Ocean Century

Please correct me if there are typos, incorrect sentences, unclear expressions, or poor reading. Although the author also corrects some typos and sentences, he is busy writing subsequent chapters and does not check so carefully. Occasionally, when he looks back at some chapters, he still finds some typos and sentences, which makes him feel embarrassed. I hope everyone can inform the author of these problems discovered during the reading process. In order to improve efficiency, please leave a comment below this post and tell the author which chapter and paragraph the problem is in. If it is a grammatical problem, it is best to tell me how to modify it 😁✊ Thank you all.

Be prepared for danger in times of peace! The author's skillful writing draws people in, and he wants to learn from you!

The author's writing skills, plot setting, obvious conflicts, and very readable, good, I like it.

The book is good, but not enough to read.

It's a good book. I support it a lot.

Monkey look! ! Everyone in our dormitory was brought into the pit by me hahahahaha

The ocean world is both beautiful and cruel. This book is quite good.

The characters in the novel are well named, and the atmosphere and background are well created. I like it.

I saw the updated place, the idea is quite novel and exciting 😄😄😄

Although there are not many of this theme, each one has its own characteristics and will not make people feel outdated. There are still many innovative places.

Haha, congratulations to the author. I have successfully lured my roommates into the trap. This is the first time they have said that I have a good eye for choosing books.

Your profile is quite good, it's new, I'll give it a try and read your writing 😊

There are a lot of data errors in the article, so is the preface written by you, the author, the reason for your nonsense? (If you don't believe me, please read my message on page 9 of Chapter 4)

Hurry up and update. I'm exhausted from waiting. Please update, update.

It feels like a sequel from scratch

After reading a few chapters, I felt it didn't quite match the prologue. The prologue says that mankind is on its first expedition to colonize other galaxies. The game is mainly about selecting colonial leaders. This is a very great and serious thing. But this is actually a single-player start. It doesn't matter if the leader is an NPC, but the NPC doesn't even have any lines. And I feel that the writing style is a bit more relaxed and funny. With all due respect, if this continues, the leader chosen will not be a geek who focuses on game research. Moreover, the protagonist holds the lifeblood of the intelligent center, and in the end, he might even end up cheating, leaving the fate of 300 million human beings in the hands of a game like this. Even if the author has limited brain power and cannot think of all aspects of the leader, he can't be too unreliable. Although the novel is a game, the setting in the novel is to select the leader of the colonists. I hope the author will be more rigorous, or change the preface to change the topic of choosing a leader to what you can get at the end of the game if you play well. Otherwise, it would be really uncomfortable to read the main text after reading the preface. The above opinions are only personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like them.