Chronicles of the Xiling Empire

I won't say much, just one sentence: It doesn't cost money anyway, just have some faith. (Funny jpg)

I started raising her in high school, and it's only chapter 87 now that I'm in college.

Set a small goal! Reached 300,000 words this year

It's been a long time since I've seen a fanfic of Xiling Empire. I think about it when I was in my second year of high school, I stayed up all night to read Xiling Empire for a week, and then of course I watched it for two weeks and three... So I hope readers don't fall in love with Xiling's name.

Emm, take a look. The writing style is up to standard, and it should be positioned as a cook. At least people who haven't watched hope Ling won't be able to understand it. If I wanted to give it a perfect score of 10 points, I would give it 5 points... Why... Because it is updated weekly. This speed is basically hopeless. Also, the beginning is very baffling. As the first chapter of a novel, what is needed is to quickly bring the reader into the story and understand the basic situation. For example, the protagonist's basic situation, living environment, and main world view. However, the author's classmate made me read seven or eight pages of dog food before he pointed out that the protagonist is a censor. To be honest, that doesn't mean that that paragraph is not well written, but it should be released to adjust the atmosphere after the story enters the main line, not at the beginning! What is a good beginning? In my opinion, a good hope Ling fanfic should be concise and concise at the beginning, and should not involve too many original settings. Those should be highlighted in the main line, so that students who have not watched Xi Ling can also read it and fully like the hope Ling series. For example, "Hao Ren, as his name suggests, he is a good person." Look, how concise and to the point. It can be called a model in the industry. The author should work hard in this direction. Well, the above is an evaluation from the reader's perspective. Let me give you some advice from the perspective of an author who has been writing books for two years. Writing a novel is a dead end!

To be honest, the character portrayal is a bit poor. After reading it, I don't know the abilities of the protagonist's family. Maybe I want to retain a sense of mystery. Unfortunately, since I am writing about the scene after the protagonist joins the Xiling Empire, I have to portray some of the prosecutor's abilities. I have to be very imaginative and insist on making my imagination bigger than my brain 😁. After all, after Xiling becomes a god, anything can be done, and then the Xiling Empire is a big background, but a small background (the planet where I was born) There is no introduction, and there is no series of stories caused by being there as a permanent resident at that time. The background is too huge, and it should be impossible to describe without the small backgrounds and character descriptions one after another. After all, the Xiling Empire is portrayed bit by bit, and then there are abnormalities. I admit that I was affected by the abnormalities when I suggested these to you. They all changed from small maps to large maps. There is no root and can only be seen in the clouds. After all, the official "fans" have preconceptions. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, I have to say that writing a novel is really difficult. . . (Personal opinion, pick up a few reasonable ones and read them. I'm just telling you my thoughts. I don't know if it will be helpful to you. In addition, you can add some short paragraphs to make the article lighter, more humorous, more warm, and brainstorming. The ideas of netizens are very powerful.) Well, that's it. I hope you can stick to it and write. Novels are really difficult. Firstly, I don't know what to write, and secondly, I don't know how to write. I tried, but I thought about it and wrote it for a long time, and it didn't reach 2,000 words. Then I despaired. The author had better write an outline to see how to arrange it reasonably, although it is reasonable in reality (who knows how to write an outline -_-||)