The Sword Listens to Blood Cold

Martial arts is a difficult subject to write about, but in the author's writing, it feels very flexible. He not only writes about the grievances and hatreds in the world, but also writes about the chivalrous feelings in his own heart. It is a rare and good article!

It's not bad, but for example, "Wow, I spit out blood", a wonderful martial arts scene suddenly turned into a cute style. But the martial arts scenes themselves are difficult to write, so it's not easy for the author either. Come on.

Will a single chapter be too long? And the single paragraph is also very long, which seems tiring, but the writing is really good, keep up the good work.

I think those who can write books are all big guys. Hello, big guy.

Really good👍

I have updated it since I read it, and overall, the author's writing style is pretty good. However, at first, Chu Yi's words were a bit trying to persuade me to retreat. The reason why I faced Ye Zhan again was a bit lacking for me. I feel that Tang Wan'er's feelings for Wang Fu in the back are a bit abrupt. By the way, how big is the Blood Shadow Gate? Having a chief rudder and sub-rudders can make the emperor think highly of him. Isn't it a bit too little to have a chief rudder with a thousand people?

Can a paragraph be divided into more paragraphs? It's so painful to read. There are hundreds of words in a paragraph.

I feel very good, at least my writing skills are better than mine.

There is just something wrong with the layout. It makes my brain hurt to read it. The dialogue in the first chapter, such as "", is too long, and then it branches into lines. The branches can be enclosed in "" again. There is also a sentence in the second chapter that is split into two lines. This is not a small problem. I won't talk about it in the later chapters, and I haven't seen it yet. But it's best to revise the first few chapters.