Time Travel Movie

I am still a virgin after living for decades, I admire you. Not see.

1: The contact with the characters in the plot is too blunt, as if I know everything. 2: All kinds of chaos in the power system are already visible. Why are they all set like this? It's hard to write without mentioning that the blind bear will definitely not be able to run away. He needs a lot of power, wears an Iron Man suit, needs mutant power, learns magic, internal martial arts, celestial and ninjutsu, and when fighting, the protagonist mostly fights hand-to-hand... It's all a cliché, and the protagonist's character is still unstable... This book...

To be honest, now that I have seen a book with a female supporting character, the book can basically be withdrawn.

The protagonist keeps increasing his spirit and strength, so why not increase his physical strength? Even if your spirit and strength are strong enough, how can you exert great power without a strong body?

The writing of the novel is average, the plot is average, and the details are average.

Water experience. . . . . . . . .

After reading Chapter 62, I was a little confused, what is the protagonist's goal? Isn't it important to improve yourself while completing the mission? Hanging around all day for Mao~

3 Missions done and no money yet. It's so rubbish. I'm a loser.

I thought Hong Lie was Hong Qigong, but I didn't expect that he would die early.

Personally, I think giving Li Jiayin a second one 💊I think it doesn't matter if the protagonist wants to like her, but the rest is really pointless. Because according to convention, if there is one, there will be two, and if there are two, there will be three. The points are exchanged by the protagonist's life, so I think it is best not to have two after having one, otherwise the protagonist will not be far away from death.

Author, I have no control over what kind of name you choose, but when I saw your pen name, I had the urge to scold you. However, the plot in the book should not be too deceptive, but the book is still very good.

If you still write about martial arts, you won't be able to get out, and you will ruin your own book.

Resistance is a kind of will and belief. For example, during the Anti-Japanese War, China was not strong enough, but it must resist. It is a road paved with life and flesh and blood! ! Of course, when you think there is no resistance, you have already failed! ! !

It's very well written, no one commented?

Wang Chongyang is at least 20 years older than the other Four Jue.

It's so poisonous. I endured it for 100 chapters but ended up dying from the poison. A little girl I only knew for a short time can influence the protagonist's thoughts. It's so damn poisonous.

To be honest, when writing a system, it would be a failure if the system cannot be penetrated, such as the store system that was popular for a period of time. It says that the protagonist will not buy anything, there is no need to exist at all, and the martial arts type gives martial arts, and writes about self-created super awesome skills, the system is useless. This kind of book that cannot even write the core is basically useless. If you write a Qigong practice, there is a system and you don't need it. If you have to stay in seclusion for ten or twenty years, then why write a system? Is it putting the cart before the horse?

The protagonist's behavior is so disgusting. He obviously has a system, but he still lives like a dog.

The author can go to Europe and the United States to publish the book. After all, one glance at the name will tell you that he is not Chinese. There is no limit to the Western fantasy. I really recommend the author to publish abroad.