Long Live the Young Hero

I think this is too boring compared to pretense. I play a few dumb tricks at the beginning, but I can write several pieces. If you are writing about the world of mortals refining your heart, there is another way of saying that you should write several chapters about refining your heart. It is purely for the sake of showmanship, just for a few bastards. This is too watery. It's too boring. It's not unreasonable to have poor results.

This book is very quiet, very clean, and very comfortable

There's nothing wrong with this book without the main character.

This guy is worse than those great masters. How much better do you think the results can be?

Chu Buyan cut off the official channels with a single blow, which could be regarded as clearing away the disputes in Jincheng. This is the end of Chapter 110 of the first volume. Everyone in the Su family is coming to the Central Plains, but they don't know what will happen in this rumored to be extremely mysterious land. Please watch, Long Live the Young Heroes Volume 2 - Central Plains Chapter. 🌹

After reading five chapters, I decided to give up. The author's writing is too verbose.

It's normal for this protagonist to fail in his ascension. He's almost like a fool. He wants to pretend to be a master, but also wants to pretend to be shameless, but he doesn't pretend to be the same at all.

When I saw the Su family and nursing home, my first reaction was that there was definitely a eldest lady, and then

Well, I originally wanted to write a related article, but I'm too lazy to write another chapter, so I'll just write it in the comment area. Although I also like the 'chapter talk' function, I just found out today that the chapter talk is not displayed in the comments, and I usually don't pay much attention to it on the computer. I checked it out on my mobile phone at night and saw the comments from several friends. Well, thanks for the suggestion. As for the person who said "water", well... I don't really like other people's water when I read books... Especially if I can express it clearly in a few sentences, I have to expand it into a few hundred words or a whole chapter... How to put it this way, due to time constraints, I can only update one chapter per day, and it is still late at night. The standard two thousand words may be because there are fewer words. Some of the things must be explained clearly (forcing myself), so it takes up some space. The progress of some chapters is indeed a bit slow. I'm sorry. I will add more when I have time in the future, so that everyone can be satisfied when turning the page. (Yes, I think it's a word count issue, haha. After all, I can't swim, and I don't have that skill in paddling.) As for the female protagonist... To be honest, there is no original design, or it is a "half-heroine" series. I read about Su Tian in the first two chapters. Well, she is just a 'mortal' after all. Some people say she is redundant, but I don't think so. And... With so many aristocratic families in Jincheng, if there is not even one outstanding woman, don't you think that would be a bit excessive... Every supporting character has its own meaning, and even if he is a supporting character, he may shine more brightly and move people's hearts than the protagonist in some chapters. This book has more than 100,000 words, and the number of words that actually describe the protagonist may be less than tens of thousands. In comparison, I prefer to write more about what happens to "mortals" in the world, and try to write out everything I think about, so as not to let him (her) go through this book in vain. Having said all that, it's too late. Although I used to be a bookworm and was used to staying up late reading, but after all, time has passed and the weather has been relatively cold recently. I have to get up early tomorrow, so I won't nag you anymore. Good night everyone.

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With all due respect, it feels like reading an elementary school essay

Great author, looking forward to updating soon

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This female character is written as a sb

After the identification, it is a bit poisonous. I can barely pass it by Shuhuang, and it is very watery. It is not recommended to pursue it.

The subject matter is good, but what the hell is it about?

I just want to know if there is a female protagonist?

Where do you live? Do you dare to tell me? I will send you a blade.

After reading Chapter 50, I probably knew what was going on. The author was looking here and there, and I was going crazy. Could he be digging a big hole?

Wu Po Xukong failed to travel to another world, what would happen if he succeeded?

Is your home the sea? Why is it all water?

First time hearing about ghosting legs? Nani(=_=)666

Although I don't know why it has one star, I looked at my bookshelf and found a few books without stars. I'd better take a look

How to put it! This book feels like it has no protagonist. There are so many things I want to write that I can't control! The proportion of the protagonist should be half after all! Directly related to him, it should account for 30%! How about being the protagonist? This book gave me less than 20% of the protagonist's presence! It would be okay if we could intersperse parts like this after a few hundred chapters, but at the beginning, after seventy or eighty chapters, I don't know what the main story is going to be about😊Alas╯╰