunt written by the author? There are really very few high-quality novels about heavy-duty mechs.

Come on, author

... What's going on? Has this book been sealed for two years? The discussion thread is directly from 19 years. 3.9 Million words, 0 monthly votes this month, amazing.

What the hell? More than a thousand chapters and less than a hundred posts.

Judging from the first 50 chapters, the meeting between the male and female protagonists is very awkward. It feels like a high imitation of the Skeleton novel. I don't know what will happen next. If there is no Virgin Stallion in the back, it will be a good novel.

Come on, When I saw Death on Mars and Shirogane being cute, I suddenly remembered the science fiction category in my bookshelf, and I encouraged the authors one by one to prevent the science fiction category from becoming obsolete. When will Qidian science fiction rise? We don't need to be at the level of a science fiction world. It would be great if the average level can reach the level of dying on Mars.

A good book that people can read

It has been five years, 3 million words, and Chicken Next Door has 8 million words a year. How should I put it, there are a lot of blades. Think about it for yourself.

Just like the title, book lovers are welcome to participate enthusiastically.

How do you say this? The author always likes to switch back and forth between ancient and modern writing methods. Sometimes he says "actually, what can I do" and sometimes "TM", can't he be more normal? It looks awkward.

I just read Chapter 5, and I have various feelings of déjà vu: The orphans on the abandoned planet start - the legend of the teacher; The old man who raised him is unfathomable, plus the mysterious inheritance-Armed Storm; Mecha Academy + Galaxy Diva-Mobile Storm; I haven't read the rest yet, and other elements need to be discovered.

Instantly recalling his childhood, Gundam was the only robot that could attack Xiu twice in the later stages of R.

Your perseverance is so touching. ,. .

Okay, can you tell me everything and when will it be finished?

Chapter 1, page 1, the protagonist's name persuades him to quit

The word "" in the introduction made me instantly lose interest!

I read a chapter. Please, the author, don't write the book as if there is a ghost chasing you. Why are you writing in such a hurry?

I haven't read the book yet, but I just think this book review section is a bit strange. They are all praise-like modal particles. I'll go take a look, wait until I come out

This Emilia makes me a little speechless... Feng Yi has already expressed disgust with her, but is he still being pretentious? Although I knew she was Amy, the contrast between her before and after was so great that it made me tired of talking about her.

How many meters high is the mecha? I've been looking for it but haven't seen it!

I have a question, why is there more than 1,000 updates and no monthly pass?

I'm still updating it. I wrote it when I was in middle school and I'm about to graduate from college. I haven't finished it yet.

How can I put it? The author's level of this book needs to be improved. The principles of the three golden chapters were not clearly seen.

I have collected it. It's really beautiful. The quality of the big book is guaranteed. Please keep updating.

It can be seen that the author has made full preparations to write this novel. The road to becoming a god must be very difficult. I support the author greatly!